All it was?||Chapter 3 Pg 16||13th April||

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Interesting prologue. It seems this story is about a loving couple who has had a rough time and the husband wants to mend their relationship. He comes prepared to woo his wife only to find her missing in their home. Shocked and broken he destroys everything. Would love to know the character's names.

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maneetarsh

@maneetarsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Amazing prologue, maan wants to get of the past miseries and have smooth life with his wife and she left him. If it is geet his wife I think there should be a valid reason for why she left him.

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Maangeet

@maangeet.gmmg

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

waiting for next week I really like all ur stories looking forward for it

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Maangeet

@maangeet.gmmg

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

lovely story waiting for the next looking forward

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Congrats on another story! wow publishing author! all the best! well deserved! 😊 lovely banner! interesting concept! He is ready 4 a new beginning oblivious to reality! he is shattered that his love left him! his agony well portrayed! should he not have expected this considering that they had issues. perhaps her leaving is justified! sometimes things cannot be fixed! Is it all over or...? waiting 4 the story 2 unfold.

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

interesting...so who is his wife ??? why is gone

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Seems like that new beginning is more like a ending fro good, but know you have a lot in store!

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

The banner and prologue look very intriguing... the story shows the man is looking forward to a new start in his troubled life... wife and husband have faced quite a lot of miseries, but it seems she has opted out of the relationship or wonder if she has been forced to leave him and go away so that he can come out of his problems... I do not know if that is true or not but am very interested to see what the next update will bring for us...
Thnx

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Congrats for new story
Nice prologue
A person is very happy he is thinking ki wo last two months Jo uske aur uski wife ke liye acche nahi the isliye wo apni life ko phir se start karenge aur wo apni bee ko propose karega aur dobara uss se marriage karega
But jaise hi wo ghar pahuchna hai uski wife usse chodh kar jaa chuki hai
Now he is all brokn by his bee
Beautifully written

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Congrats for the start of new story. Your are going to publish this as a book. Congrats for that also. All the best for publishing this book.

Prologue - so he wants to rectify the mistakes that went wrong bet them. But she already left their house. He left heart broken. What went wrong bet them.? Waiting for the story to unfold.