MG SS' I share my mother / Note 115 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kaha gayab ho gai firr se, update karna!!!!
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Originally posted by: Sundari.

Kaha gayab ho gai firr se, update karna!!!!



mat poch

Sorry readers for make you wait but seriously this time not my fully mistakes actually my brother change my PC and without my knowledge he took and sold the old one , after formating all data from my PC , so all my writings picture and personal data lost completely for ever and more ever I couldn't understand this new window
So update will be late

Sorry once again 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg!!!!
Poor u jaldi recover karo
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi all dear buddies specially khaaishfan
Sorry for not responding and updating yaar
First cause of Ramadan and then my father health
Not letting me think about anything else
I will update all my story hope you all don't mind if update shorter
Last not least any one help me with my story I am confused how to potrate them in scene
Any wish you all want please mention in thread I will start to type once again
This one type but little bit change need so maybe this will update tomorrow hope so because net grrr

Best regards
Fariya
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey Fariya! thanks 4 the note...will wait!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Everyone Thank you for your support and your patience

Well , I don't know how to write professionally I learned writing from gf writers forgive me for mistake

Maybe my style of work resemble to them if any one found my work has some similarities with others do pm me I will remove
No bashing or abusive words please



Part 4



"Jub dard had sy ziada brh jata hai to insan rota nahi khamosh hujata hai... "
(Quote from Bhai mobile I don't know where he gotthis lines)


Maan geet and Aryan having their lunch , first time after Arman death ,Aryan and geet enjoying and have a great time so was maan he too felt content spending some times with geet and Aryan his confusion, clear now he is confidence about geet that she is the one who can be his children mother and for Aryan somewhere he clear that his and geet marriage will not makes effects in Aryan life ( you are wrong here )

Maan finished his food and ask : you both want ice cream

Geet no making Aryan pout

Geet to Aryan : you had a very bad cold remember OK so no ice cream

Aryan nodes : no ice cream uncle , he bend little to maan say in his ears

Aryan : or mama will take me to that doc he will give me shot on my bump
said in hush tune made maan chuckle ,

Aryan show his angry eyes to him

maan nodes say same way : OK I understand next time OK

Geet rise her brows seeing them

Maan OK then so let go then

Maan pay the bill and they went to home.

Here in handa all worried think geet and Aryan not came yet

Mrs handa dekh abhi tak nahi aye Sheila yeh ladki bhi na kha tha k bus
lunch khatam KAR k aye gi Dekho itna time lagta hai

Sheila masi : a jai gee Delhi traffic bhi toh itna hora hai

Muskan gives water to Mrs handa said call her masi simple aur ap nai hi
toh bola tha k uska extra classes chal raha hai, aur Aryan aur geet lunch Bhar KAR k aye aye bola toh tha phone par usney ( geet didn't tell them about maan being with her)

Mrs handa ha par Aryan bhi nahi aya aur yaad hai last time he got ill when he ate outside , she knew na then why she takes him eating out

Muskan;; why Aryan not came with other children, if he came with others then geet didn't take him out look at the time Masi , it's going to 3 now , after all he is kid bhook lag Gye hogi she said making rano realaxed
But her words irked Pam and arti both

Pami at once said in defence of her kids :: ab kiya boley is ladkey ko ladai karney ki adat hai sab say ladta rahta hai isliye koi usko apney sath nahi lata

Arti to noded and put more oil or nahi toh kiya jab dekho tab roz ka ladna mein toh apney betey ko uskey sath aney nahi deti

Sheila masi :: yeh kiya bath hoi arey bacho mein toh choti choti fighting toh hogi par uska yeh MATLAB toh nahi k elders bhi unko fighting mein part lai

She give disappointed looks to rano ,

Muskan : he was alone in school if Sandeep (pami brij son) left him there if they took him with them then we didn't get worried here , he elder among all, but behave like kids

Rano let me call school , will ask them in which times geet takes Aryan with her

She called at school they said geet take him with her ( actually they also care less but for hidden their mistake they said ) it been hours now

Rano told about geet take Aryan from school , one hour before

Arti ; now no one blame her for irresponsibility , but here everyone blame my children

Lucky stop her to say more

Pami why you stop her devar jee kiya galat khai rahi hai , jab dekho geet
Aryan inki tension khatam nahi hoti , humare apney bhi bachey hai jab Dekho geet Aryan k liye pareshan hotey rahai

Arti aur NAHI toh kiya yeha humare bachey lunch NAHI kiya aur sab ko us Aryan ki parwa hai

Doll her daughter said cutely making her embarrassed but mama AP nai toh humko lunch kara diYa

Arti Pam both look each other stop her blunder ,

Arti chup she shout slap her in anger to cover their misdeeds take her upstairs

Sheila Masi pehley galti kartey hai phir gussa dekha KAR sab ko chup kardo , she give a mock look to her sister

Every one sighed knowing both nature

In this time maan car stoped at geet resident

Maan : lo Ghar agaya ,

Geet : thank you maan j for your help

Maan NAHI geet it my pleasure too , because of I had my lunch on time or else dadi again scold me for not having my meals on time he said made them giggle

Aryan AP ko bhi scolding milti hai , he asked and giggle at him
Geet Sush aroo buri bath

Maan : hmm with smile

Aryan geet both came out and went inside the house , maan saw them going from behind then he started his car , when he saw a beg

