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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Bol na Mahi...

A sweet story! beautifully written! Maan loves Geet! they get married! Maaneet on a bus! Maan admires his gorgeous wife! her smile makes him happy! Maan waiting 4 her 2 say ILU!

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

The chef's special
it was amazing
i lovd reading it

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

serendipity
superb one shot ...beautifully written .
maan wanted a escape from his life but in that escape he got back his life geet ❤️ beautiful .

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Remember me

Reading out of order again.

I felt like a kid reading this😃 waiting eagerly to find what comes next

A story of long lost love, prince and castle and those that threaten their love.

Coming back to the present and the circumstances remain similar but there is a hope of love.

You finished it too soon.

A couple of lines, say six months later etc and we could have a happy ending😃

Don't mind but I am a sucker for happily ever after.

Really enjoyed reading it.

Nicely done.

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

through thee eyes
beautiful one shot ...liked the sayeri in it . superbly written .

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge Par Kahan?
A simple and sweet story.

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Bol Na Mahi Bol Na
Sweet story.
I hope when the competition ends you will give us another part where Geet expresses herself.

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Remember Me
An interesting read. The balance between present and past was nicely done. Very nicely written.

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Carpie Diem
Seize the day- nice message.
A beautiful story.

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Captured through the viewfinder- awesome os loved reading it dont know why really like maan in this story

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