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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Part 3

wow its so interesting...

they have a wonderful past... how they met n after meeting was so intersting where maan flurting with her n she dont gave him any...

anyways for him she is his angel... so cute na!

waiting for next

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#142

What a fun update this was.

Maan flirting with Geet at first sight. Is he smitten by her? ??

Geet didn't find it funny at the way he was teasing her. Giving him a tough fight.

I enjoyed their meetings. They were entertaining with Maan flirting with her and Geet answered it with her witty comeback. She has a wild streak in her which I can see as she actually punched him a little and called him various names.

Oh I can imagine Maan with blue eyes and curly hair. He looks hot. And even geet can't resist accepting it though in her head only.

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vrishtigoel

@vrishtigoel

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Part3 ., i find geet so amusing .. She is all worked up all the time .., and her language :P.. I just love her attitute ., and i am equally amused to see this flirty maan with his befitting replys .. Jus perfect to shut geet up... But what went wrong.. Here maan looks like the more mature and calm one.. Whereas in present , it looks like geet is hurt coz of him.. Like he doesnt understand her.., though ssge is the one who left him butvthere must hav been a reason ..

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#144

it feels amazing to read again u writing ... i heartly appriciate your writing skills .. ur concepts are very different .. n here u playup with a new combination ... anjali n maan ... well pro showed tht he is eager to meet her n said her tht he love her so much but unfortunatly she left him without saying him anything.. it gives him immenc pain..

she s working with her friends bar.. some guy r coming over their for her but she s not interested... her friend s very good to her...

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#145

part 2

i m glad to read tht part ...still their r many hidden reasons behind tht broken narriage..its seems she s not surprise to see him but i feels she dont want to face him.. thts create curiousty why she behavedb like tht. its clear tht maan loved her so much but question still remain if he loves her tht much then why she took tht drastic step without his concern...

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#146

part 3

wow glumpsevof their past cleared how n when they met first n whts their trye feelings for each othere...here maan is so flrty n cristal cleared abt his feelub

ng... but to apni naak pe makhhi bhi nai nahi bethne detu

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anum fahim

@aqvum

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#147

All it was 3
Awesome update.. Geet is shocked with seeing maan and cant help but remember their first.. It is so beautifully written.. Their past is amusing with geet being hating maan but also finds him incredibly hot.. Their forst meet and geet is so angry with him on veing an asshole n just staring on her boobs n get further irritated knowing he is jacqui's czn.. They again meet when maan is their to pick jacqui from college n geet just cant take his attitude.. Really intersting.. Would love to read how maan will make her fall in love with her.. Plzz update soon.. Em really loving thiss ff..
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