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#71
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Gunaah


Prologue

Kahani hai ye kissi ke gunaho ki

Kissi se beintaha pyaar ki

Usse paake khone ki

Usse haasil krne ki

.

Kahani hai ye kissi ke dard ki

Galat insaan se pyaar krne ki

Apna dil khud todne ki

Why I fall in love

.

What I did wrong

Why she left me like this

Jb pyaar ki koi had na rhe

Wo behadd ho kissi se

Toh ek aur gunaah krne mein harz kya hai

.

.

Why he hide from me

No

Never

Gunaah kiya hai aapne

saza hai ye aapki

mujhe paake khone ki

.

.

Kya mil paayenge do dil fir se

Yaha yhi saza hai gunaah ki


gunaah

Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Aapka Dil Humare Pass Hai

Kya aapko ehsaas hai
Baat ab yeh hi khaas hai
Aapka dil hamare paas hai
Hamara dil aapke paas hai

Aapka dil hamare paas hai
Hamara dil aapke paas hai
Aapke paas hai



Kehte Hain Khuda Ne Iss Jahan Mein Sabhi Ke Liye
Kisi Na Kisi Ko Hai Banaya Har Kisi Ke Liye
Tera Milna Hai Uss Rab Ka Ishaara Maanu
Mujhko Banaya Tere Jaise Hi Kisi Ke Liye


two strangers who made for each other, but , how, both realized we meant to each other...

this is story about maan and geet ..
wo mile jo bne the ek duje ke liye
par anjaan hai wo khud se
un lakiro se
us rab ke fasle se
chuni hai rahe alag
fir kasie jud paayenge inke raaste

stay tuned

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Congrats on the new stories! 👏

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the new stories! 👏


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bulleya


Geet getting ready for marriage with dev another side someone heart burning with passing second...

Her friends teasing her , her mother happiness no bound , but her heart crying for him, for his love... She takes this decision own self for own family but why now she feeling she can't stand on this decision... Bharat just going to arrive and she thinking about him...

Meri rooh ka parinda phadphadaye

Lekin sukoon ka jazeera mil na paaye

Main ki karaan?

Main ki karaan?

raji : di bharat aa gyi

Mein jaake dekhti hu

Mom : tu yhi rh

Thodi der mein hum tujhe niche le jaayenge

Ik baar ko tajalli toh dikha de

Jhoothi sahi magar tasalli to dila de

Ve ki karaan?

Ve ki karaan?


Tear fall from her eyes , she open the drawer and take out the dairy and then open the page where she hide his picture...she pick this and cried...

.

Itna pyaar hai abhi

Toh fir ye shaadi kyun

.

She stand from chair hearing his voice, picture fall on floor, she run and hugged him tightly...

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya

Sun le pukaar Bulleya

Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya

Murshid mera murshid mera

He takes her in embrace, held her so tightly... She cried ...

Geet : maan I can't live without you

He break the hug and cupped her face and kissed on her both eyes one by one...

Maan : fir kyun kaha mujhse

Bhool jaayu tumhe

.

Kyun tumhare hath mein kissi aur ke naam ki mehendi hai

.

He held her palm and showed her...

She takes step back and wipes own tears and said aapko yaha nhi aana chaiye tha

Tera mukaam kamle

Sarhad ke paar Bulleya

Parvardigar Bulleya

Haafiz tera murshid mera

He pull her by arms and said why you stopping own self

Kh kyun nhi deti sbse

Tum mujhse pyaar krti ho

.

Geet : maan my family never going to ready this alliance

Maan : ye phle nhi socha tumne

Geet : maan please bhul jaayo

.

He pushed her and said tum jaisi ladkiyo ko fir pyaar krna hi nhi chaiye

.

Tum na mere KABIL ho

Na us insaan ke jiske sath tum aaj band jaayongi

.

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya

Sun le pukaar Bulleya

Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya

Murshid mera murshid mera

He left her in tears...

Tera mukaam kamle

Sarhad ke paar Bulleya

Parvardigar Bulleya

Haafiz tera murshid mera

Geet : sorry maan

*******

Her mom and sister take her down , each stairs make her heart beat raise...

Maan : geet stop

Geet : maan phle pakdo toh shi

Maan : tum aaj gyi

.

He come from behind and twirl her...



Main Kagul se lipti titli

Ki tarah muhajir hoon

Ek pal ko thehrun

pal mein udd jaaun


her vision get blur , tear fall from her eyes..

raji : di abhi se kyun ro rhe ho aap

smile please

.

She put smile , but maan facing coming in front of her again and again...

Geet : maan aap key aha toh ek se jyada kyi shaadi hoti hai

Maan : ye toh hai geet

Humare yaha hum ek se jyada nikah kr sakte hai

Geet : aaapne kissi aur ke bare mein socha na

Toh dekhna mein kya krti hu

Maan : geet I going to marry only once that's with you

That's my promise

.

Ve main taan hoon pagdandi

Labhdi ae jo raah jannat di

Tu mude jahan main saath mud jaaun



Geet (think) mein hi bs nhi nibha paayi vaade

Mom : geet beta vermalla phenayo

She not know when she reached to stage, she just follow the instruction...

Tere kaarvan mein shaamil hona chaahun

Kamiyaan taraash ke main qaabil hona chahun

Ve ki karaan?

Ve ki karaan?

her husband held her hand while sitting in mandap , but she only remember his touch , his kisses ...how her one touch make her shy...she just want him now...she look around but he not seeing anywhere...

(think) maan kaise aapse khti

Mere dad kbhi meri shaadi biradri se bahar nhi karenge

.

Pandit : phero ke liye khade ho jaaiye

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya

Sun le pukaar Bulleya

Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya

Murshid mera murshid mera

Tera mukaam kamle

Sarhad ke paar Bulleya

Parvardigar Bulleya

Haafiz tera

murshid mera

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya

Sun le pukaar Bulleya

Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya

Murshid mera murshid mera

Tera mukaam kamle

Sarhad ke paar Bulleya

Parvardigar Bulleya

Haafiz tera murshid mera

Raanjhana ve

Raanjhana ve

Ranjha!


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