MG SS' I share my mother / Note 115

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Geet a widow of late Arman Malik he died in road accident ,they had son named Aryan

Maan a widower had two children one son and one daughter


Maan family want him to remarry so that his children get mother he got humrahi



Maan mother : maan try to understand your children need mother and you need life partner

Maan maa you know na no girl love someone else children like own I don't want my children suffer , said worried


Dadi zarari nahi maan Jo sab k sath howa ho woh humre sath bhi ho dadi said calmly

Maan ok I don't mind for second marriage but for me y children will be my first pirority if any girl marry me then she has to accept my siya and Rohan said tell his decision firmly

Maan mother happy after getting green signal

Mrs khurana ohh mumiji jam so happy let me call to my kitty friend and I hired marriage brokers who will find perfect match for maan she said in enthusiastic

Dadi I select a girl from him if you don't mind to see her too she advised her daughter n law knowing her nature

Mrs khurana why not mumji we will go to see her if she match with our maan then marry with her

Dadi her named is geet she is really a good caring person or she is a

Mr khurana cut dadi said ;; OK OK will meet her then she said happily



Here handa family belong to upar middle class family they had one daughter and two sons both married and their wives are not like geet coz they thought their husbands earn for her and their children geet came and their financial trouble but it not true geet working as school teacher as private institution for her and Aryan


Geet parent want their daughter to get married again ,if they had to take responsibility of their grandchild Aryan they are agree with this but geet would not like this idea


G mother : toh Samaj q nahi rahi hai geet hum nahi chatey Tere Bhai bhabhi par toh boj bney AJ him hai kal nahi hongey phir sunti rhaina apni bhabhi k Taney

Geet :: aur AP chahti hai mein apney batey ko yeh taunt suney k liye chor do maa and get married happily how can you all thought so selfish about me she questions them


Mrs Handa down casted her eyes said hum hai geet


Geet smile sadly :: Abhi toh nai kha maa AJ AP ho Kal nahi howai toh she asked


Mrs handa :: said again ,,toh tubhi toh hogi na ATI rahna Aryan say Milne shadi k liye ha kadeygeet khurana family bhut achi family hai AUR maan bhi bhut achey insan hai


Aryan a seven years old , a boy who keep his emotion inside never say any thing smile with his mother , silent and too much understanding or I say world made him like this after his father death


He saw his mother arrugment with his grand parents, he moved to kitchen without being notice so asked for lunch he reached at kitchen door hear his mamami words

Geet both bhabhi working in kitchen and talking with each other

Pami yeh geet shadi k liye Razi q nahi hojati she said frustrate

Arti ha mein toh thak gye ho roz roz k kamo say Arey apney bachey ko dekha yeh iskey Aryan ko yeh khana hai kuhd toh maharni chali jati hai hum par uski responsibility chor k said with anger and frustration


Pami Sahi Khai rahi ho kash Arman zinda hota ya phir yeh Aryan birth na howa toh phir geet bhi man hi jati dosri shadi k liye konsa Arman say us nai love marige k thi she said pity and saracstically too


Arti hmmm Aryan toh musbit ban gaya hai geet k life mein she add oil

Both talking but unawair that a seven years old child listening their talk he didn't understand what they were talking but felt that talking about him he left without asking anything went to his room which he shared with geet
Aryan iam that much bad but I didn't do anything then why every one blaming me God jee he asked to god inocently


Here geet surrender Infront of her parents after emotional blackmail


Geet ok maa I ready for second marriage but I have condition Aryan will be live with me always


Mrs Handa yeh kiy bol rhi hai asey Kon kaey ga shadi


Geet koi bhi karey ga par mein Aryan ko nhi choro GI


Mrs Handa want to say more but Mr handa stop her said that they agreed
Geet left


Mrs Handa yeh ap nai kiya kha Aryan geet k sath sahdi k bad kasy rahai ga

Mr Handa. Ek bar shadi ho Janey do rano hum geet ko phir MANA lay get
Geet reached to her room saw Aryan there she wiped her face and plaster smile


Geet hi champ when you came


Aryan just now mom he lied he learned one thing after hi father death his mother was upset so don't made her More by making hr worrying for him

Geet lunch kiya she asked

Aryan :; not feeling hungry he lied

Geet why she asked

Aryan smile :: will eat after complete hw mom and open his books started to do hw

Geet OK she also didn't asked much coz being herself in delima how will she keep Aryan with her ,

Geet in mind why Amy you left me and Aryan here in this world look how iam became a burden to my own parent if iam burden then what about my Aryan no I can't leave Aryan here please God show me right paths


Here in khurana

Maan children siya are 4 and half years and Rohan are 2 years old both very happy go lucky children naughty but innocent

