PYAR KE EHASAS THREAD 3 ,note on page 129 - Page 25

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow awesome update yaar

Maan disguised himself to get close to his daughter and keep them safe from rahul

Maan trying to save and geet couldn't recognize him at first glance
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
NOTE


SORRY GUYS COULD NOT UPDATE
LAST ONE WEEK DOWN WITH FEVER COLD ,WILL TRY TO UPDATE BY TOMORROW

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rsusmita

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SORRY GUYS COULD NOT UPDATE
LAST ONE WEEK DOWN WITH FEVER COLD ,WILL TRY TO UPDATE BY TOMORROW


take care Susmi
get well soon
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😃 Its OK,
Take care..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Srikanth gave info about rahul n maan's wants geet safe
Maan became driver with turban n beard... Great
Ram having chest pain, Maan carried him till the car
Hope he is out of danger
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Posted: 8 years ago
Don't worry about update will wait, just take care of yourself and get well soon...!
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thanks 4 da note! get well soon! will wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
previous ~ part-68


PART-69

The next thing she saw was the person has lifted raam and seated him in the car , and took the wheel..she followed adi ...into the car

Maan could not see the helpless geet, he so much wanted to take her into embrace , and take away the tears,he simply could not see into her eyes, some where he knows, even though he has changed his outlook he has a fear , geet may recognizes him, he immediately turned his head the other side.

Priya immediately rushed to the hospital after getting call from geet .

She was trying to be calm and handle the situation..she knows if she breakdown, all will get tensed, as doctor she knows the knows what is the situation,

Thank you adi for bringing raam in time, you know if it was late her words stopped in the middle, as she do not want to think the worst thing...

Her eyes went on the guy who was standing beside adi,

Seeing her eyes..vo aunty he is the one who brought uncle to the hospital ...if he would have not drive so fast , we would have reached hospital in time

Thank you beta..you do not know how much help you did

Please do not tell like that, any one would have done the same thing in my place..

Their talks ended with yash entry

After seeing yash geet no more could not control herself , she embraced him and started crying , yash...papa..papa ko kuch nahi hoga na?

Even yash who has put the brave mask until now started to cry holding geet,

Maan was standing far away and watching this scene ..

Now he understood what grave mistakes he has done, yes he will never understand, their relation, what geet told is true, he has became so blind in his range , that he never tried to understand geet.

seeing their condition priya became emotional , no..she cannot become weak like this, she cannot break ..., she immediately wiped the tears which are about to fall,

what is this yash , geet, no one believe you , that you are parents of kids, you are behaving like kids, what will happen when manasi and pari see you like this..

maa...

maan was dumbstruck seeing like this ,his repect for her increased,

seeing her hugging geet and yash, her hands on both of them, telling them not to worry,

yash take geet home, I will be staying here, since morning she is here, she needs rest,

no maa I am not going any where, I will stay here only.

Geet ..see you are looking so tired.. will you not listen to your mother words..

Ma you have come directly from the conference , you too need rest , so you go..

I am going to stay here ..so ma , geet you both go and that is final , I do not want any arguments,

I cannot handle your sweet daughter in..law there,

Did you told about this.

No..ma..you know about her, till now I have not told any thing. Just dropped her home, and rushed here,

So you better go and handle her...and let me stay here.

Yash see it is already it is late, how can w go alone we will not get taxis, , seeing their arguments adi stepped in

Autny if you do not mind , can I tell you one thing .

She nodded, as if asking him to continue.

What yash is telling is correct, you both of them go and take rest, and regarding about going ..his words stopped in middle,

Aunty..i am sorry, I know it is not correct time to tell ..but.

Uncle had told me search for drivers.. , today I brought him to your house,

He is Balawant singh...our distant relative ...he is in need of job, I want him to introduce to uncle, before that this all happened , if you are okay with him, you can appoint him.

Adi how can I decide now, at this situation I cannot tell any anything...

Geet was not interested in these talk, she quitely made way to the icu , looking through the glass seeing raam surrounding with the tubes and machines, her thoughts went into past , no she cannot see another person like this ...

Maan interpreted in their talks

Aunty..sorry . for calling you like that


It is okay balvant .you can call me aunty

Actually it is not correct time to talk these things, but at least I can drop you home, in this hour..it is not safe for you to go alone..

Priya was lost in his sincere eyes, the man who just approached for job , not ony made raam to join in the hospital, but also standing here, not leaving them in this moment.

Maan was seeing geet from his rear-view mirror,he could see she is lost somewhere .

Geet where are you lost , ghar agaya hai..come inside beta..

Even before they could enter Anjali came

Maa where is papa , I have not seen him since coming from the marriage , is he has gone somewhere, since morning I was trying to call on his phone, but he is not taking the call, I feeling very tensed, even yash went away without informing me...what happened ma.

Nothing happened anju..you do take stress.

di...please tell what happened.

Vo..papa ko mild attack hua hai,in the morning so I had to rush him to hospital ,

Hearing those words..she panicked...papa...she fainted

Maan immediately took her into arms before she could fall and laid down on her nearby couch.

Geet immediately went to bring water , priya checked Anjali bp.it is very low..

When Anjali woke up again she immediately hugged priya who is nearby , maa I want to see papa

Priya hands went on her back as if pacifying, anju now relax,

Ma ,how is papa, what happened to him,

Anju raam is fine now, even I was not there, I went for conference,

I got call from geet , reached there..

That is why yash went away dropping me here, with out telling me anything, there was unhappiness rather than anger in her tone.

Why yash did not tell any thing to me.

Anju beta may be he afraid, how you will react, and then he had to leave you alone and come to hospital , he is worried how you are going to stay, when they are no one ,and we know how you will take everything to heart,

Ma ...

I know anju how much you are attached to your papa...her hands went on her tears which are going to fall.

Maan was seeing all these..their bonding , how mother-in-law can take so concern for her daughter in-law.

Ma I want to see papa..

Sure beta..but we will go tomorrow..morning okay , where are kids

They just now slept..did they troubled you a lot


They were not troubling but got concern when no one there in the house..

Hearing kids..maan heart at one second...stopped ..he just once want to have glimpse of manasi..just want to go inside and hug her..no he cannot do that...

he immediately left the place.. controlling his emotions


next ~ part-70




Edited by rsusmita - 8 years ago

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