O Saathi Re rewritten COMPLETED - Page 103

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Epi 2 - Beautifulepilogue. Missing your dev-tara a lot. I always liked your version of
dev-tara, may it be The Locket couple or here. They always left me yearning to
read about them more & more. TL dev-tara would be my fav couple.

Tara was
jealous of meera whom dev hugged so easily. But she didn't realise that he was
keeping himself away from her just b'coss he didn't want to hurt her. and he
needed one hint from her. chalo der baad hi sahi akal to aa gayi.

Maan &
geet were ultimate couple. When he was taking off his clothes I reminded of
Back To You scene where he started getting ready in front of her when he found
that she left to the office without him. both sceneswere so passionate. Still after
so many days I had goosebumps after reading your style of romance bet maan
& geet.

I
liked the way you pictured their complete
family.

Now I am
waiting for you to start new story. Take your time.

What
happened to your hand? Take care of your health.<font color="#7030a0"></font>

Thank you Madhuri for the nice words
DevTara best would be Devi's for me
i still hear Neruda and shiver with that memory
Glad you enjoyed it
Hand is better 😃
That's what I get for daydreaming while cooking 😆

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Mind Blowing, Superb,, Awesome,, Wonderful and Marvelous Ending guru ji 😃
Will miss them,, MG ho ya Dev-Tara 😉
it's a lovely ending of a beautiful story and a Beautiful start of Dev-Tara's life ❤️ 😃
In this story Maan always be like a bhooka sher,, he never stayed away from geet and I love you for this haha 😳
This song lady in red, you used it before na,, love that whole date scene,, 😉
Haaye their ultimate romance,, you are a topper in this section 😳 😆
Love this

Song was the teaser for this epi 😃
Glad you liked it

Originally posted by: dqno1

It works better for that story anyway 😃




dil kyu ye mera
shor karein

Originally posted by: mayyo

Oh I love that song!

Definitely going to add it in the list😃

😃 Thank u
Luckily I was cooking when i heard it and my hands were occupied 😆
you know how suddenly a whole story pops in your head, it came to me in a flash
uff it is hard to quit
At least I will be able to read it in WH 😳

Originally posted by: mayyo

Oh I love that song!

Definitely going to add it in the list😃

I love this song too.. 😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

😃 Thank u
Luckily I was cooking when i heard it and my hands were occupied 😆
you know how suddenly a whole story pops in your head, it came to me in a flash
uff it is hard to quit
At least I will be able to read it in WH 😳

If it popped up in your mind why don't you write it 😳

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

If it popped up in your mind why don't you write it 😳

no I want to read it in wired hearts 😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

no I want to read it in wired hearts 😃

Dil mera tod dya usne bura q manoo

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Dil mera tod dya usne bura q manoo

Awww
aissa nahi hai

boht few writers hai jo meri baat sunegi
uss mein se ek Mari hai 😃
as a reader mujhe bhi kuch armaan poore karne doh 😳

Sach bol, does this song not fit best for If Only You Saw Me wala Maan? the same guy in Wired Hearts?

Mari write soon 😳

Thanks for pm n pw. Sorry for late comment. Hardly manage to open blog link n read epilogue. Wonderful part. While reading first half i was admiring dev n tara but after reading second half i forgot every thing. Thats the impact of maaneet under ur pen. Beautiful story of love.