Maan came to their room saw them sleeping he went to them
Maan kisses both

Maan to the kids : I don't know my decision is right or wrong but I promise your dada never ignored you both


Days went smoothly when times came to meeting of khurana and handa

Mrs khurana were not happy seeing handa status but keep mum Infront of all

Mrs Handa try her best to impress them

Pami whispered to arti yeh geet k toh bhaag khol gye how wealthy and handsome he is said looking at maan

Maan restless from inside

Dadi saw him and said to rano for bringing geet

Pami went to bring geet

Geet who set besides Aryan making him eat with her hand

Pami came saw them uff tu yeha hai AB bus kar she stop geet took the plate and place in Aryan hands said kabhi toh apni mama ko chain sy rahaney dey she taunt which felt by Aryan

Geet nahi bahibhi with toh mein hi but

She cut by pami

Pami Baki ki bath bad mein ab chal

Both move forward but Aryan held geet hand making her stop she trun

Aryan mom AP kha jare ho he asked

Before geet say pami sy Tere mama bus ari hai and then she removed his hand from geet dragging geet out with her

Both came to main hall here everyone waiting for them

Maan saw her but geet didn't rise her eyes

Dadi saw geet made her sat next to her geet look Dadi

Geet savitri mam AP geet said recognized her

Dadi smile nodes her head yes

Geet to smile relax a little bit

Mrs khurana ask do you both know each other

Geet I work for an NGO during my college times where I meet with mam

Dadi nodes in yes said so geet hum phir say mil hi gye

Mrs Handa yeh wohi NGO hai na Jo orphanages k children k liye funds collected karetey hai by doing shows

Dadi said jee rano hum hi woh shows or festival organized karetey hai

Maan observed geet kinly how she nervous when she cames and how she talked politely with Dadi and his mother

Maan clear his throat get attention geet too look at him

Maan said Dadi I want to talk with geet alone if no one object

Handa agree but they are praying that geet will not asking any thing related to Aryan now

Both maaneet went in one room for talking

Maan sat on couch and geet say Infront of him on bed

Maan I am not men who talked roundly I am just clearly told that whether we will be husband and wife but my first pirority always my child am happy if you accept them as your I don't want this marriage but my mother forces me into this


Geet saw him and listen his each words

Maan get up after saying what he wants to say

Geet voice stop him

Geet if I agree to love your children like my then you let my Aryan live with me

Maan trun to her like who is Aryan

Geet smile understand he doesn't know about her and here her parents told him about him

Geet said Aryan is my child my and my death husband Arman Malik

Maan shock to hear this

Geet continue before he accused her

Geet my parent force me too they don't want am living alone

So they decided to remarry me and made Aryan alone for my happiness I don't want too marriage again

Geet continued if am say I love your kids like Aryan then its not true she said clearly

Maan get shocked by her dined clearly

Geet continued : but I will say that I will look after them like my Aryan , never try to hurt them by me or not let Aryan to hurt them , give them good values like my aryan and pyar toh woh toh jab him sath rahai get toh care kartey jartey toh pyar ho hijeye ga , she said with truth in his voice

Maan saw her eyes show truth in them

Maan said Geet being father I know what children for their parents I didn't mind with your condition , Aryan will be live with us like you want , and I promised he will not face any trouble there

Maan without thinking said yes

Geet smile by hear him

Maan geet talking each other Aryan came looking for geet saw his mother talking with stranger

Maaneet saw him he too smile at them

Maan like him at first impressed by the innocent he came forward
Maan hi am maan khurana

Aryan saw at geet asked permission geet nodes yes

Aryan hello Mr kullana Aryan nice meet with you

Maan smile at his pronounced khurana and the way he greeted

Maan held Aryan brought him to main hall with geet

Trio came out ,went to other

All look at them

Handa get tensed seeing Aryan with them

Mrs khurana too confused ,dadi know about Aryan so she smile

Mrs khurana asked maan arey who is the cute child with you maan

Maan he is Aryan geet child

Mrs khurana face color change by this she want to say further but dadi held her hands not let her say anything in front of handas

Dadi hello Aryan Kasey hai bete ap

Aryan I am fine mam he said slowly fearing with all

Handa's don't know what to say they look at geet demand why she introduced Aryan too early but geet didn't meet her eyes with them show cold

Mrs handa asked hesitant so what you decided both

Maaneet yes

Handa sighed in relief

Arti to pami: balla talli ,Pam smile wick agree


They said their decision about children to family hands were happy Dadi too happy but Mrs khurana were not happy they decided their marriage will be Pvt affair only close one

