ON HOLD MG ff : Aansoon Part 21 Updated on Page no 55 on 28th November - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
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welcome in writer world ji


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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

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welcome in writer world ji


i m trying to send u pm but its not going


I got ur pm dear nd thanks for ur welcome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
bababji humko bach lena

rab ne milai jodi 😆

ek andha 😊


and dusra andha and deaf😉


me thinking ab MSK kya karega😡

and Geet sharni kaise react karegi 😡😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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MG FF Aansoon

Hey Guysss i m really vry sry for not updating soon as i told u earlier that my board exams were there so sorry bt now i will update..

Sorry bt ek din me itn saara likha hai maine isliye maine eng me translate nhi kiya poora aadha hi kiya hai abhi baaki ka i will do later... but please bear with me ohk now no bak bak...😃

So here is the part 3

Part 3

Geet goes to mandir with flowers..


Tayiji said-"Geet puttar inni der kaise ho gayi?"

(Geet My Child How do You get So Late?)


Geet said-"vo..vo.. Haa pinky ka phone aa gaya si chalo pooja karde hai tayiji menu office bhi jana hega der hundi payi hai"

(Actually Tayiji Pinky's Phone Came ok Now Let's Worship I have to reach office also I am

getting Late )


Geet thinking-"Agar tayi ji aur mummyji ko accident ka pta chal gaya tho mujhe akele kahin nahin jaane denge mai unhe nahi batati bekaar hi chinta karenge"

(If Tayiji and mummyji got to know about my accident then they will not allow me to go alone it's better not to tell them they will unnecessarily take tension)


Tayi said"accha thik hai chal pooja karte hai la menu phool pakda"

(Ok Move Let's Worship Give me the flowers)


Geet said-"ae lo me te phool hi gayi si twanu phool dena mai ki kardi tuwahde sawal hi nahi khatam honde ae lo phool"

(Oh No i forgetted to give you flowers but what can i do urs questions doesn't stops now take the flowers)


They started doing pooja.

Pandit ji says her to sing bhajan as she has really sweet voice and she starts singing bhajan...


Dadi ma listens too the voice when she was waiting for maan and maan also comes too dadima..

He says -"Dadima"

Dadima says-"Shh chup rahiye maan hume yeh awaaz suni hai kitni pyaari awaaz hai"

Maan says-"ji dadi ma"

And he also gets lost in the voice.


"Tu Hi Adi Hai...

Tu Aandi Hai...

Srishti Ka Saar Hai...

Satya Mein Hai Tu...

Tathy Mein Hai Tu...

Tujhse Sansar Hai...


Tu Hi Adi Hai...

Tu Aandi Hai...

Srishti Ka Saar Hai...

Satya Mein Hai Tu...

Tathy Mein Hai Tu...

Tujhse Sansar Hai...


Aasman Mein Baadal Jaise...

Aankhon Mein Kajal Jaise...

Aasman Mein Baadal Jaise...

Aankhon Mein Kajal Jaise...

Hoto Pe Saajata Hai Ek Hi Naam...

Teri Meher Se Mata...

Roshan Savera Aaye...

Dhuni Teri Jalaye Meri Shaam...


Tu Hi Adi Hai...

Tu Aandi Hai...

Srishti Ka Saar Hai...

Satya Mein Hai Tu...

Tathy Mein Hai Tu...

Tujhse Sansar Hai...


Oh! Mata Ki Chowki Sajao...

Mata Ki Chowki Sajao..."


Pandit ji said"Jaikara sherawali da bol sache darbaar ki jai"


Everyone says-"Jai"


Pandit ji said-"Geet puttar tu te bahut hi vadiya gandi hai mann tript ho jaanda jado vi tu mata rani de bhajan gandi hai"

(Geet My Child You Sing Really Very Nice... I feel Peace When You Sing Mata Rani Bhajan)


Geet said-"Thank u pandit ji accha aap mujhe aashirwaad nahi denge aaj mera interview hai"

(Thank You Pandit Ji Will You not give me your blessings You know today is my Interview)


Pandit ji said-"Ye le prasad aur mera aashirwaad th hamesha tumhaare saath hai puttar"

(Take the prasad [ Guys i don't know what do we call prasad in eng so plzz dont mind haa..] and My Blessings are always with u my child)


Geet said-"accha pandit ji ab main chalti hoon menu der ho rahi aaj office mera interview hai"

(Ohk Panditji Now I have to go I am getting Late for the interview)


Pandit ji said-"thik hai ja puttar Changi tarah interview diyo"

(Ohk Go My Child And Do well in Your interview)


Geet said-"ji pandit ji..."

(Yes panditji)


Geet said to tayiji and mummyji-" Acha mummy ji tayiji mai ja rahi hoon aap log bhi ghar jao or main office pahunch kar aapko phone kar dongi ok chalo mai chalti hoo bye .."

And she leaves from there.


Here

Dadima shakes maan and he comes out from his dream world.

Maan said in his msk style-" Dadi Maa aapne sun liya bhajan ab meri baat suniye mai ja raha hoon meri ek bahut important Meeting hai mandir ke darshan phir kabhi kar loonga."

Maan thinking-"waise bhi kisi or ke darshan th ho hi gaye hai aaj...(Remembering his meet with geet) aaj kaa din hi kharab hai.. Shuruaat aisi thi pata nahi aage kya hoga huh.. "

(Dadimaa u have listen the bhajan na now u have to listen me i am going i have really very important meeting i will see mandir another day...

Thinking-"Already i have seen someone today. Today's day is worth really starting is like this i don't know what will happen further" )


Dadimaa said-"Maan bete lekin..."

(Maan my child but...)

