Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33)

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Awesome update. Maan and Geet's meetings are increasing. Maan sent her economics notes. Maan saw her jogging in the same park where he used to go. Geet thanked him for notes. After almost a month suddenly Geet stopped coming to park so he decided to visit her place. Tara opened the door and stopped him from going inside. It looks she is jealous.

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Beautiful parts veil. Loved the serene flow of the story. Geet stutters but then their unspoken chemistry is just tooo beautiful. Wanna read next.

do u pm??

if yes, do pm me.

cant wait

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

This is a gem, but then, all your stories are.

Its a fresh take on things and I love it how you have weaved the story.

Still unclear on

1. Is Maan taking this seriously?

2. Why did Geet not show up?

Please update soon 😊

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Lovely update

Maan sent economic notes for geet 😎

They meet at the park for jogging...Maan went to geet's home as she wasn't coming for jogging for many days

He met tara there.. Is tara jealous?

Eagerly waiting for the next update

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JeweledCrown-

@JeweledCrown-

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Read all three parts , Maan's character is carefree as opposed to Geet's . Their first interaction in the first chapter was awkward . Even though he was in a relationship with Tara , was his motive to irritate Geet ?😆 and even they call it quits as he found Geet again this time around in the same university where is his workplace .

He keeps saying to himself Geet is nothing out of the ordinary yet throughout all he did was to purposefully make her conscious of his presence even the rainy night where he gave company to her

At last he acknowledges he cares for her , however Geet is missing to come for her jogs lately and that brought him to her flat

Tara reveals Geet stutters when she is uncomfortable , and Maan comes to know he made her feel exactly that !

who is that mysterious guy who was with her at the beach and also came to pick her up on that night?

loved it beautiful👏

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aashi14

@aashi14

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

wondrful n surprising concept.maan is really a vry charming n confidnt man,hope nw maan doesr backs off n geet improves

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Nice update
geet stutters becz maan made her uncomfortable????????

Edited by .CookieMonster. - 9 years ago

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Part 2&3 are nice parts.. Waiting for next..

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

This is an amazing story. A very different one no doubt.

I have been reading your stories lately and while they are very different, they set off a kind of ache in my heart till the happy ending.

So, when are you planning to update this one? I dont want the ache to go to an attack 😛

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

we do have more parts to it, i hope!

and waiting for themmm...

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