Maan : It must be Aryan beg let me give him he came out from his car and walk to handa residence

Maan near to the door when he heard geet mother scolded her

Rano : geet kitni laperwah hogye ho tum , time dekha Hai sham honey ko aye Hai istarha sab ko pareshan karna thek lagta Hai

Geet brothers chup q Hai bol na maa asking you

Geet ; maa Bhai won hum Lunch karney ruk gye Thai aur before she said more she cut by her bhabhi

Pami : ha Bhai ek tum aur tumhari beta ki wajha say sab kitna preshan Hai andaza bhi Hai , tumhari beta agar sab k sath ana passand nahi karta upar say uski wajha Say humre bacho ko scolded hotey Hai

Geet par bhabhi AP nai to kha Tha

Arti said thIs time chup Kar geet bus buhut Howa itna bhi Kiya time lagta Hai lunch karney mein

Aryan mom ki galti nahi nanu mein game zone mein Chala GYA tha

Arti wow yeh sab preshan Hai yeh dono maa bate game khel ney magan Thai

Lucky geet brother toh toh keh rahi thi Tere pass paisey nahi Hai yeh game

Arti pechleY bar jab dolly aur Baki bacho nai bola Tha tab toh kah rahi thi
paisey nahi next time ley Jaye g ab akley apney beta ko leY gye

Pami :: nahi ley Jana Tha toh bol deti hum apney bacho ko ley ja saktey Hai aur bete par bhi ehsan Kar k ley jatey

Brij chup raho tum Pam yeh boll rahi ho

Arti ; q Bhai sahab hum apney bacho ko rok detey Hai Aryan k liye aur yeh Hai k bacho mein difference rakthi

Geet try to clear asi bath nahi Hai bahbhi

Aryan ; sab last week gye Thai mujko ley k nahi gye Thai is isliye mama ko mein nai bola Tha waha chalney ko

All family members look him , geer bhabhi get angry hear his answer , held his hand tight know now he get scold from elder ,zayada she wants to say in his favor but geeti clear the air

Masi ja Kar rest dono thak Gye hogye

Mr handa.look his sons and daughters in law know them better but he also helpless

Pami arti both lo ab koi Kuch nahi Khai ga sari scolding toh humre bacho ko hi milti Hai na

Muskan Janey dejey bhabhi AP log itna gussa q Hai itni choti toh bath Hai
Arti eying her husband to say something

Lucky bath choti nahi ha jar rahi thi toh Sab bacho ko ley jati

Masi taunt him said tou lajata Hai sab bacho ko last time sab ho aye Thai na toh tamasha q Kar raha Hai

Rano acha bus karo sab jao ja key apna apna Kam Karo shaDi ka Ghar Hai

al interrupted by maan voice handa became worried seeing him at their door don't know why he is there at this time did he hear them

Maan who heard every thing he felt bad for geet and Aryan because her bhabhi made issue he interrupt before any one say to Aryan act like he did not listen anything

Maan came and stand beside Aryan now Aryan was standing middle of maaneet

Rano ; bete AP yeha is waqt sab the Hai na she asked worried

Maan ; no I actually I came here to return bag of Aryan he forget in my car
He said giving bag to Aryan

Rano ap k pSs Aryan k bag Kasey she asked seeing geet

Geet reply this time maan woh late hogya Tha aur koi vehicle bhi nahi mil rahi toh mein inkey sath ageye she said looking down

Roshni :: teasingly asked you called him there , giving teasing smile

Maaneet both :: no!!!!!!! she didn't called me / I didn't called him

Geet cousin laughing at them see them embarrassed

Maan actually I was going from there when I saw geet there so asked her to came with me because of me they get late I asked them to have lunch with me

Brij it's ok jee ap nai savely dono Ghar thank you jee

Maan no mention it's my duty after all he said with smile making geet look him admirly

Mr Mrs handa aye bhaitey na khadey Hai AP

Maan no it's I have to attend a meeting I should go

Mr handa insisted but maan say it's important

Before going he band down and hug Aryan

Maan hey champ had a great time with you

Aryan same to you and he said in his ears thanks for game

Maan any time he winked

Handa taken a back seeing Aryan with maan


Geet maasi give knowing look her sister like now she agreed with geet decision taking Aryan along with her is correct maan is the one who can. Looks after both Aryan and geet maybe she saw what no one can see not even maaneet

To be continued


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Posted: 8 years ago
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I typed this before Ramadan
Hope it's good
Now am going
Please comment and likes I need your support
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update lng time welcome back maaneet having good time along Aryan as well here everyone getting tense and arti and Pam jealous that geet gets all the attention and start to taunt masi and muskaan support geet the moment poor soul came back all started to taunt her though geet tried to make them understand but they didn't listen to her and kept taunting Aryan yold how he was left out the last purposely so geet had taken him out maan came to return the bag he felt bad for geet and Aryan mr handa could see maan jell good with Aryan so geet decision to take Aryan with her was right
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hr ghar ki kahani
bhabiyan always but gee in conversation so their husband's scold their SIL or any one from susral
wen they have husband joro ke ghulam
they didn't let geet step in house started their
question bank maan listens their conversation
he feel bad but right biw he don't have right
but after he show them his MSK avtar
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 updating! nice update, well written! Geet back home! they taunt Geet! Maan comes there 2 give Aryan his bag! he overheard the convo! Geet explains! Maan enjoyed spending time with Aryan! update soon

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