PYAR KE EHASAS THREAD 3 ,note on page 129

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story so far
maan tries to control his feelings seeing geet in the place of his brother wife... but get shocked when dev lost his life before marriage, and geet suddenly disappears from the place, he tries to search for geet as per the will instruction of dev transfer all his shares to geet, so geet becomes half of the owner of kc. but after 2 years of searching maan finally meets geet as the girl who dadima has selected for him, maan tries to avoid the marriage, but geet aggress to the marriage putting some condition to maan, maan too agree to marriage, seeing that geet life in danger . but he never cross his limit , but slowly he starts loving her and in one situation they become one, but maan comes to the truth that geet has hided from him, Vicky dev and merra son, but maan misunderstand geet and thinks Vicky who calls geet as maa , dadima fells sicks when she comes to know all about these
maan gets angry on geet as she hid the truth about Vicky , geet tries hard to tell him the truth but he never listen her and he leave her in the railway station
geet tried to suicide but yash a doctor saves her , and takes her to his place in Bangalore who invites her with open heart , geet comes to know about her pregnancy
will geet and maan meet what the destiny holds for them,

destiny again brought back them together, maan was shocked seeing geet working in his firm in baglore.unaware about manasi is his daughter he is bonded with her, but still there are so many things,maan is still angry with geet not believing her.
now what holds in maan geet life, will they ever able to come closer.



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CHARACTERS

SAVITRI DEVI:

65 YEARS OLD LADY , VERY RICH KIND HEAR TED , GENEROUS LADY , LIVES IN HOSIYARPUR ,SHE IS LIKE HEAD OF THE VILLAGE, DEVELOPED THE VILLAGE A LOT ..OPENED SCHOOL AND COLLEGES FOR THE WELFARE OF THE SOCITEY, HER ONE WORD IS ENOUGH FOR THE VILLAGERS TO OBEY HER ORDER.CAN DO ANY THING FOR HER

MAAN SINGH KHURANA:

MD OF THE KHURANAN CONSTRUCTIONS, WHICH WAS ESTABLISHED BY HIS GRAND FATHER (HUSBAND OF SAVITRI DEVI ) CONSIDERED AS ONE TOP MOST FIRMS OF INDIA, HE EXTENDED HIS BUSINESS IN OTHER FIELDS ALSO, 24 YEARS, HOT SEXY, HANDSOME ANGRY YOUNG MAN

AT THE YOUNG AGE HE TOOK KHURANA CONSTRUCTION TO IT S PEAK

DEVMALHOTRA :

26 YEARS ,GRANSON OF SAVITRI DEV(DAUGHTERS SON) WHEREAS MAAN IS SAVITRI DEV SON'S SON, AND DEV IS DAUGHTER SON BOTH ARE COUSIN , LOVES MAAN A LOT, HE IS KIND OF REBEL, WILL BE THE FIRST PERSON IN HELPING OTHERS , ALWAYS WILL BE OUT OF THE HOUSE

MEERA :

SISTER OF GEET , VERY HELPFUL MORE WILL BE DISCLOSED IN THE FUTURE

GEET:

20 year old

SISTER OF MEERA CHEERFUL, LOVELY,BUT AT THE SAME TIME STUBORN GIRL, WILL GO TO ANY EXTENT TO FULFILL THE PROMISE , SHE HAS DONE

NAKUL:

SERVENT ,BUT HE IS MORE LIKE A FAMILY MEMBER , IT IS LIKE THEY ARE GENERATION SERVING IN THEIR HOUSE, LIVES WITH DADIMA IN HOSIHARPUR

KALI DI:

WIFE OF NAKUL STAYS ALONG WITH HIM WITH DADIMA

VICKY

SON OF DEV AND MEERA

RAM KAPOOR
A KIND HEARTED MAN , A ARCHITECT, HAVING SMALL COMPANY
PRIYA KAPPOR
WIFE OF RAAM KAPPOR , JUST LIKE HER HUSBAND , A DOCTOR BY PROFESSION
YASH KAPPOR
SON OF RAM AND PRIYA WHO HAD SAVED THE LIFE OF GEET AND BECOMES A GOOD FREIND OF HER
ANJALI
WIFE OF YASH (GOING TO BE SOON)
MANSI
DAUGHTER OF MAAN AND GEET

PARI
YASH AND ANJALI DAUGHTER


MEHATA
ONE OF THE DIRECTOR OF KHURANA INDUSTRIES

NAINTARA
DAUGHTER OF CHOPRA ,AFTER THE DEATH OF CHOPRA MAAN MADE HER THE DIRECTOR OF THE COMPANY

SRIKANTH
CHIEF SECURITY OFFICER

ADITYA(adi)
TRUSTED EMPLOYEE OF THE KHURANA INDUSTRIES ,WORKING SINCE GEET TIME

SASHA (CHIEF ARCHITECT )
HAS LOT OF EGO, TRY TO IMPRESS MAAN AND MARRY HIM
PARI DAUGHTER OF RAAM AND PRIYA NO MORE

BHARAT
PARTNER OF RAAM IN BUSINESS

RAHUL

BUSINESS MAGNET

THESES ARE THE MAIN CHARACTER OF THE STORY


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PART-61


Maan was received with due respects, The MD himself came to receive him, he was introduced the institutions head who was a swamiji..he himself was pethadipati of the ashram.which is in kengeri.Maan was shocked seeing such a young man not more 3o years, was a golden medalist in reputed IIM , has taken this path, and became sanyasi...if he want he would have easily got an employment in any reputed MNC companies, but choose this path.

