ON HOLD MG ff : Aansoon Part 21 Updated on Page no 55 on 28th November - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cute update. ...
Thanks for pm. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Lovely part geet ka bhajan was mind blowing
Dadi to dadi maan bhi kho gsya tha bhajan mai

Uff phir se takra gaye

Jaldi aana ji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Lovely Update
It seems both Maan and Daadima was impressed with Geet's singing
now Daadima wants her to be the daughter in law in her house while Maan is thinking back to the accident and whether his rest of day will be pleasant or not
at office Geet gets along with both Pinky and Adi and Adi likes her behaviour
it seems again she has bumped into MSK
waiting now to see what happens
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
nice part
waiting for maneet meet ..
congrats for ur first story ..wish u write many more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written! Maan mesmerised by Geet's voice! she sings bhajan! Maan leaves 4 office! Geet bumps into Maan! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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MG FF Aansoon



Thank you so much all of u for Your lovely comments and likes...Here is the next part.

Part 4

Geet was talking with her babaji when suddenly she collided with someone...

She collided with the peon and her suit got ruined because peon was coming really very fast with Maan's Coffee while going or we can say running towards maan's cabin he collided with geet and geet was in her own world talking with her babaji doesn't see the peon and they both collided with each other.


Geet said-"hey babaji yeh kya hogaya... mera suit..."


Peon said-"sorry mam ye sab hamari wajah se hua hume maaf kar dijiye"


Geet said-"Aree kaka aap kyun maafi maang rahe hai ye sab th meri hi galti thi i ' m sorry meri wajah se aapki coffee gir gayi i m really sorry.aur aap mujhe mam mat kahiye main th aapki beti jaisi hoon mera naam geet hai namaste "


Peon said-"aree geet beti aap th bahut achhi hai aaj tak kabhi kisi ne humse itni izzat nhi di maan bete ke ilawa aur aapne th hame kaka kaha"


Peon gets emotional.


Geet said-"aree kaka ab ye emotional hona chodo nhi th DD aa jayege aur aap th gaye.


Geet tries to make the environment cool.


Kaka said-"aree aaj th hum gaye DD ki coffee gir gayi achha bete hum chalte hai"


Kaka said this in hurry and starts moving.


Geet said-"aree kaka mujhe ye to bata do ki washroom kaha hai"


Kaka in hurry said-"yaha se seedha jaake right"


Geet said -"Thank you kaka"


Kaka leaves to make maan's coffee and geet in search of washroom.


Here outside office Maan met one of his client and got busy in talking about the project.

Maan said-"ok Mr. Sharma I will send u all the details regarding project till evening.

Now i will take your leave."


Mr.Sharma said-"ok Mr. Khurana Thank you for your precious time i know aap aise bina appointment ke kisi se nahi milte but it was necessary. I have to take flight in 1 hour.


Maan said - "It's ok Mr Sharma. Ab mai chalta hoo."


And maan leaves from there.


Maan was moving really fast while moving towards his cabin.


He said-"Adi Come to my cabin with Mr Sharma's project file"


Adi said -"ye..yess Sirr.."


Maan enters his cabin and was shocked to see a girl in his cabin.


Maan's eyes turned red and he started moving towards that girl.

She turned and was shocked to see maan there.


Here maan was also shocked to see this girl from mandir again.

They both shouted-"TUM"


Here everyone in office was shocked to witness the scene...


Inside cabin


Geet said-"You andhe tum mera peecha karte karte yaha tak aa gaye"


Maan said-"How dare u to call me andha? Andha mai nahi andhi tum ho u andhi?.aur main tumhara peecha kyun karoonga tum samajhti kya ho apne aap ko haa huh.."


Geet made an O shape mouth when maan said her andhi.


Geet said angrily -"tumne mujhe andha kaha how dare u? Tum jaante bhi ho ki tum kisse baat kar rahe ho or kaha par khade ho..."


Maan said-"Main kahan hoon yeh mai ache se jaanta hoon par kya tum jaanti ho ki tum kisse baat kar rhi ho.. or tum mere cabin mein kar kya rahi ho?"


Geet started laughing...


Maan asked angrily -"tum has kyu rahi ho? Mere sawal ka jawab do tum yaha mere cabin mein kar kya rahi ho?"


Geet said between her laughter-"Tum... hahaha... tumhara cabin... ha..ha..haa... For ur kind information yeh cabin tumhara nahi balki DD ka hai... Iss office ke MD"


Maan said-"DD what??? Ye DD kya hai?? Or tum jaanti bhi ho ye cabin kiska hai??


Geet said-"ohhofo... u duffer abhi th bataya ki DD ka hai iss office ke MD"


Maan said-"Tumne mujhe duffer... kaha you.. tum samajhti kya ho apne aap ko?"


Geet said-"Main apne aap ko yahan ke MD ki honewali secretary samjhti hoo. Lekin tum mujhe batao ke tum mere hone wale boss ke cabin mein kar kya rahe ho?"


Maan said -"Yeh mera office hai aur mai yaha kaam karne aaya hoon "


Geet said-"ohh ab samjhi mai tum bhi yaha kaam karte ho"


Maan said-"haan mai yaha kaam karta hoon par tum hoti kaun ho mujhse yeh poochne wali.."


Geet said -"aree mai iss office ke Md ki hone wali secretary hoon abhi th bataya tha th mujhe iss office ke employees ke baare mein pata hona chahiye na."


Maan said frustratedly-"Tum abhi secretary bani nahi ho samjhi tum.."


Geer said-"Toh kya hua ban jaoongi"


Maan said with challenging tone-"Dekhte hai"


They were talking fighting challenging each other without even knowing each other's names.

Precap-Guess karo..😉

Plzz do like and comment...

Edited by himani02 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Great update
Both had cute nok jhock
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb chapter n thnxx for pm dr
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woow finghting...
Supurb tha yr
UPdatee soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ye lo start ho gayi word war three

the tome and jerry show 😆

maza to tab aayega jab

geet ko pata chaelga who is

DD...

lagata hai geet ka

job lagne se pehale resin dena hoga 😆

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