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Beintaha - Mohabbat ya junoon 

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this story about love or madness...she loves him , want him at any cost, and he is bound with vow... due to circumstances, she get him... but what happen suddenly... her relation broke...



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Is pyaar ko kya naam du

     Prologue

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"PYAAR"-khne ko adhura sabd,
Pyaar ka phla akshar adhura hota hai,
Fir bi apne me kitna sampurn(pura) hota hai
Zindagi me aa jaye , to khushiyo se bar de,
Aur dur ho jaye to dard de jaye,

Isi tarah pyaar ki kashmaksh me fasse hai maan aur geet,
Jo chahake bi apne pyaar ko naam nhi de paye,
Aur jb diya
To halato ne un palo ko jine nhi diya,

Asi hi kahani hai maan aur geet ki,
Jinhe takdeer ne milaya,
Pyaar ki khubsurat dhor me banda
Pr fir,
Halato ne unhe ek dusre se juda kr diya,
Kya vishwaas ki dor itni kamjor thi,
Ki vo tufan ko sh na saki,
Jisne unki pyar ki neev ko bi hila diya,
Kya maan geet ki ankho mein apne liye pyaar ko bi na dekh saka,
Uske dard ko bi nhi smjh saka,
Kya koi sach,
Ya phir koi jhoot,
Jo halato ki wajah se kbhi kaha gya,
Jo ek sach sa bn gya

Ek rishte ko ase mod pe lake khada kr sakta hai,
Jha bs judai hai,
Ek dusre tk wapas puchne ka koi rasta na ho,
Kya taqdeer unhe fir se mila payengi,
Kya maan geet ke us sach ko samajh payenga,
Jis adhure sach ne unhe juda kr diya,
Kya wo pura sach jahir hone pe,
Unhe fir se mila payenga.
Aaj wo sath hai,
Pr wo judaai ka dard,
Un haseen bare palo ko kho dene ka dard,
Khi na kahi
Aaj bi zinda hai,
Un yaado me,
Jinme wo ek bi huye,
Khuda ne unke is rishte ko tohfe ye nwaja bi,
Pr taqdeer ne,
Ya kahe naseeb ne,
Us tohfe ko unse chin liya,
Kya wahi khushi,
Wo fir se apni zindagi me la payenge,
Is pyaar ko naam de payenge?
 

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Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan



Waqt... Ye dastaan hai badalte huye rishto ki...

Waqt ke sath har rishta jaroor badalta hai...par kissi naye bandan ki judne se purane bandhan tut nhi jaate...

Ek ladki jo phle beti hai...fir kissi ki patni .. kissi ki bahu bnti hai...aur fir ek maa...

Rishte badte gye...aur kuch badal gye...

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And same as in man case also... son...husband...dad...

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First ray of light enters into the room and disturb her sleep.  She turns and hugged his pillow, then she realizes it's not pillow, it's him.  She opens her eyes for seeing him... she caressed his face and said to him "I missed you".  And here, He slept peacefully..

She came more near to him and kissed on his cheek.. alarm clock ringed...

She: oh no

Aaj to bacho ko jaldi jaana tha

6 bj gye

She stands from bed and takes out clothes from wardrobe & hurriedly enters into washroom.

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He : I hate this alarm clock.

Hamesha galat waqt pe bajti hai

Jb bhi hum sath hote hai... tbhi ...

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In complains mein , mein khud ko toh introduce krwana bhool hi gya

Hey, I am Maan singh khurana.

Now I am fully tired, so talk later.

He slept again.

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She came out washroom, water droplets falling down from hair.

She is wiping he hair from towel, some droplets fall on his cheek.

Maan : geet

Ye kya hai

Geet : am sorry

She wipes his cheek. He held her wrist and pulls her, she fall on his chest.

Geet : maan late ho rha hai

Bache

Maan : ssshh

He tucked her hair behind the ear, and pulls her more near to him. Her lips touched his lightly. Again clock ringed.

She came out from grip. And make bun hair style and move out from room.

                   #

Maan : shaadi ke 8 saal bit gye

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He sees today date and then realizes "today is his anniversary".

Now we complete 9 yrs.

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SANGINI...PIYA KA MEIN BANUGI

Concept 

She admire him ...like him...  she not know him personally... but after this her heart beating fast , if anyone take his name... its infatuation or beyond this...

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Its only infatuation ...ya... it's happen in this teen age...

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But why she thinks so much about him...

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He is dream man for her...

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PROLOGUE

Geet distributing the sweets to her friends...

Chasmish ye sweets kis khushi mein

Geet : meri di ki shaadi hai issi week mein Sammy

Sammy : kisse

Geet : Maan Singh khurana se

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What

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Geet ye tu kya kh rhi hai

Geet : jo sch hai nupur

Tum sbko aana hai

.

Aur koi bahana nhi chalenga

Kal se mein college nhi aayungi

Bhut se tyaariya krni hai

Aur tum sb bhi college ke baad directly mere ghar aa jaana

Meri help karonge na

Nupur : geet tune kuch kaha kyun nhi

Hum sb jaante hai

You love maan

Geet : Maan loves di

Nupur : par tu

Geet : No it's only infatuation ...not love

Now am going

You all come...ok

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this is simple love story of one sided love... she get the love or not...if destiny give her own love...he ever love back to her or not

 

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wo lamhe


this story simply based on arranged marriage...or said love marriage..this time its little confusing...you know soon why ?

khte hai jodiya upar se bnke aati hai

aur niche aake mil jaati hai

ye ek sanjog hi toh hai
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par kya ye jaroori hai
ye sanjog aapko phli baar mein hi aapke shi life partner se mila de
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aur kuch asa ho
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partners exchange ho jaaye toh πŸ˜²

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Prologue

Adi : maan bhabhi ko kb tk room mein chipake rakhenga

maan : kya yaar tu bhi
teri bhabhi ready ho rhi hai

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annie jaake apne bhabhi ko le aayo

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she come out with annie ...
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pinky : bhabhi gunghat toh utha lo

annie help her in taking out veil...

