||Bon Voyage OS Competition|| Results : P 16 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: dqno1

so excited to read 😃



sorry i could not participate although i had 3 concepts ready 😕

finally have an appt for xray of my hand which looks like i have a boxing glove on 😭



Whaaatt 😲
Theek ho amma?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Captured Through the Viewfinder

Ye jis ne bhi likha Hats off to the writer 😃
BEAUTIFUL OS 😳
Her character, I can relate it to my real life.. shyness, Choti height 😆
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Carpe Diem

reading in random order

a different journey

one that traverses the oceans

Carpe diem - sieze the day
good advice to live by
it was a most interesting voyage
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Chef's special

You've mixed two things i like cooking and travelling, well actually i don't like travelling itts just one the necessities of my life 🤢 I would never see a train in my life had i had a word in it 😆 but i don't so just have to stick to it

Anyway now coming to the OS, if anything I learnt from GF its that one should expect the unexpected so Mr and Ms Stranger being husband and wife wasn't a shocker, honestly more expected afterall they were Maan and Geet. As for Julienne, i'm a master with knife but slighty dangerous 😉😆i can do julienned (fine incl), diced (medium, small and large cubed) and even minced. so i get Maan here, its absolutely crucial to get the right cut for the right recipe 😉😆 i however don't get Geet's Java, completely evades. Michelin star chef, wowsie Maan's my man but obviously Geet called dips first so she can have him😆 but i don't know why Geet's even complaining although she's right in her own way, she needs attention serious attention

I liked this OS, had the right amount of fun in it

Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Chef's Special
Fab OS! superbly written! Geet angry at her hubby who is only concerned abt wrk! they r on holiday bt he is 2 busy 4 her! she is on a train n cribs 2 stranger who den introduces himself as Maan! he flirts with her n she reveals she is married! she is upset n reveals y! Maan defends the hubby! Its revealed he is the culprit - her hubby! Bt kinda expected this! Maan manages 2 manofy her! Geet makes him j with Ranveer!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
chef's special
fabulous os . geet is so lucky that her husband is a chef ..hayee !! she don't have to work in kitchen ..but in this story geet is really pissed of from her dear hubby ...hehehe ..maan was trying to please her but she gt more angry ..
love this os ..its showed the side effect of having a chef as husband 😆
traveling and .cooking nice combination btw 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
bolna mahi bolna
sweet simple os ..maaneet traveling in a bus .
though maan is unhappy with this but seeing his wife's happy face he is glad to spend some more time with his sweet wife .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
dilwale dulhaniya le jayenge ..lekin kaha ?
beautiful os ..after reading this I feel like yes ..dreams do come true .
geet's dream got fulfilled in a most romantic way ..that too also in front of the love symbol "taj mahal"
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
captured through the viewfinder
fabulous one shot ...beautifully written ..
loved it ..
maan saw geet through viewfinder and lost his heart to her . geet is very conscious about her looks and her height ...but she is not aware of her divine beauty . maan is the perfect man... any gal would like to have him in her life but he is solely belong to geet 😳
I love every scene.. the temple , dudhsagar fall ...everything was so beautiful . I can imagine everything in front of my eyes ...maan was eating from geet's plate , or he entangled their garlands together. ..or his genuine confession ..everything ...
keep it up dear .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Captured through the viewfinder

Reading out of order again

I love love love this one

The perfect characterization ❤️ esp of Geet who thinks less of herself created empathy for her

Wonderful story and I must say I feel a soul sister wrote this one 😃

Enjoyed reading it.

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