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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update Aryan asking abt maan geet told she will marry him and they will live together but poor child is scared that he will get torture there too geet mom was worried for her but geet knows her familyeant well geets brothers are so greedy only think abt themselves here maans mo low thinking ashamed maan he made her realize that how can he separate her son
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da nice update, well written! Aryan asks Geet abt Maan! she explains! he is scared! her bro r so greedy! Maan's mom shares her thoughts! Maan makes her understand! update soon
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Hi everyone thank you for your support I am so happy

Part 3



Mrs khurana half heartly agree with the marriage , maan words somewhere right too but you know her dreams to get unmarried and wealthy DIL for maan whom she introduce to her friends with attitude and make them jealous but now her dream get crashes , she is affaired off their mockery on her , no one care much about her and her friend circle so maaneet wedding will be happen with close relative and should be Pvt affair

Geet close relative like her maternal uncle and aunt and their children who are geet cousins also came to attend her wedding but like ''' woh kehta hai na Jo dil k kareeb hotey hai woh sab say zayada takleef detey hai '''


Pami arti both get irek by their comming because all work burden will increase for Kam chor like them ;)


Her aunt's was surprised after hearing about maan acceptence of Aryan be with geet

Geet aunt :: yeh ap kiya bol rahai ho , Sach mein would be groom (maan) has no problem with Aryan she said in astonished

Mrs handa ;: said happily yes

Geet cousin Tania : wasey maan gye geet k naseeb ko , pheley Arman ab yeh maan dono hi achey insan hai dil say

"" Ha bilkul bhala Kon aj k zamana mein kisi aur k bachey ko amnata hai ""said by another aunt

Inside kitchen ( it open kitchen living room attached with it so they see all and hear. Too


Pami pouring tea in cups said : geet ki shadi jaldi ho yeh log jaldi say apney ghar jye Subhash say tea bana tey banatey mein toh thak gye ho huh said irritating


Arti :: shush Didi ayehista bolo nahi toh Abhi Masi jee ka tuant aye ga ap par said in warnings

Pami : uff kiya Socha tha shadi mein enjoy karo Gi par yeha toh nokrani bangye hi said held tray in her hands before she move they heard Masi voice

Masi yell Arey tea bana rahi hai ya cake bana rahi hai , itna time laga rahi hai , rano Tere bahowai toh kamchor hai , tea tak nahi jaldi deti , ek Meri bahu hai itni jaldi jaldi Sarah kam karley ti hai said making her DIL proud on her self

Pami to herself toh usko hi bol deti na and give smile to all


All took their cups sat on their seats comfortable

Roshni Masi DIL : ab bataye rano Masi shadi mein kya karna hai AUR Kasey karna hai AB time toh hai nahi toh jaldi sab karna hoga na


Arti to pami : lo boley all rounder daughter in law show off Khai k jab Dekho hukum chalti hai jaisey is say acha toh koi hai nahi


Pami nodes Karney dey Kam warna humko karna parey ga

Tania but where is the would be bride Yar she asked about geet

Rano woh school gye hai aj inko resignation deney aur work complete karna term end hogya hai toh ab toh bus exam hi honey hai bus is liye she said give them info


Masi said : bachi Meri , itni age mein kitni responsibility hai us par bus ab uski zindagi mein kushya ho aur kuch nahi she pray for geet

All agree expect some who thought it her destiny



Here in school geet told about her sudden marriage to her principle and give resignation of her


Princi:: but how suddenly you quiting it will be difficult for us to find a quilified teacher like you geet said in tensed

Geet : I know mam but I am also compulsive by my family and term almost complete only the exam left which will take by another teacher she advised

Prin: geet I can't accept your resignation now you have to came at least two months More and you signed contract if you want to leave this institute then give advance notice which you didn't give so now ask your family and would be in-law let you work more I can't help you sorry I have answer superior too


Geet but mam he ( maan) belong to a high class background what if he dined

Princi :: then asked him compansete is simple ok she said firmly making geet worried

Geet left her cabin in worried , came to staff room , sat down on chair thinking what to do now

Geet snap her thoughts said in mind :: it all because of that marriage , here new problem started , I will ask mom to do something she is the one who ask me marriage now what I do said edgingly

Her staff members saw her in worried they came to asked


Staff what happened geet you are bothering about some things

Geet cames out from her thoughts look at them

Geet hmm next week is my marriage , I go to submit my resignation but mam did not accept