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pinky : bhabhi you are so beautiful
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annie : bhai
ye bhabhi nhi hai πŸ˜²

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jinse aapki shaadi huyi hai
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maan : what you saying annie
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annie : truth bhai
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pata hai
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taai ji
ne kissi ko bhi bhabhi ka chehra dekhne nhi diya
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par maine asi hi koi jhoothi rashm ka khke
dekh liya tha😲

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My Beautiful Mistake

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He is my beautiful mistake...i don't want repeat this mistake in my life again...
due to him i lost my self...now i am living due to or for my dad... 

"kissi ke liye 
na koi gila hai
na koi sikwa
na koi gussa
na koi nafrat"

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PROLOGUE


Daadi that's impossible

Daadi : why

He : daadi mein

I mean the Maan singh Khurana apni hi company mein as employee kaam karenga

Daadi : ye sb aapki wajh se hi huya hai

Ydi aap apni party se jyada company pe dhyan dete

Toh aaj koi aur Humari Company ko u take over na krta

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Ye to sukar manaiye

Abhi bhi humare pass total 36% shares hai

Maan : par daadi

Daadi : bs

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Awesome work bittu ji

35% share toh maine market se buy kr liye the

Aur mujhe company ko take over krne ki liye jaroorat thi minimum 16% shares ki aur

Market se jyada se jyada hum 9% shares aur le sakte the

Par aapne bhut hi intelligence ke sath mujhe 20% shares aur dila diye

Wo bhi Maan singh khurana ke naak ke niche

Ussi ke younger brother se

Bittu : madam

Aap toh be wajh meri taarif kr rhi hai

Maine toh bs uski history nikalwayi

Aur pata chala

Uspe 2 crore ka loan hai

Bs usse 2.5 crore deke ye share hasil kr liye

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WO HUMSAFAR THA

PROLOGUE


Mr. khurana we saves her but

but what doctor...

now she is in coma

he fall down on bench ...
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This Story starts from back past 15 years... where two different souls meet with each other 1st time... She playing with her friends hides & seeks in garden & bump with him... she sweetly said sorry to him & asks about her friends...

She : aapne mere friends ko dekha khi

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Wo hum hid n seek khel rhe hai

He : khel mein no cheating

She : Isse cheating nhi help krna khehte hai

Her one friend come outside & supports him...

He is right geet...game mein tum isse kyun puch rhi ho

Geet : pari

Jb tu puchti hai tb

He left without saying any word...next day again both meet ...this time she asked his name ...

He simply said "maan"

Geet : tum mera naam nhi puchonge

Maan : I know

Geet : kaise

Maan : kal pari ne tumhe geet khke bulaya tha

Geet : intelligent

Par ye galat hai

Ase kissi ki baatein nhi sunte

Maan :  tum shi galat ki baat na kro

Toh jyada thik rahenga

Geet : tum bad boy ho

Her daadi come & stop her...

Daadi : geet ase baat nhi krte

Say sorry

Geet : daadi maine kya kiya

One voice comes from behind ...divyani tum yaha

Daadi : savitri

Tum yaha kaise

Mein toh yhi rhti hu

Savitri : wo ram ka transfer huya hai yaha

Abhi kuch din phle

Bs

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Kitni pyaari beti hai

Divyani : geet namastey kaho

Geet : namastey aunty

Savitri : aunty nhi

Daadi

Hum maan ki daadi hai

Aur aaj se aap hume bhi apni daadi smjhiye

Geet looks towards divyani ...she nodded...

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Meeting increases both become friends ...both share great bonding...but all things changed with time... His care lightened love in her heart...but it same happen with him or not...

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khudrat ka khel

Concept

this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji & beeji fix her marriage in between of studies...
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Destiny bind both together ...πŸ˜‰ both don't want this marriage... but accepted this marriage too... πŸ˜‰



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 Teri Meri love story

this is simple love story... where u see maaneet cute nok zhok, ruthna manana, both love, breakup...

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Is Life A Dream ?

    Prologue 






The story about the girl, not only one girl, I think each girl have dream about dreamy life partner...

Zindagi ydi sapno jaise hoti

Toh kitni khubsurat hoti ...😊

Par sapne aur hakikat mein

Koi toh farq hota honga...

She always dreamt about caring, loving husband in own life... But in reality she get or not...

Sapno si Zindagi ...

Ek bura khwab bn jaaye toh...😲


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Chalu toh...toh koi yuhi ched deta hai...

Kyu pati se kuch kaho...

Toh Wo hath mrod deta hai

Kyun umeedo ke badle... tujhe  milti hai  bs nirasha

Kyun khushiyo se  bhara ghar ...lagta hai ek jhotti aasha

Khulke hassu... toh koi tok deta hai

Befikr jiyu... toh koi rok deta hai

Kyu tode h...kbhi sapne... kbhi dil ko

Koshish toh kare ye duniya  ...smjhne ki  ek aurat ko....

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