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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
Lovely Chapter

Maan , Geet and Aryan spend time together and it seems its the first time after Armaan's death that both Geet and Aryan are truly enjoying themselves
while at the Handa house all are worried about Geet and when she comes home all taunts at her and Aryan
while Maan overhears everything
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Eagerly waiting on next chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
Hoping for an update please
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
Lovely story..
Hope you continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hey dear read your os its outstanding , waiting for update please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Awesome update .
Maan s windower with 2 children's.
Dadima suggest geet for Maan
Geet bhabhi r cruel and selfish.
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Eagerly waiting for you to continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Everyone Thank you for your support and your patience

Well , I don't know how to write professionally I learned writing from gf writers forgive me for mistake
Maybe my style of work resemble to them if any one found my work has some similarities with others do pm me I will remove
No bashing or abusive words please
Am sorry for small part I don't know what happened to me I typed whole update but deleted them too because not satisfied with it some time i don't have words to type

Part 5

Maan came outside from handa residence
Maan monologue!" Kitna mishkul hota Hai pita k Bina Zindagi yeh mujhsey bhetar Kon samj
Sakta Hai " then he looks at sky sadly smile said I missed you Dad saying that he left to his work

Maan reached his office get busy with his works and meeting ,

Here @ handa geet room Aryan too take Arman pic in his hand said ## I missed you papa why you left us if you were there no one blamed mama , AJ phir Meri wajha say unko danth pari sab say , mein kabhi wrong nahi karta phir sab wrong hojat Hai sadly he looks his father pic

In guest room

Muskan held geet and questioning about their lanch
Muskan chal Bata Kasi rahi Teri date with your would be she asked giving her teasing looks

Geet it's not date bhabhi she winches
Geet masi :: ahaa geet beta shadi say pehley ladki aur ladka miltey Hai to use sey date boltey Hai

Geet winches to heard them talking about maan she gets up

Geet AP logo ka Kuch nahi hosktey Hai she show anger and went to her room escaping from their teasing Reached to her room

Seeing Aryan sleeping peacefully she felt content she sat beside him caressing his head geet St : am doing everything for you Aryan , bus apni mama ko Kabhi glath mat samjna she kissed him laid dow hanging him tight

Maan after completing his work he took off from his today works and leave to home his mobile rung he looks who called seeing home he received

Maan hello

Dadi : maan kha hai AP aur aj AP lunch par bhi nahi aye in dono nai toh AJ Tang kardiya hum ko ( maan children) AP k barey mein poch Kar woh apki ladli beti Puri shtan ki khala Hai dadi complain and cribing

Maann smile hearing dadi : acha dadi bus Abhi aya , aur actually mein aj lunch bhar Kiya geet k sath before he continues

Dadi interrupted opps lunch date with would be interesting , phir toh humari complain wapis , she teasing him

Maan role his eyes heard her : dadi it not what you think and sorry to busting your bubble Aryan also with us he grinned think now she won't say anything

Dadi hmm ok so what it's big deal if he was there with both , but main how you trioeending up lunchtt together did you went to meet them

Maan while walking he replies : it's just coincidence we met at lunch time and please don't make stories in your brain give it some rest and will talk with you in home see you there bye he cut the call not want to hear her teasing

Dadi : hearing his saracstic comment before she replied he cut the call : I will see at home MSK she said in mind

Mrs khurana who was sat with her hearing her asked
Mrs khurana : maa maan geet ko date par leygya asked make faces

Dadi : AP bhI bahu mazaq ko samaj nahi

Mrs khurana : Matlab ?! She asked confusingly

Dadi : Matlab yeh k maan Hai woh aur woh kisi ko date par ley jye gye humari potey apney baap aur dada par nahi gya apney emotion ko woh apney Tak hi raktey Hai , woh toh hum unko teased Kar rahai thai

Mrs khurana : woh toh Hai par phir AP yeh geet ka name q liya

Dadi : I think both met coincidentally so they lunch together

Mrs khurana hmm maybe maaare you sure about geet good choice for marriage and bring her son too how will she looks after with her son she said putting her thought infront of her

Dadi : dekhay hum yeh toh nahi Khai saktey k geet Kasey behave Kare g shadi k bad

Mrs khurana cut her words exactly what am saying na
Dadi : humri bath complete nahi hoi Hai bahu , Mrs khurana sighed deeply show her disinterest

Dadi : hum nai geet ko pehley bar ek road par ek bachey ko bachatey hoi dekha Tha she said making Mrs khurana shoked , 7 years pehley she smiled remember that incident