Staff what marriage your when how with whom

Geet close her ears why you all shouting am not deaf

Staff actually geet you said you are widow but all keep words inside not say more

Geet smile fake : my family want me to remarry ,they choose men for me I surrender Infront of them

One of them staff asked : what about your child will you leave him in sacrsm

One staff member to another :: how she said she will live for her child now see marring again double standard people

Person agree giving tuanting smile to geey

Geet said no I may be marrying again doesn't mean I leave my Aryan , he is my life will live in life till my last breath said in enthusiasmly making all down casted their eyes in regarts for their thoughts

She took her extra class which organized for weak student so they may ask their remaining syllabus whom they lack after completing her today task she leave her institute without meeting any of staff member ,she went outside at parking area where she saw her colleague whom she hated the most standing with his devilish smile


Geet :: kutta kamina she muster these words for him in her mind walking ignoring him


Rahul hi geet hear about your marriage am really surprised

But geet did not give head to his word walking ignoring him , Rahul also follow her behind

Rahul uff geet itna bhi kiya be rukhi

Geet keep walking but her badluck no taxi stand Infront of their institute today , she cursing herself stand at road side , by time Rahul came close and stand next to her

Rahul geet why you silent today you don't have any answers , ( Rahul did not know about geet decision he only get info about geet marriage from one staff member ) uff geet hoga bhi Kasey when I ask u for marriage with you what your answer , I don't want get married again Will live for my son he mocked at her

Geet held her bags close to her looking around to get some taxi

Rahul fuming inside see her mum he grabbed her hand made her to look at him

Geet sattler at his move try to remove his hold on her wrist , it afternoon time no one around at this hour and other side of road didn't see much the way he hold her hand it looks both stand next to each other

Geet Rahul leave my hand q tamasha kar rahai ho said in anger

Rahul : ohh geet why you so angry I am just holding your hands shamelessly he said

Geet jerk his hand makes her hand free from his hold , she want to slap him but it only bring trouble for her so she fglare him went a head

A car stop in front of her made her stumbled back rahul held her from behind , geet close her eyes think she fell but when she felt a hold on her waist she open her ,saw rahul close to her she push him hardly this time
Person came out from his car saw geet


Are you OK geet call maan from behind he walk stand next to her


Geet trun her face to saw maan standing beside her she shock to see him there

Geet in mind ohh babaji yeh maan ji ko bhejna zarori tha agar rahul nai in say Kuch kha toh she alarmed now


Maan geet ap yeha kiya kar rahi hai he asked seeing there

Geet I am teaching in this institute maan ji she reply meekly conscious now what to do

By time rahul too came close them

Maan sorry woh mere wajha say ap dar gye khai lagi toh nahi

Geet :: nahi lagi bus dar gye thi I was thinking something did not notched that

Maan :: yeh kiya bath hoi road par hai ap aur istarha ki care less agar Kuch hojata toh he scold her unknowingly

Geet woh maan ji am worried na , no vehicle around , or Aryan waiting for me in his school so just happen suddenly and here am worried you are scolding me she said too complaining argueWith him

Rahul saw them talking forward said,, who are you don't you know it's illegal you're caming wrong way what if something happened to geet

Geet try to stop him she fear now her eyes show concerns for maan knowing rahul natured

Maan saw him from top to bottom with his famous style

Maan ,,,who are you he said in attitude

Rahul::: whom am I will tell you let me calls police then you will understand soon he threatened which didn't makes maan bothered he was standing like go a head

Rahul on call he compliance about maan police officer ask details ,then maan speak behind making officer get up from his seat

Maan the person who drive on wrong way is Msk

Officer from other side said : sorry sirgalti hogye sir agenda day nahi hoga ,he yelledbat rahul put him in trouble, rahul cut the called when officer give him galliya , he embarrassed in front of maaneet

Geet look maan with open mouth

Maan smirk and held geet hand made her sit in car , leaved insulted rahul , geet came out from shock when maan asked Aryan school name saw herself inside his car

Maan geet Aryan school ?

