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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bulleya


Geet getting ready for marriage with dev another side someone heart burning with passing second...

Her friends teasing her , her mother happiness no bound , but her heart crying for him, for his love... She takes this decision own self for own family but why now she feeling she can't stand on this decision... Bharat just going to arrive and she thinking about him...

Meri rooh ka parinda phadphadaye

Lekin sukoon ka jazeera mil na paaye

Main ki karaan?

Main ki karaan?

raji : di bharat aa gyi

Mein jaake dekhti hu

Mom : tu yhi rh

Thodi der mein hum tujhe niche le jaayenge

Ik baar ko tajalli toh dikha de

Jhoothi sahi magar tasalli to dila de

Ve ki karaan?

Ve ki karaan?


Tear fall from her eyes , she open the drawer and take out the dairy and then open the page where she hide his picture...she pick this and cried...

.

Itna pyaar hai abhi

Toh fir ye shaadi kyun

.

She stand from chair hearing his voice, picture fall on floor, she run and hugged him tightly...

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya

Sun le pukaar Bulleya

Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya

Murshid mera murshid mera

He takes her in embrace, held her so tightly... She cried ...

Geet : maan I can't live without you

He break the hug and cupped her face and kissed on her both eyes one by one...

Maan : fir kyun kaha mujhse

Bhool jaayu tumhe

.

Kyun tumhare hath mein kissi aur ke naam ki mehendi hai

.

He held her palm and showed her...

She takes step back and wipes own tears and said aapko yaha nhi aana chaiye tha

Tera mukaam kamle

Sarhad ke paar Bulleya

Parvardigar Bulleya

Haafiz tera murshid mera

He pull her by arms and said why you stopping own self

Kh kyun nhi deti sbse

Tum mujhse pyaar krti ho

.

Geet : maan my family never going to ready this alliance

Maan : ye phle nhi socha tumne

Geet : maan please bhul jaayo

.

He pushed her and said tum jaisi ladkiyo ko fir pyaar krna hi nhi chaiye

.

Tum na mere KABIL ho

Na us insaan ke jiske sath tum aaj band jaayongi

.

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya

Sun le pukaar Bulleya

Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya

Murshid mera murshid mera

He left her in tears...

Tera mukaam kamle

Sarhad ke paar Bulleya

Parvardigar Bulleya

Haafiz tera murshid mera

Geet : sorry maan

*******

Her mom and sister take her down , each stairs make her heart beat raise...

Maan : geet stop

Geet : maan phle pakdo toh shi

Maan : tum aaj gyi

.

He come from behind and twirl her...



Main Kagul se lipti titli

Ki tarah muhajir hoon

Ek pal ko thehrun

pal mein udd jaaun


her vision get blur , tear fall from her eyes..

raji : di abhi se kyun ro rhe ho aap

smile please

.

She put smile , but maan facing coming in front of her again and again...

Geet : maan aap key aha toh ek se jyada kyi shaadi hoti hai

Maan : ye toh hai geet

Humare yaha hum ek se jyada nikah kr sakte hai

Geet : aaapne kissi aur ke bare mein socha na

Toh dekhna mein kya krti hu

Maan : geet I going to marry only once that's with you

That's my promise

.

Ve main taan hoon pagdandi

Labhdi ae jo raah jannat di

Tu mude jahan main saath mud jaaun



Geet (think) mein hi bs nhi nibha paayi vaade

Mom : geet beta vermalla phenayo

She not know when she reached to stage, she just follow the instruction...

Tere kaarvan mein shaamil hona chaahun

Kamiyaan taraash ke main qaabil hona chahun

Ve ki karaan?

Ve ki karaan?

her husband held her hand while sitting in mandap , but she only remember his touch , his kisses ...how her one touch make her shy...she just want him now...she look around but he not seeing anywhere...

(think) maan kaise aapse khti

Mere dad kbhi meri shaadi biradri se bahar nhi karenge

.