The function started with swami ji and maan lighting the lamps

Programs started, maan was sitting along with swamiji and watching ...there was something in the air, after so many days he was like enjoying kids performing ...he was talking with the swamiji ,

Swamiji if you do not mind can I ask one question.

He just smiled at his question, as if he knows what he going to ask

Yes Mr.khurana..you can free to ask any question,

Why you have taken this path, when you are gold medalist .when any company would happily would like to give opportunity to work with them

Mr.khurana money is not everything ,it will not give happiness,did you got happiness by having wealth , looking at his eyses.

maan shuddered with his intense looks as if he boring into his heart, as if he can read his mind..really did he felt happy after acquiring so much wealth

.Mr.khurana see these kids, they are so innocent, enjoying the life, they do not know anything about money ,

Maan was lost in swamiji talks, yes he has achieved everything, bringing his companies to heights, and acquired so much wealth, but did he got happiness..When he sent geet away from his life..Knowing he was correct, then why her blank eyes makes him hurt ..

Mr .Khurana believe in your dreams, there are people still waiting for you at the other side of the road.

Maan was shocked hearing those words from him, before he could ask him,

His attention drawn by a beautiful voice, yes manasi, how can he forgot her face, he was so much lost in her voice.

Goodmorning respected swamiji , chief guest Mr.Maan singh khurana, teachers and parents, today we are going to present a small dance drama., taking a quote from adi shakarcharya who was considered as adiguru

Kama Krodascha Lobhascha Dehe Thishtanthi Taskarah Jnana Ratno-paharaya Tasmat Jagrata Jagrata.

She was singing so sweetly

Desire, anger, greed, attachment, pride, jealousy"these dacoits are residing within your own body. They are not outside. They are residing as fifth column enemies within you. And, why are they there? To loot you of the Jnana-Ratna, to rob you of the precious gem of spiritual wisdom or atma-jnana, to loot you and deprive you of the precious gem of Self-awareness and make you forget your Self and weep and wail and be in ignorance. In order to deprive you of this jewel of atma-jnana, they are there. Therefore, oh man, oh Sadhak, Jagrata, Jagrata. Beware, beware. In this way, from the submerged level of the chitta or the deep within, various samskaras and vasana are brought into activity.

Even one ,two qualities are enough to destroy a maan,

She narrated about a story of a king who in his pride , ego, could able to build a empire by waging wars but lost his dear ones,his wife .

Dance ballet started,manasi was playing as queen, king was waging war against others, queen was trying hard to stop him, but he was not listening ..in his ego , pride ,he continued to expand his kingdom, in one such such time, he came to know that In absence all his enemies have united and waged a war against his kingdom..he immediately rushed to his kingdom, he saw his wife was leading the army and trying hard to safe guard the kingdom..but before he could go there, he saw one enemy soldier has back stabbed her ,and she fell down

Immediately king rushed towards the queen ,but it was too late...after losing his beloved queen he realized her importance, in his ego and pride , he lost her..

There was loud applause from the audience, play made a deep impact on maan thoughts, first swamiji words , then this play.as if there is something which the god wants to tell him.

The melodious song sung by manasi made a soothing effect on his heart ...

Mr.khurana...maan came out of this thoughts ..when swaji called him,..are you liking this programes .

Ya swamiji liking them a lot,

You know khurana this girl is lucky charm for her father ..

He did not understand ..by his words...

The mole on her right cheek ...her father wealth grows along with her.

At the same time he heard about prize distribution programme. Which they requested him to come and along with swamiji..they are distributing the medals and certificates...maan saw manasi standing near the stage, looking so cute in the dress which she wore in the drama, it is like a queen attire, he saw her coming on the stage...

Then he heard the announcement about her getting gold medals in the national level projects, science olmpiads, she represented school in badmation and won the medal, maan felt elated when she was receiving so many medals,..she bend and took blessing of the swamiji..maan felt unknown happiness when manasi touched his feet , he immediately took her into his embrace, and wished , giving a peck on her forehead ..

He saw her getting down and rushing may be she want to show her parent, may be proud parents seeing their daughter performance, who will be not elated seeing their daughter like this ..

But the scene before made him shiver in his body ...he was like in a shock,he was not reacting to surroundings..

Yes geet ..manasi ..was hugging geet ..and showing the medals.. to her

Manasi is geet daughter, he even saw that guy her husband ..the other women whom he saw in that hotel , they were dancing ..he saw another small girl who is hugging manasi, yes he knows their bonding...but what is this going on..he was like in a confused state...he is not able to understand what is going on ...


next - Part-62

Edited by rsusmita - 7 years ago
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Wonderful update
Maan chief guest of the function 👍🏼
Maan n swamiji convo too good
Maan liked the ballet... He was thinking that swamiji's words n ballet are hinting him something 😊
Swamiji said that maansi is a lucky charm for her father
Maan came to know that maansi is geet's child... Seeing yash his wife n child he is confused
Hope Maan comes to know that maansi is his child

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