Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33)

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honeygrape

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Wonderful story Miss Veil...Pls do continue ...

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gbhat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

The story is so wonderful. Please update

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Rainu Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Hy beautiful story... jst read it... plz update soon, wld luv to read further...

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wiskhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

very innovative story... plz continue

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Veil

@Veil

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ms.nautanki
Waiting..please update soon its just an OS.. Why don't you finish this off

Well ma'am, it is JUST an OS. I do agree upon it. But unfortunately I have a personal life which isn't going as well as it should so I'm sorry to disappoint you that i am unable to write this story. I apologize for the inconvenience caused. I'm sure it must be so hard waiting from the other side of the screen. Writing a damn story isn't difficult at all. All i need is leave everything behind and get to work to get some "waiting" comments. My bad.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

update wen u can thanks

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

update wen u can thanks

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Commelina

@Commelina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

I couldn't wait to say this

PARAM Ji welcome!

So glad that finally you made an entry. And in such a grand manner.Would have loved to see you without the vest.😃

Tara di don't you dare to get the shower fixed!🤣

PARAM ji ❤️

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Preeti Menon

@OmushDefo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Nice update

I desperately wish not to see Param as Geet's brother or cousin. Let Mann's stupid ego get hurt, he deserves it for making out with NT infront of a poor girl. Good to see u back veil

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Veil

@Veil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: MadelineCutie
Nice update
I desperately wish not to see Param as Geet's brother or cousin. Let Mann's stupid ego get hurt, he deserves it for making out with NT infront of a poor girl. Good to see u back veil

Have always loved a woman who is fair despite of their favorite Characters being involved in a situation and it just being a story.

Pleased to meet you

This is the best comment so far :)

Edited by Veil - 8 years ago