Geet::: nahi maan ji ap ko takleef hogey mein taxi say chali jao GI , bus ap mujko texi stand par dropped kar dey

Maan :::it OK geet I will drop you both safely at your home just give me the address

Geet::: par ,,,,,,but he cut her in mid

Maan ::: no par war just give address he asked with authority

Geet:: OK **** ,school at """"

Maan start his car and both went to Aryan school

In car maan saw her disturb sitting noting her dupata on her finger like she doing at their first met

Maan::: may I ask you something geet

Geet:::: ohh babaji please yeh us kamine rahul k Barry mein nappchey bus she pray in her heart noded in yes

Maan :::: are you worried about some thing???? if you won't mind you can share with me

Geet ::: woh actually I am,,,, she was finding words how to explained him

Maan saw her struggling to say , he look at her and said

Maan it about Aryan he asked

Geet nodes in negative

Maan ,,then ...

Geet::: it about my work ...she said

Maan wide his brows asking her to continued

Geet::: actually they didn't accepts my resignation , they want me to continued my services for months more

Maan then what a problems if you want to work you don't have to resigned at first place who ask you to quite your job

Geet saw him like what he was saying observed his face then ask
Geet how will I managed after marriage and with responsibilities , maa said it good of iam resigned from my job

Maan asked what you want , are you happy with this he didn't like some one force her to left her job

Geet well I think mama right hai , it will be difficult to cop up with all

Maan it your wish if you want to work after marriage its not necessary that you bound yourself in home and with our Kids

Geet miss a beat listen to him but think he said about his children

Geet really you don't have problem I mean I have to complete my notice period time ,

Maan :: I don't geet , it is a half day job basically , or I will say don't resigne continue your job

Geet huriddly say no no I am fine just 2 months is enough for me thank you

Maan j she is glade he understand her problem

Maan :: no need geet

Both didn't realized they reached at Aryan school he was waiting for geet stand near the school gate geet came out from car , Aryan saw her coming out from a car he wonder

Aryan mama kis k car mein aye hai he thought and run to her but he stop seeing maan behind his mother , deep his head walk slowly geet too move to him

Geet bend down to his level hugs him said sorry baby aj late hogya woh taxi nahi mil rahi thi mama ko she said explained him about being late

Aryan it OK mama he said with out any fuss

Maan surprise to see Aryan did not cry or complained to geet

Aryan came out from hug said :: chaley mama

Geet node both cane to ward maan car

Maan say hi to Aryan ,

Aryan mimikly said hi ,,,look down didn't see him holding geet hands tightly
Maan let's go lagta hai Aryan tired hai aj ,,,,he said try to get his attention,
but Aryan keep shut his mouth , geet open back door said Aryan to sit but he held hand not move tightly

Maan see this asked geet to sit in front with Aryan

Maaneet Aryan sat car , Aryan sit on geet lap his face toward widow looking outside while hug his mother resting his head on her shoulder ,

Maan ask to geet:: you want to go home directly or will havelunch outside with Aryan and me he said me slowly don't know why he want to spent time with them he chided himself mentally

Geet:: no Maan je drop us home directly , it too late now maa waiting for us she is warring about us I didn't inform too she said making Maan disappointed

Maan geet it 2 now me, you and Aryan are hungry came on a *** restaurant may came in our route let eat then I will drop you both

Geet par maa

Maan call her say that you are came after have your lunch simple

Geet call her mother , told her about having lunch outside because they late and both hungry

Maan stop his car at xyz restaurant ,asked them to came outside but both saw Aryan sleeping he asked geet to wakehim geet cares his hair loving Maan saw both

Maan he is tired so much , now days study tuff for kids ,

Geet , hmm she wakehim slowly

Aryan , open his eyes ask geet we reach , he forget that he sitting in Maan car

Geet no baby first we have our lunch bhhok lagi hogi na apko

Aryan :: hmmm bhut zoror ki lagi hai , today too woh rohni nai mere lunch chheen liya he complained with whinnying about rohni bully

Geet ohh I will again complained About him to you

Aryan no mama he will again hit me if you complained please don't complained , he said fearing to trouble

Maan :: why not we will see how he trouble our Aryan maan say making Aryan look him

Aryan :: ap complained karo gye bad mein woh mujko marey ga , apney dad ko bhi complained Aryan ko uskey dad say dar lagta hai , he said his eyes walled up in tear both maaneet worried

Maan anger rose up seeing Aryan crying he saw geet in anger asking how this happened without her knowing

Geet node her head like she don't know anything about that ,

Maan :: OK I will beat roni and his father both if they did something to you OK

Aryan pout what if his dad beat you unka body dekha hai ap nai ,

Maan nahi but I will show you my muscles and he show him his biycpe making Aryan fan of him

Aryan : wide eyes in happiness ohh uncle you muscles are so hard if you punch rohni papa he will faint hehehehe

