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Posted: 7 years ago

PART-82


Maan saw how geet was sitting far away, looking outside ...trying to ignore his presence ...lost in her own thoughts .

Why maan why are you doing all these...at one second she saw his face staring at her, she immediately looked away trying to look out ...

Car was moving at its own pace, entering onto ghat section...weather suddenly changed ,cool breeze was coming ..his thoughts drifted into past ...his first encounter with geet , how he was lost in her beauty ...got shocked when shiv introduced as her girl and requested to make arrangements to marry her...that day he did not understand the real motive behind that marriage ..now he understood the sacrifices geet made...at the same time he turned seeing the weight on his shoulder ...

Smile lingered on his face..seeing geet sleeping peacefully...his hands went on the curls which were falling on her face .I promise you geet with my pride and prejudice I lost you two times...now that you are back in my life, I will never let you go away from my life.

What happened driver why you standing like this , holding the car door , is your maan sir still in the car...

Vo vo maan sir ..

I do not understand why everyone are so afraid of this maan..is he any devil...and eat you up...

Yash soon after coming out of the caravan saw the scene before him, Driver holding the car handle,when yash peeped inside the car, he got a shock ...

Geet sleeping on maan chest, clutching his shirt , maan head resting on the head rest eyes closed in deep sleep , even in this condition his one hand on her back holding protectively , if any one would see them in this condition , they would tell how adorable they are looking ... Completing each other .

Yash why are standing like that ...

Vo vo..kuchi nai mom...bas I was waking up geet , she is sleeping..

Sleeping ...this is not time to crack jokes yash.

Ma iam not joking ,he showed her how geet was sleeping in the car...

The women instincts in her ,could understand , how could geet could sleep without any fear.

Maan woke up with the sounds ..around him...he saw how geet was still sleeping on his chest ...he just lost in those angelic face...at one second he just want time to stop...khas e waqt rukjata...is pal ko mehasus karsakta...

Before he could hold her more...geet woke up. Immediately he removed his hands...

Oh god ..how can I sleep like this..what happened to me...even at night I had to struggle hard to get sleep, and now how can I sleep like this...

she saw Priya and yash standing near car ,feeling very embraced , she immediately rushed out from the car without looking at maan ...

"Pari what you are doing here,...manasi pari is small kid, she do not anything... But you are elder to her ,instead of stopping her to play in the rain you too started playing with her, how many times I told you not to play like this in the rain come inside and close the door... ...

Ma please I want to play see ...nothing will happen...anyway yash uncle will give tablets if any thing happen do not worry...

Manasi ...just go inside and close the door..i do not want hear any arguments in this ...

Ma atleast we will sit in the balcony and see the rain...see the how nice the weather...

Manasi close the door I hate these rain...go inside ...

Seeing the kids going away with their head down, maan could not understand ,what happened to this geet...seeing maan face...her face became very pale, she did not expected maan and to face maan like this ...

Geet ..geet ...i want to talk with you...

Before maan could confront her she went away.

Maan ..maan ...What happened maan why you are standing like this...did you saw geet ...

Yash why geet is behaving like this...

Maan ..for us it is not new...may be you are seeing first time...she just hates rains...

No ..yash ..she loves rains a lot ...so many times she used to dance in rain...

Really I do not believe this ...

Yes yash ..she loves rains..in fact I still remember that day..when I first met her..she was playing in the rain just like a small kid... but now see she is scolding manasi and pari for that ...What I have done to my geet yash... the innocent geet who used enjoy life...finds happiness..in small small things, playing rain, I know how kids used to enjoy playing with here she ...has now completely changed yash ...

Maan geet has changed a lot ..only you can bring her back...hearing... thunder ...maan looking like cyclone is coming ...

Yash where are kids ... after geet scolding they went inside ...

Maan I will go and look after kids you go and see geet ...she is very much afraid of thunders ...

When maan entered geet room he saw she was sitting near the window ...lost somewhere ...

He could see the storm making havoc outside just like in their lives...

Geet ..geet

Why maan ...why you came...she stood before him..her hands went on his shirt ...

Why...maan why you came back... why you did not come back when you are needed most, you were not there to hold my hands to fell the first moments of our baby, I so much want to talk with you about our baby.., you were not there first time to hold the baby...I know you will not come but still my eyes searched you in that crowd...

Geeet ...unknown tears escaped from maan eyes...

.we were very much happy in our own small world...see now what everyone calling us ...I became a keep...now what will happen to manasi...till now I was safeguarding her from these people...what I am going to tell her...i cannot face her now...why you came ...please go away...

Her hands almost ripped the shirt ...not having any strength on her knees she fell down ...

Geet ...his hands went slowly on her ...i know geet I did lot of mistakes ...but now I just asking one chance ...please ...geet please give one chance will rectify everything ...see your maan had come back...

It is too late maan...see the geet standing before you is completely changed ...that geet even though I faced life threating challenges...could face them because ...in her heart she knows her maan was there ..to take care ...if there was any problem I used to come to you...but you yourself thrown me out of of your life...i still remembered that day ...you broke my mangal sutre...broke this relation...

Now what right iam having on you...

Geet ...only you have that right on me...taking her hand...see geet even though I broke the mangal sutr you are still wearing it on your hands...some where deep inside still you love me... that love is still binding us..that is why even after so many years...you came before me ..it is our destiny ...that we are bonded with each other ,

..and I have that hope ...i will bring back my innocent geet who loves to play on rain...find happiness in small small things,...l bring back my geet it is promise to myself ...for our sake , for our kids sake ..you have to come back to me ...i will bring back you with full respect ..

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NEXT PART-83


Edited by rsusmita - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update... geet is completely changed after maan threw her out of his life. maan has to try hard to make her give him one chance to amend his mistakes...
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Posted: 7 years ago
No matter what happened between Maan and geet 10 years ago but love is still alive in their hearts..Though geet avoided him as much as she could but slept hugging him peaecfully..
Yash and priya too understood that they share a very bonding..
Maan was so helpless seeing Geet changed to the extent that she had started to hate rain where as she was the one who loved to play in rain..
One thing i did not get
Why did Geet said that people think her as his keep?
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Posted: 7 years ago
So sad how much geet has lost hopes and isn't crushed. Maan is now leaving so helpless seeing her like this all due to him

It's going to take a lot of patience and persistence but if anyone can do it will be MSK
He also needs to parody his angel his daughter
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Posted: 7 years ago
Geet still feel safe in Maan presence that's y she slept very peacefully in his arm and priya and yash shocked to see hr sleeping like that
Geet avoiding Maan she not want him back bz she knows she can't resist him
Maan plead her to give him one chance
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for the pm!

Part 83

outstanding update! well written! Its sad that Geet has changed so much! Geet now hates rain! Maan has to bring the old Geet back!

Geet feels safe in his arms! the love is still there! Maan needs win Geet back!

update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
maan can see how he ruin innocent
geet burst on maan n ask to go away from their life

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
After many years Geet slept peacefully
She herself was shock
But in her heart she know her husband is with her
Maan is regretting what he did with her
Geet want him to go away
But Maan want one chance
Let see will Geet give him another chance
Update soon

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