All it was?||Chapter 3 Pg 16||13th April||

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ja1970

@ja1970

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Interesting prologue. Who is Bee. They some marital issues which he wanted to resolve and go back to the initial days.

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

CONGRATS FOR NEW STORY

INTERESTING PROLOGUE

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

LOOKING FORWARD TO READ THIS STORY

AND CONGRTS IN ADVANCE FOR PUBLISH THIS STORY

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286pearl

@286pearl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

I liked tht banner... it make me curious abt ...

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286pearl

@286pearl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

tht start is just rocking...
he wanted their marriage work Thier s a hope...
but his wife ... she just simply walk out?
curiously waiting to unfold d story...

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Sounds interesting. But does feeling of love changes so drastically? If he really wants to make up for their tough or bad times, he should find her first and try to make her understand.

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anum fahim

@aqvum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Wowww... A new story... And ur are going to get it published thats an awesome surprise.. So reading it will be like reading an ARC.. Em super excited and u want to publish it by the end of uear so lots of updates will be coming.. You just made my day..
So maan wants to get remarried with his wife thats just super sweet but its sad thats his wife left him.. They faced some rough patches really curious to know about it.. It seems that they have a communication gap thats y where maan thought that they could move past their issues n be happy but his wife doesnt seem to think the same so left him without so much as a parting letter..
Really eager to read more.. How maaneet will meet,. So plzzz update soon...
Fb id: anum fahim

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

A different theme.

I am curious to know who is the man and his wife. Its difficult to guess. The wife may be Geet or cant be.

How was he so sure that his wife left him. Were they having a difficult period in their marriage??

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priyankadwivedi

@priyankadwivedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Nice prolouge.. who is he married to.. is it really geet who left him without talking.. he was so much eager to start new life but everything shattered.. hope she have a valid reason for leaving...

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umaa

@uluvmg

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

congrats for New Story(ff)...thanks for lovely banner with interesting prologue..he was shattered (well described) his lovely wife left him... they had issues...he was ready to start a new life but... excited to reveal the story...All the best for publishing this story as a book...!!