Maan iam karate champion wink at him , and move his fist in air with Aryan to did same

Geet ap Dono ki fighting boxing khatam hogye ho to chalwy I am hungry

Maan/Aryan yes mom they shout union

geet rolls her eyes men and boy same fighting freak mumer to herself

They came out from car went inside

Aryan saw all around say mama its same restaurant where brij uncle take varun bhaiye and he said that here is play area too ,,

maaneetsmile to see his enthusiasm

Maan you want to go there

Geet no bilkul nahi chup chap kahna khaue gye ghar jye gye wasey bhi bhot dair hogye hogye hai

Aryan face fell hearing geet Maan saw he didn't like some where

Maan said came on geet let him play

Geet nahi Maan je phir kabhi Aryan baby mama will bring you here again OK

Aryan OK mama phir kabhi (in mind kabhi nahi )

They sat down in their table , Aryan too sat he now again went silent

A waiter came they order their food

Maan OK jab tak khana ata hai mein fresh hokey at a ho , came Aryan

Geet also get up

Maan Geet tum q uth rahi ho asked maan

Geet woh Aryan ko

Maan it men rest room how you go there let me take Aryan with me you sit here we will be back

He said taking Aryan with him sorry dragging him actually , geet made aww face seeing them running ,but Maan right how she go to men's restroom she hit her head

Aryan saw them going towards play area : he asked

Aryan :: arey apko to susu Jana tha na

Maan shut his mouth after hear susu word ( hehehehe)

Some girls who standing near them giggle maan give them smile

Girls fida , maan drag Aryan other side bend down on his knee

Maan you want to came here na let's rid bike

Aryan mama gussa karey GI she said no na, or jhoot bola mama ko she will scold you and me too , I don't want to scold by her he said shock his head in negative walking back

Maan held him, she will not know about this it will end after 20 minutes we go back he wink

Aryan it wrong to cheat na
,
Maan we not cheating yaat enjoy , how boring is wait there for food ,

Aryan OK then I want to ride that bike

Maan OK let's go and both went there maan made Aryan sit on bike game , with him maan also started enjoying HiFi when they cross level

Here geet waiting for them but none of them show up she get worried now , and went to go behind them ,she was crossing game area when hear girls talking

Girl look how cute father son looking am jealous with a women who is his wife

Other girl :: ha yar look his body and how His dress fit to him showing his body , how caring father he is look

Geet too look at direction where she point , she first get sweet shock seeing them close having gala time the smile on aryan face and the way maan beside him , looking after him carefully worth watching but after some times she frown seeing Maan and Aryan there


Geet to herself here am worried and they are enjoying let me see them he walking toward them in anger

Maan saw her reflect on screen he look at Aryan and he lookbat Maan

Aryan through eyes bola tha na pakrey jaye get

Maan nodes in sorry

Geet fold her arms waiting them to trun , both trun see her , give her smile

Maan smile said arey geet tum yeha hum apney hi waley Thai , woh bus yeh game Aryan ko dekha raha tha he ask me about he lie for saved himself

Aryan ::: ahhh ap jhott bolrey ho when I ask you are the one who said its boring to wait for food let play unfold his lie

Maan : you are the one said now seeing geet you lie

Aryan liar liar burn in fire you said to cane here ap toh susu aye thi na

Maan it not some susu he said winches at his word

Geet enough you both both liar please came fast food served am hungry said shaking her head

Both HiFi when she trun

Aryan Bach geye aj warns mama toh scold karti

Maan haa yar Teri mama itni gusee wali hai

Aryan glare mere mama achi hai

Maan ha baba Teri mama bhut achi hai bus , by the way maza aya

Aryan show his full teeth said yes bhuth maza aya Aryan thank you

Maan any thing for you said ruffles his hair

Geet shout arebyou both coming

Yes, coming said both run toward geet holding each other hands


To be continued


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Posted: 8 years ago
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i don't know how it cane out sorry for any mistake Thanks for everyone like my works pm later
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update dear, loved maan and aryan is bounding
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chipko, despo like rahul are always thr behinfd girl... love maan-aryan bonding... lovly part
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Super, the way maan behaves is great he is totally into marriage and accepted geet and her so easily.lived the way he made aryan smile.
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lovely update
maan is bonding well with ayan
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awesome update
Aryan is comfortable with Maan now
continue soon
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Lovely update..
Waiting for next update..

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