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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Through Thee Eyes

It was such a beautiful and simple story. It felt as if I were reading the best page torn out of a yester-year diary.

A mellow tale, a gentle flow that I sank into and enjoyed thoroughly😳

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

The Chef's Special was a fast number that I zipped through. I loved the snappy dialogue between the couple and Miss. Author Sahiba, I did guess that the stranger was her husband at the beginning😉

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Carpe Diem was tale that I felt had a very realistic feel to it. I totally believe such a story could step out of the fictional realm and take place in reality.👍🏼

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

The chief's special- lovely story loved their stranger convo have to say geet is quiet angry bird haha jealous maan my fav loved it

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Captured through the viewfinder- fantastic story first time reading maan as pandit its kinda love at first sight although geet couldnt see her saviour she came from such a broken family or say no family and maan giving her everything which she never dare to dream lovely

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Bolna mahi bolna-very sweet story maan loves his wife waiting for her to voice out her feelings

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Captured Through the Viewfinder- BEAUTIFUL

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-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

As soon as I read this line, I knew what my pick was going to be.

"Loneliness, his only constant companion sulks in a corner at being ditched at the first available opportunity. As he enters his room loneliness stealthily comes to him and very surreptitiously whispers in his ears, "Just a few days reprieve it is,and goes on to settle itself in another corner."

Serendipity, it is. Beautiful piece of writing.

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Serendipity wow so beautiful story no words just loved it

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Serendipity- its soo beautiful os feel like watch a movie have to say maaneet just made for each other because of that srinidhi they lost their chance but this time maan didnt make mistake just love last poem so beautifully it captured her all emotion just loved it

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