Mrs khurana Kya Matlab AP ko bachey ko bachatey hoi

Dadi : hum apni friend k Ghar say arhey they rastey mein Kuch things purchase Kar nao k liye hum ek mall k pass rukey hum ghari say bhar araha Thai dekha ek chota bacha road par chal raha Tha , aur samney say gadi arahi thi , hum toh shock k marey awaz bhi nahi niKal pa rahai thai itni mein ek pregnant ladki na apni aur apney bachey ki parwa Kiya begair us bachey ko bachatey Hai jaanti Hai woh ladki Kon thi Kiya Jana chahti Hai

Mrs khurana who shock to listen this , noded her she too never imagined a woman can care more to other kid instead of her own

Dadi : woh aur koi nahi geet thi Mrs khurana taken a back by this sudden realizations

Mrs khurana woh pagal toh nahi thi itni carless Kasey ho Sakti Hai

Dadi : yehi bath toh Arman nai bhi us say kahj the par Jo answer geet nai Diya woh Kamal Tha "mein toh abhi apney baby ko apni arms mein nahi liye phir bhi mujko us say pyar Hai socho us MAA k Kiya jiss nai usko itna bara kiya woh Kasey us k begair Kisi paney say pehley khoney mein aur kisi ko pa Kar khoney mein farq hota Hai , aur mujko yakeen tha mere baby ko God ji Kuch nahi honey dey gey"

Mrs khurana ashmed to hear dadi word she is not bad lady but our thinking will be like our society

Dadi : Jo ladki Kisi hair k bachey ko bacha saktey Hai toh rishta jorney k bad Kiya woh humari Ghar k bacho ko pyar nahi karey g aur agar woh humari Ghar k bacho ko accept Kar saktey Hai toh kiya hum unkey bachey ko pyar nahi Kar saktey

Mrs khurana node hanging her head down

Dadi : held her hand hum jantey Hai AP maan say bhut pyar Karti Hai unka bhala chahti Hai par please ek bar Dil say is rishta ko accept karey maan ki khatir

Mrs khurana hmm

Dadi smile : ab chaliye bhut Kam para Hai aur Kal handa k Ghar bhi Jana Hai

Both ignorance their talk didn't saw maan Came and hear what ever dadi said to his mom

His heart felt delighted with pride

Maan with out making them dout of hearing their talk

Maan hello ladies what you are gossiping about

Both dadi and his mom groned inwardly but feeling happy too seeing him cheerful after many years

Dadi think to tease she wink at his mom : look bahu na khatey Thai apney maan pa geet ka effect par raha Hai she said teasing him

Mrs khurana played along hmm right MAA too see

Maan frowned what asar ?? To dadi please am MSK people effecting by my personality not there he said rising his collar

Dadi maan AP ney khuranas k inheritance mein say bus attitude dekhn sikha Hai kabhi toh romantics bhi hojye apney dada aur dad k jaisey she tuant him

Maan dadi he frowned by her tuant

Mrs khurana well maan your dadi saying correct you are too much men takes their would be out want to spend some time with each other but you uff hopelessly unromantic

Dadi look you mom to agree with me

Maan ok I took her for lunch and purposely went to her school I get to know about her from my detective

Dadi gasseped my his truth maan she upset by his act now

Mrs khurana what then need of doing research about geet

Maan I just wanted to made sure about her and yes I took her to lunch but I will say it pleasure to meet with them spend time with Aryan he is nice boy I don't have a heart now to separate him from geet my decision is right to marry geet

Dadi ok but this is last time am leaving you but you have to bear punishment

Maan as you say I know enquiry about geet is not right I will do what you say

Mrs khurana ok then you take our would be bahu out for dinner before marriage this is your punishment she said winked at dadi know maan shy nature in front of girls

Dadi hmm and more over no bacha party will go with you both remember that gives warning to him

Maann enraged fakenly said an going to my princess and prince leaving them laughing behind his irritated face
Maan enter his kids rooms where a nanny looks after them he signals them to leave

Siya who coloring in her book and Rohan was in cradle besides bed of siya . making different sounds

Maan sat on bed take Rohan in his arms

Maan mere babies Kiya Kar rahey Hai

Rohan smile show his gums without teeth siya didn't see him.giving him hint
About being angry

Maan to Rohan lagta Hai koi gusaa hai , he said tickling Rohan make him laugh

Siya dada bad not come today didn't bring choco too she looks at Rohan who was in maan arms ro and me no tuking (talking) to dada ochey (0k)
Maan but Rohan baby no eating chocolate only eating chocolate why Rohan angry to dada

Siya uff he ish giVing supppot (Support) to siya she said cutely making maan smile at her innocent

Maan : Ok but dada yeh toh problem hogye ab dada Jo yeh choco lay Kar aye Hai woh kiss ko dey siya baby toh angry Hai he showed chocolate to her

Maan I will give to other children ok he act

Siya snatch choco from him no angly (angry)
Maan are sure

Siya : bhudu dada am acting na who ripped off wrapper start to eat maan shock his head of her natanki
Playing with them


To be continued

Next part Soon please give honest replied
I didn't check before posting sorry for mistake


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