PYAR KE EHASAS THREAD 3 ,note on page 129 - Page 27

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Posted: 8 years ago
maan finally seeing what a beautiful family this is and how close the motherinlaw and daughter inlaw are...and how caring they all are to each other...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan gets to see a real family love. Let him regret for some more time. Ram is saved at the nick of time. Every girl should be like Priya handling stuff bravely.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part..Maan see how family take care each other..MAan wants to go with Geet but can't go..I hope they keep him with them..Maan stay near his family..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous update. Maan disguised as a driver to get the job and helped them. He was astonished to see the love and bonding the family members share and felt guilty to have doubted Geet. He became emotional thinking about Manasi. There is a long way to go for Maan before he can approach Geet to seek her forgiveness.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Loved it!!
Maan disguised himself as a driver to get job and to stay close to them
He realized the meaning of family seeing their love and warmth each member shares
He was feeling guilty after knowing the true meaning of geet and Yash's relationship and to think low abt geet
Maan is surely regretting his deeds but he needs to travel long way to win his love back
Thanks for the pm dear
Will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey dearie 😛
I m new here
I just read story so far of
Pyaar ke ehsaas
I liked it...
Maan n geet married as her lyf was in danger
N their separation 😭
Only due to the misunderstanding
So sad ...
Maan not knew abt geet anymore
he came to know about her daughter
Being in guilt know 😭
Want to read ur story
Accept my buddy request for PMs in future
I ll be glad. 😛 to read ur this work n others too
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Posted: 8 years ago

previous: part~69


PART- 70

He immediately left the place, controlling his emotions

From the last half hour yash was trying to call anjali, but she is not picking the call, he knows he had hurted her, but he cannot help it out.how can he tell her, when she takes everything to heart, and even he will not be there to see her,

With shriek sound of cell, geet woke up

What happened yash, Anjali is not talking with you

Hmm.

That is why you are calling me, at this time..

Please check karo na ..what happened to her, I was trying to call her since lat half hour but she is not taking the call.


This has to happen, you know that, you kept her in dark, and she is angry on you,

Geet I know that,

you know the reason and now you have to suffer,

are geet please help kardo na...please...

when geet entered the room, she saw Anjali was sleeping,

yash Anjali is sleeping, I cannot disturb her sleep...she is looking so tired, let her, do not disturb..

I know anju you cannot sleep., I know this time I made you angry and unhappy ..oh god what will I do now, drifting into his thoughts he once again checked raam, who is sleeping with the sedative effect.he made a note in the mind that he is going to manofy his angry bird.

Priya was surprised seeing balwant early morning in this house, she even did not think about this, appointing him as a driver,

Balwant ji till now I did not think about this,

It is okay aunty , I know the situation please you do not take stress about this issue, you please concentrate on uncle health , once he is fine you can talk to him,

May be he is so much needed a job that is why he is coming like this..priya could not able to think more than that .

Maan eyes went immediately on manasi, was coming down,

How could any one be so cute in school uniform..she has gone on her mother, hair ,lips, how could any one could so cute in a pout ..he just want to her into his arms ,hug her, kiss her show all the affection,

His trance broke down with pari questions,

Mama who is this uncle..why he is here..what he is doing here

Question bank, just now you came, and started yours question

Mama dekho..di is teasing me,

Are mera bacha..maanu why are you teasing her, are mera bache came to me,

Pari went into geet lap..

His thoughts went on the day in the mall..seeing pari in geet lap, and calling her as mama, how he misunderstood her,

Mama ye koun hai...

His eyes went on manasi..enjoying their morning rituals ,

Pari stop your questions and take your milk now..hearing Anjali words,

Mummy I do not want that ..

Pari chup chap dhood peelo..tang mat karo..

Hearing Anjali angry voice, pari caught hold geet neck..and try to hide her face in her embrance..

Anju is everything okay,

Hai di..everything is fine

Manasi came near to pari and passed milk glass, pari jaldi se pelo , other wise we will become late and will not able to catch school bus.

Hearing those words, pari took the glass .

Maan was seeing all these..she is so caring just like her mother,

He saw them going to out of the house , to catch the bus which was was arm distance from the house...

He could not control himself, he too followed them, geet was bidding them bye, stopped nearby to bring the milk ,

Geet was surprised when priya handed her coffee,

What happned ma , where is anju,

I told her to get ready, to go to hospital ..,you too go and get ready.even balvant had come,

She simply nodded..

He could not ask more, when geet was sitting beside her, he tried to control the urge not to remove the duppatha which was on the gear ,unknown to this, geet eyes were facing windows, she was lost somewhere, in deep thoughts..he slowly moved duppatha, crushing his urge to take into his hands keeping aside that he concentrated on driving

What happened to her, what is bothering her.

Every one are seated in Doctor chamber waiting for his words,

Priya does raam is taking any tensions.The Doctor who is good family friends knows in and out about them..

Geet was silently hearing those words, .

Priya there is something which is troubling him a lot,you know which is not good for his health, you know he had already under gone a Bypass surgery,

Due to sudden death of pari, raam who was very close to his daughter,could not take that loss , went into deep depression and other health issues made him to undergo heart operation .

Priya..i do want to keep in you dark, he got heart attack, there are 2 Doctors in your house, so you know how take care,

Make it point that he should not take stress, and make him happy..

But geet was lost in doctor talks,.

maan did not understand ,what is that raam was taking so much, he heard everything , standing outside.

Raam was discharged today, almost spending 10 days in the hospital, everyone were trying hard to make him happy.

Maan eyes went on the main door, he frowned seeing Rahul there..nowadays he became frequent visitor to the house.

Rahul why you are standing near the entrance, come inside,

How your health uncle,

Iam fine beta, now I have come to house..so I will be okay, I hate that hospital smell, I do not how these doctors work there.

Papa...

Seeing glaring of priya raam became quiet,

Uncle please do not take any stress,see we are there here, to take your stress, haina geet, taking geet hands into his..who was sitting near him

Maan blood boiled seeing this ...he just want to straggle that person, he saw how he is caressing geet hand, she was struggling to remove her hand from him..

Papa I will bring you tea..saying that she immediately took her hand from him and left .

In these 10 days maan observed that something is disturbing geet and something she is hiding , he had to find out that.

After taking tea, Rahul left the place .

Damit with this geet, how dare she behave with me like this..how dare she remove her hand from me, and she did not give tea cup in my hand... Geet has became obsession for him. What happened to old person ,did he talked geet, , I think so he did not talk , bloody hell with his health, because of that he had joined in the hospital ,when he will talk to her, in his obsession he did not think about right or wrong, he just want geet .

In his obsession Rahul did not see that, raam has just came from hospital .

He even do not know that he was reason behind Raam heart ache..

That day morning ..Raam was arguing with geet ,pesturing her , convincing her, not for her, but atleast for the sake of manasi, who needs a father care.she should consider .marrying rahul

Arguing with geet he collapsed...


Next~part-71




Edited by rsusmita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Really nice update... For ram? geet agree for marriage

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