ON HOLD MG ff : Aansoon Part 21 Updated on Page no 55 on 28th November - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! superbly written! So she collided wid the peon n her clothes get messed! Maaneet meet again in Maan's office! they r stunned! they fight! Geet doesn't knw he is her boss! update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update 😃
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing updte... Geet d maan fighting in ofc too both don't know their names even waiting for d nxt updte...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
both pt is really awesome
geet in mandir maan lost in hr voice
daadi inquiry about girl and geet in KC
maan geet ka amna samna
both start fighting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute update...
nd cute fight between maan geet..
update soon nd thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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MG FF Aansoon

Hey GuysssThank you so much for ur lovely comments... and likes i m so sorry i could not reply to all of u i m little busy.. beacause i have to search college na islye.. meri baate chodo..here is fifth part of my ff Aansoon..

Part 5

Maan said frustratedly-"Tum abhi secretary bani nahi ho samjhi tum.."


Geer said-"Toh kya hua ban jaoongi"


Maan said with challenging tone-"Dekhte hai"


They were talking fighting challenging each other without even knowing each other's names.


Maan shouted-"Adi..."


Adi was standing outside the cabin with other staff members but was not able to listen what geet and maan are talking.But when maan shouted adi. He ran towards maan.


Maan said-"Adi... what the hell is going on in this office... or yeh ladki...yeh ladki yahan mere cabin me kya kar rahi hai..."


Adi said-"Si..rr.. vo.. v..o

y..ehh.. vo.."


Maan shouted-"adi yeh kya yeh vo yeh vo lagake rakha hai... answer me... now... ki yeh ladki yahan mere cabin me kar kya rahi hai or isse andar aane ki permission kisne di.. "


Adi said -"Sir..r vo.. yehh.. ya..haan sec..ret..ary k.i

po..st k..e li..ye inter..view

d..ene aa..yi h..ai..."


Maan said sarcastily-"Oh really Or kya mai jaan skta hoon ki ye interviews kaha ho rahe hai.."


Adi said-"Sir.. mere.. cabi..n me.."


Maan said sarcastically showing his big big eyes -"or yeh kiska cabin hai"


Adi gulped his saliva down and said-"Sir.rr Aaa..pka.."


Maan said -"Miss andhi"


Here geet was shocked to see that maan is KC's MD and her would be boss.

She thought -"Heyyy... babaji.. yeh maine kya kar diya meri raksha karna iss dusht danav se maine isse issi ke cabin mein isse kitna kuch bol diya or challenge bhi kar diya ab mai kya karoongi... babaji yeh sab na aap hi ki galti maine kaha tha na aapse ki mujhe iss dusht danav se phir kabhi nahi milna toh phir aapne mujhe isse kyun milwaya haan... chado... ab batao mai kya karoon... par babaji jo bhi hai maine tho challenge le liya hai or geet handa kissi challenge se nhi darti mai yeh interview clear krke rahoongi haina babaji..."


Geet was busy in her thoughts when maan called her.


Maan saw geet busy in her thoughts and shouted this tym-"Miss... Andhii.. "


Geet came out from her thoughts and made an O shape mouth after hearing andhi.


Maan said-"So miss andhi ab toh yeh prove bhi ho gya ki tum andhi ho"


Geet said -"Main andhi nahi hoon.."


Maan said.with teasing smile -"No u r blind... agar tum andhi nahi ho toh batao ki tum adi ke cabin ke bajaye mere cabin mein kya kar rahi ho... "


Geet said-"vo toh mai by mistake aa gayi thi mere suit pe coffee gir gayi thi..."


Geet was telling her side of story and maan saw adi who was smiling.

And he came back to his senses and thought-"yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi oh god yeh mai kya kar raha hoon ek anjaan ladki se baccho ki tarah lad raha hoon oh god maan what are u doing man u r The MSK... and what You are doing... waise bhi sab ladkiyan ek jaisi hi hoti hai mai phir se inn ladkiyon ke jaal me nhi phasne wala... isse pahele situation haath se nikal jaaye i have to control the situation..."


Geet finished her side story.


Maan said-"Dekho bahaane banana band karo mai tum jaisi ladkiyon ko acche se jaanta hoo Amir ladke dikhe nhi ki bas unpe dore dalna shuru par tum mujhe jaanti nahi ho shayad... mujhse ulajhne se pahele 10 baar nahi 100 bar soch lena.. I am The Maan Singh Khuraana."


Geet got angry when maan insulted her and said her characterless.

She said-"Mr. Maan Singh Khuraana... How dare u? aapki himmat kaise hui mujhe characterless kahene ki aap samjhte kya ho apne aapko haa yeh sach hai ki mai aapki tarah amir nahi hoon mere pass paise bhale na ho par mere paas meri self respect hai aur wahi mere liye mera sab kuch hai..."


Maan said-"Dekho tum jis kaam je liye aayi ho wahi karo... mujhse uljhne ki zaroorat nahi hai..."


Geet said-"Mai aap jaise logon se uljhana chahti bhi nahi hoon..."


Maan said-"Thik hai toh tum ab ja sakti... ho mere paas poora din nahi hai tumpe waste karne ke liye waise bhi i m sure tum interview toh tum clear kar paogi nahi.. toh interview dene se accha hai ki tum seedha apne ghar jao."


Geet said-"Sorry to say Sir but GEET HANDA koi bhi challenge adhoora nahi chodti Aap bhi yahi hai or mai bhi yahi hoon dekhte hai ki kaun jeetta hai"


Maan said-"Lets see Miss Handa"


Geet said-"Thank you sir for ur precious time... now you dont have to waste ur time or a whole day on me... Now I will see U when i will become ur secretary..."

And geet leaves from there.


Precap-Thinking..

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Edited by himani02 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Yepie me first
😊
Awesome update
Both fighting like t$j😆
Poor she took panga with boss
Edited by hira2010 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
That was just Awesome
Both Maan and Geet fighting and challenging each other until Geet finds out he is the MD
and she so cutely blames her Babaji for meeting Maan again
Geet spirit comes out in true sense and she stands tall standing up to Maan who had just picked on her character and I'm sure Maan given time he will admit that Geet certainly is not scared of him but can stand up to him and serve him the exact attitude he gives
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
lovly pt
they both r fithing but still they r cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Superb chapter n thnxx for pm dr

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