Maan cut her in between and said- " nahi dadi ma ab koi emotional drama nhi mai ja raha hoo and that is final... aur haa maine driver ko phone kar diya hai bs 5 mins me aa jayega aap uske saath ghar chali jaana bye..."


Dadimaa does not argue further as she got to know about MSK's Mood.

And he leaves from there.

Geet reaches office and meets pinky.

Pinky said-"Oye geet tera phone kaise kat gya tha"

Geet told pinky about accident nd maan.


Geet said - "yr vo pgl gadha idiot i pray to babaji mai uss khadoos andhe se kabhi na miloo"


Pinky said-"ohoo Geet tu bhi na jhalli ki jhalli hi rahegi chad na tu kahe rahi hai vo pagal hai th uski baat karke apna mood kyu kharab kar rahi hai chod na aa mai tujhe adi sir se milati ho"


Geet said-"adi sir oye hoyeee... tere hone waale vo.. "


Pinky blushed on geet's comment and said with shy tone- "chal pgl...😳"


And they goes to meet adi.


In Mandir


Dadima was very curious to know about the singer who sang that song her voice was so melodious and it was increasing her curiosity becoz she thought that now her search for finding DIL for Khuraana khandaan will come to an end. Out of curiosity she asked panditji about the bhajan.


Dadimaa said-"Pandit ji vo abhi jo bhajan ga rahi thi badi pyari awaaz thi kissne gaya tha vo bhajan"


Pandit ji said-"vo bhajan vo th geet puttar ne gaya tha badi hi changi kudi hai aaj ke zamaane aise log bade hi kam hote hai savitri ji she is just like my daughter..."


Pandit ji started praising geet as he was really impressed with geet and dadima also got impressed.


Dadimaa said-"accha pandit ji kaha hai vo? Aap mujhe abhi usse mila skte hai kya"


Panditji said -"nahi vo th chali gayi"


Dadimaa said with sad tone- "Accha..."


And starts leaving and suddenly she got an idea she turns to pandit ji and said-"aapke paas uska naam aur pata th hoga hi"


Pandit ji-"ji haan hain kyun?"


Dadimaa said -"vo actually hum apne ghar ke liye bahu dhoondh rhe hai or hume geet ki awaaz bahut pasand aayi aur aap bhi itni taarif kar rhe hai th socha uske pariwar walon se baat kar lete hai aur usse mil bhi lete hai..."


Pandit ji said-"Yeh to bahut hi achhi baat hai savitri ji agar vo aapke ghar ki bahu ban jayegi bahut hi changi kudi hai aapke bhaag khul jaayenge ye lijiye uska pta or ye raha number"


And Dadimaa leaves from there.


IN OFFICE


(ALL THE CHARACTERS IN OFFICE IS SAME AS THE GHSP)


Pinky said-"Geet ye adi sir hai DD ke right hand and KC ke Head accountant.."


Geet said to pinky in her ear -"aur tere vo..😉"


Pinky blushed on her comment..😳😳


Adi said-"Hello Geet Welcome to the KC"


Geet said-"Hello Adi sir"


Adi said-"So geet are u ready for the interview"


Geet said-"Yes sir i ' m ready but little bit nervous as this is my first interview"


And they started talking on various topics adi liked

geet as his own sister as she is very talkative and chulbuli.He always wanted a sister but god was not with him. He thought Geet as his sister... Adi was thinking this and suddenly siren started buzzing indicating the entry of the MSK...

Everyone in the office started running to their places and

Geet got startled with such a loud siren and asked-

"Yeh kya hai pinkey isse band krwa yr mere kaan phat rahe hai"

Pinky said loudly while going or we can say running to the reception-"This is the siren for the entry of DD yr..."

Geet started talking with her babaji as pinky and adi left to there respective places-"Babaji kya koi apni entry bhi aise karta hai kya?? Jaise koi villain ho ???? Sachi me angry young man types oh god...

Geet was talking with her babaji when suddenly she collided with someone...

Precap- Maaneet meet in office...😡


Plzz do like nd comment...

I m waiting for ur replies i dont ki how i m writing do tell me...Guysss plzzz if u are feeling that i m not writing good so please tell me... i will stop writing...


Edited by himani02 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
lo ho gaye shuru...dekhte hai age kya hota hai...

lovely update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
nice update dear
dadima and maan dono hi geet ke awaz mei kho jate hai ...
dadima geet ko apni bahu banana chahati hai ..
ab toh maan ki entry bhi ho gayi office mei
now waiting for their 2nd meet .
continue soon ..and thanx for the pm dear .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update daadi like geet voice and want to make her DIL but maan geet fight with each other and now waiting to see what will happen in office when they will meet so update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update been a while dear anyways welcome back so geet came back but still cursing maan for it she didn't tell abt her accident panditji asked her to sing bgajan since she has a sweet voice geet sang dadi was amazed with her voice while maan was lost in her voice geet left for her interview hoping she never meets maan not knowing it's his company she is going for interview here maan who was lost in geets voice came back and left for his office here dadi who was impressed with the voice asked panditji abt geet he started to praise geet dadi decided she will get geet as her bahu here geet reached office where she heard siren git scared of it waiting for their dhamakedar meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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dadi mesmerized with geets voice
maan n geet both left to office
dadi enquires about geet to pandit
so she may make geet as her bahu
geet at maans office
adi like her a lot
haha
maneet banged again
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update himani..
Geet sang bhajan in temple and everyone was mesmerised by her sweet voice, especially dadima..she wants geet to be her DIL.
Dadi asked her address from panditji and he happily provides her 😃
Geet meets pinky and adi in office..
Ooppss i think she again collided with maan 😉 😛
Maaneet don't want to meet or even see each other in future but they don't know what Himani has planned for them 🤣
thanku for pm
continue soon

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