Khurana take leave from handa

In car Mr khurana didn't say word

Maan to dadi you know about geet dadi

Dadi said yes I know her and arman too her ex husband , both were good by heart , work for good cost always in their small budget they help other with smile

Maan nodes hmm

Dadi asked you don't mind if Aryan live with us na

Maan : no dadi how can I ask a mother to leave her own child and look after mine it's so unfair dadi

Mrs khurana thought in mind she too agree what maan said but geet being maan wife and bring her child too can't accept for her

Khurana were back at mansion, Mrs khurana dashout in her room without say a words

Leave maan dadi outside

Maan asked what happened to mom

Dadi said let me see

Dado went to her room ask what happened to her

Mrs khurana how dare you mumji I trust you for my child and you ruin his life making him marry to a widow or a child too

Dadi shock by this blame , said I want to tell you before you are the one who don't listen and ,don't forget that maan to widower and had two children what difference if he marrying with geet accepting her child geet too love our children

Mrs khurana no she will not dekh laina mumji she never love my diya and rohan

Dadi let see I didn't whitening my hairs from sun I know how to judge a person

Maan went to his children room where a maid taking care of them

When he enter she left maan saw his children playing

He went to siya took her in arms

Siya Dada came she smile

Maan yes Dada came and he has surprise for his Prince and princess

Siya what salparize( surprise) she asked making her self comfortable in maan lap with joy

Maan Dada bring a mama and a friend (Aryan) for siya and Rohan

Siya whattt mamma ?

Maan mama who love siya and rohan play with them he answer

Siya relly (really)

Maan nodes and made her sat on bed and took rohan in his arms to play with him too

Here in handa

Mrs handa were angry at geet disclosed Aryan like this
But she didn't not say a words to her

Pami who sat beside her say

Pami :: wasey maan ji hai bhut achey insan

Arti ha ab dekho na kon kisi dusrey k bachey ko apna banata hai aj ki society mein

Mrs handa yeh bath toh hai bus hope meri geet ki zindagi saver jye

Pami ha bus us Aryan ko thoda samjhana Parry ga k maanji k sath koi batamizi na kare sakoon say rahey waha

Arti too nodes dekho mummy je Aryan k itna zidi hai agar waha ja kar bhi woh sab say fight karney toh ab yeh sab ( her and Pam kids ) toh bin baap ka bacha samj k chor detey hai ,kabhi kabhi toh him hi beach mein akar Aryan ko support kar leytet hai par waha Kasey sab hoga

Mrs handa dekhtey hai sab theek ho aur hum yeha say Aryan ko sab achey say samjha deygey k waha koi sharat nahi , Jo mil jeye us mein khush rahai bus


To be continued

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Posted: 8 years ago
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i know i should update my story instead am writing new sorry yaaro this concept didn't let me live in peace hope it came out what i thought about this
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INDEX




Part 1 , 2 above

Part 3 Page 4

Part 4. Page 8

Part 5. Page 11

Part 5b. Page 13

Part 6.Page 19

Part 7.Page 22

Part 8.Page 27/30

Part 9 A.Page. 34

Part 9 b. At blog

Part 10 a. At blog

Part 10 b. Here Link


Part 11 at blog

Part 12 at 81 ( will remove when complete it )


Comment on all previous parts then asked for pw

Edited by maankijann - 5 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on the OS! fab start! so Maan has 2 kids! he is a widower and Geet is a widow with a son! Maan agrees 2 meet the girl! they go to Handas! Maan impressed by Geet! Geet reveals abt her son! Maan stunned! Geet explains! Maan agrees that Aryan will live with them after marriage! dadi knows Geet! Maan's mom upset as she feels Geet will nt take care of Maan's kids! Dadi agrees with Maan! waiting 4 next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice starting
Both are doing marriage for their children
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome
maan widower and have 2 kid's geet widow having son Aryan
both families insisted to marry them again
they went to see girl fr maan and their geet told maan about hr son snd hr views about accepting his kid's maan felt truth in hr words so he agreed tokeep Aryan with them and they went yo elders and told their decisions Maan's mom was not happy first widow tjan with child but maan words make hr calm geet family also taking class if geet fr revealing about Aryan
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow.lovely os
love aryan
dont like geet's bhabhi
so mean and rude to poor aryaan he's a kid

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely and a different concept
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice start

hope both mother father se maaneet ho jaye

have fear about maan mother lets what happpen ..next

waiitng for next but gaayab mat ho jana ...😆
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awesome start
both maan geet are widow don't want marry but baccho ke liye maan gaye
geet condition she will marry but arya will stay with them maan agreed
both said yes for marriage
maan mom was not happy with this
waiting for next

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