PYAR KE EHASAS THREAD 3 ,note on page 129 - Page 29

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Posted: 8 years ago
maan could now see his daughter
n rams family close
hhe saw the care
n rahuls often visits too
maan j
rahul obsessed with geet
is rahul the reason behind geets lost state
nice part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Rahul is still trying to get close. Pervert. He should not be spared. Ram without knowing his intentions took unnecessary stress in making Geet accept the proposal. Now with Maan around none of his plans are gonna work.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi susmita.,m a new readet of ur stories.,it z jst awesum nd cmpltly different cncpt...updt soon dear.,waiting 4 d updt...
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update.., without knowing anything about Rahul ram is forcing geet... hope maan will save geet from that Rahul...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh..so its jerk rahul cause of which both ram n geet in distress..
How can ram agree to marry geet with rahul..he dont hv match for her ..
Its like rahul manipulte ram in his sweet talks..
i hope soon finad out about rahul's intention n teach rahul a gud lesson So not even dreams he thought to come closer to geet.
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Posted: 8 years ago

precape~ Part-70


PART-71

Please dear ..please listen to me once...anju please...

What happened yash why are you harassing my daughter..

iam harassing, or she is harassing me, ask her , she is not talking with me from the last 10 days , you are telling me , iam harassing her..

papa tell him , not to talk with me,, saying that Anjali settlled near raam..

ten days ..omg what happened beta..i knows my idiot son had made big mistake..

ha papa you know, he did not told anything about your health, just left me in the house .

saying she started to cry...

did you do that yash.

what can I do then...you know how she takes everything to heart, and I was going to hospital, she will be alone here, thinking about you ..Without knowing anything how can I tell her..

ha this is a valid point.

Anju ..see beta abhi to isko maph kardo..will not you listen your papa words..

For you anything papa,

What about you Geet beta will you also not listen to your papa words...

Ha papa I will listen to your words, but you should not make your self like this again, we cannot see you like this ,in that icu. With the machines surrounding you, we cannot see you like this

Saying that she hugged Raam and started crying .

Maan was quietly listening to their words, he understood there is something and geet is doing something which she does not want to do,

Geet why you are doing like this, please do not take any such decisions that may land you trouble .please geet..

He came to sense with the adi call..

What happened adi,

sir I want some signs on the file, okay I will come

It became a daily routine for maan after spending time in geet house, he would come to office trying to catch some unfinished works.

His mind was still on geet words.

What happened sir...

It is almost 10 days over, still I am not getting opportunity to get close to manasi ,

as if maan prayers heard , he got a chance to get closure to his daughter .

It was long day as usual for maan, dropping geet in office and doing all the odd works ,now got stuck with raam.

Srikanth I just hate you ,muje kaha pahase diya...he was helping raam in gardening.

Bhai yelo appka tea...he became really close to Anjali..no one could Stop liking her, she is truly angel of the house thinks for every one..sees every one needs..some times he feels jealous of yash,their cute family.

Before he could finish tea..he saw pari was holding a limping manasi...her dress was full of blood, at one hand she was managing cycle and and other hand taking the support of pari,

Manasi what happened beta ,how you got hurt seeing her limping , he immediately took her into his arms,

Maanu ...what happened to you, how you got hurt like.

Pari di ko kya hua..seeing manasi like that

Vo mama when we are cycling the cycle fell down on the throne bushes,and di fell down on that..

What..

Maan slowely placed her on the couch, his heart was aching seeing her like that .

I told so many times to these layout management people , why they are growing these thorny bushes, why cannot they remove them..

Raam was venting out his anger in frustration..

Papa we cannot do anything .these management people never listen to us.

Maan was quietly listening to their words .

He was cleaning her wounds .

Anjali immediately tried to call yash, but his call was coming not reachable..

Seeing this maan immediately took the situation into his hands,

He started to clean the wounds...

beta kuch nahi hoga...maa...she is wringing in pain ..

there are lot of thrones on her body.. .

is it paining..hearing maan question..manasi eyes filled with tears, she tried to gulp the pain...

He immediately hugged her, as if he wants to takes the pain...he so much wanted to erase the pain .

I could see, how strong she is ,looking like she has gone on both of her parents, good at suppressing pains.

There are almost 10-15 tjnmhrones, on her body ,some are deep inside .

Maan tried to removed to remove them, at one..second manasi hands were on me, she was holding hard on my hand...

Beta it is okay..just trust me... you can you hold me still hard...okay.. only 2 are left, little deep..manasi..just nooded her head, her eyes became full red...I could see the pain...she is trying to hide by putting a brave face..

Finally I could remove all thrones...

How could any one be like this, suppressing the pain,like this.she is a amazing girl, she is looks more matured than her age, Is that seeing her mother in these situation made her like this...is he culprit for all these, did I took away her child hood..maan thoughts came to halt with the voice of yash

Mannu what happened beta..

Maamu ..vo she hugged yash and immediate started crying..

Should I feel sad or happy seeing...I do not ...happy that at least there are some one she is sharing her pain, sad for not being that person for not sharing her pain.

Yash was looking at hands and legs...haa..haa..maamu..it is paining

What are doing yash, why you are twisting her hands like that, she will be in pain...

What happned balvant why you are yelling like this,

Maan stumbled when yash was called him balvant , at one second he forgot he was now Balvant singh..

Before he could tell anything ..yash was busy with checking..

Maanu see I will give you one shot .. ...

He quietly lifted her and took her into the bedroom..

Maan could be believe this how any kid readily agreeing to take one injection..

Bhai..bhai..maan came out ofhis thoughts with Anjali words..a

What you are you seeing bhai...

Anjali calling started to call him bhai... from the time he has joined, later he came to know that she calls everyone like that only.

Vo manasi...is she always like this..

Anjali did not understand what he was talking ...she just left with yash to check..

Here pari was sitting with Raam and narrating the incidents...

Raam was furious..cursing the management people for not listening to him,..how could these people plant thorny bushes near the foot paths is that place..kids will be playing...

Maan was quietly listening to this words...but his mind was inside ..where yash was giving T.T to manasi..


next~ part-72

Edited by rsusmita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part.. Maan knows that Geet is troubled but what.. he wants spend time with her daughter.. maybe now mansi goes with him after help her..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update ...
Maan is quiet sad to see maanasi in pain 😭
Ram is too furious on management people
To make throny bushes on road side
Yash took manasi with him but maan's mimd was just there only .. thinking about her
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Posted: 8 years ago
maan can sense restlessness in geet voice he want to know wat troubling hr maansi get hurt by bushed near foot path ram was cursing management but now management will listen MSK warning his daughter get hurt badly
hope maan can listen wat troubling geet
if he knows rahul will gone his bad time start
to having eye on his wife

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