Pandit : phero ke liye khade ho jaaiye

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya

Sun le pukaar Bulleya

Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya

Murshid mera murshid mera

Tera mukaam kamle

Sarhad ke paar Bulleya

Parvardigar Bulleya

Haafiz tera

murshid mera

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya

Sun le pukaar Bulleya

Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya

Murshid mera murshid mera

Tera mukaam kamle

Sarhad ke paar Bulleya

Parvardigar Bulleya

Haafiz tera murshid mera

Raanjhana ve

Raanjhana ve

Ranjha!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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INDEX

prologue - above post

CS on Page 2

part 1 to 3 on page 7

part 4 on page 10

part 5 on page 14

part 6 on page 18

part 7 on page 26

part 8 on page 36

Teaser on page 43/49

PART 9 ON PAGE 49

Part 10 on page 50

PART 11 on page 58
Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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Ongoing FF on page 8 With concept

1) You are mine

2)Ye dil kya kare

3) Mere humsafar
4) Khawaish Season 2

5)Khamoshiya...gungunane lagi.

6)Hum Aapke Dil mein Rahte h

7) Mohabbat...ki adhuri kahani




8)Beintaha - Mohabbat ya junoon

9)Is pyaar ko kya naam du

10) Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan

11) SANGINI...PIYA KA MEIN BANUGI

12) wo lamhe

13 ) My Beautiful Mistake

14) WO HUMSAFAR THA

15 )khudrat ka khel



16) Teri Meri love story

17) Is Life A Dream ?

18) Vivaah Adhura Bandhan

19) Tere Liye

20) Dil... Ki..Kalam se

21) Dastaan - E - Mohabbat - OS

22) Wo Ek Din Season 2

23) Sauda


24 ) Gunaah
25) Aapka Dil Humare Pass hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
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take part in celebration of GHSP by giving OS, SS, VM, EDITS, SKETCHES
and


fill the form - most imp on page 2

ZARA HATKE CONTEST FUN - GHSP CELEBRATION - song 1 - bulleya on page 9 (take part in this)

guess the scene - ghsp celebration

what's d name - new contest ghsp celebration

Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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Congrats on the new story! Fab update! superb banner! well written! Feeling 4 Maaneet! they love each other bt cannot be with each other! Geet getting married 2 her father's choice! her thoughts well portrayed! she loves Maan so much bt is helpless! waiting 4 next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the new story! Fab update! superb banner! well written! Feeling 4 Maaneet! they love each other bt cannot be with each other! Geet getting married 2 her father's choice! her thoughts well portrayed! she loves Maan so much bt is helpless! waiting 4 next


😃

thank u
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Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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Character Sketch

Maan Ahmed khan :- done civil engineering BEng Hons from University of Bristol UK , his dad want he do MEng too from here , but maan want to come back India and learn business plus study in Delhi with family... so now he Doing M.Tech from Delhi ...
Ahmed khan:- Father of Maan & Ejaaz , and Owner of AK Constructions.
Alia khan : Wife of Ahmed
Ejaaz Khan : younger brother of Maan
Sanjana Ali : Friend of Maan😉
**********
Geet Maheshwari : princess of house , lovely daughter of Mohinder & rano. she is 19 years old girl, first year in college ,lovely and favorite of own dad
Rajji Maheshwari : younger daughter of mohinder & rano
Brij Maheshwari : Older Brother of Geet and loves her sister so much
Mohinder & Rano : Parents of Geet & Brij
mohinder have hotel chains in all over india...
Rajender Maheshwari : father of mohinder & Kajal
Kajal : younger sister of Mohinder , married with Vishal and both doing good in online business of books. have a one daughter Meera Agarwal.
Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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Congratulations on new story

Geet getting married to her fathers choice and she and Maan are in love
but she is helpless and has to marry
leaving Maan all broken
waiting to see what will happen

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