All it was?||Chapter 3 Pg 16||13th April|| - Page 5

Oh first of all am glad am first
And about the part...nice start to what seems to be a very gripping story...
Anjali...maan...nice
I must say i was expecting geet to be his wife agter i read the prologue..but this new angle seems to be pretty exciting...
Maan has been looking for her...he really wants his marriage to work
All the other characters sound nice too

Congrats on a beautiful story
Looking fwd to it

Prologue sounds interesting

Lovely update so Anjali is a waitress Gemma her good friend wants her to get laid by a guy who was salvating on her but Anjali not interested I absolutely loved Gemma she is so interesting Anjali going through her mails when a similar situation came Infront of her how she left her own husband she did feel someone watching her but choose to ignore she was driving away when she saw her husband maan who finally found her

superb part anjali n geema r friend n working as waitress gima talking to anjali abt boys but she is not interested in it anjali is going is through the mails see wen a similer situation is infront of her hw she left her hubby anjali is going wen she saw a shadow wen it comes to clear veiw its maan anjali hubby anjali shocked is geeta anjali anjali short name is my guess right is that wy anjali left maan wat was the reason update soon waiting for tbe next part very egagerly well superb part

SUPERB UPDATE

omh omg such amazing piece of writing .Geet not replying to her mom strange keep up the gud work

Hey there...thank goodness you disclosed atleast partial suspense that the figure was Mann...I was going mad thinking what's happening/ Guess tha'ts what happens when you jump into story headfirst directly onto the chapter without reading the prologue...okay m gonna read it now...waiting to read there story further and where does geet fit into the equation? ya ya waiting for more things to be unveiled... Nice and tight writing...nothing superfluous...umm if you could just add a a line from anjali's perspective on who Jess' boyfriend- who and what he is like...like her take otherwise the name seems to pop out ...okay maybe I am nitpicking ...sorry if you didn't like..it is just that you said you are gonna publish...Just a query? what's with having an FB account?

Really nice start

Awww its so interesting!! So anjali is working as a waitress and she was married with maan...I guess the drunk guy was him??? She shares her place with aroommate and has a good life...I wonder why she left him? There has to be a reason...waiting!!