Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33)

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Aakriti Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

hey I have read whole story in a go nd was totally hooked to it... waiting to read more... update soon pls

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

nice story

read all pts

maan in relations with tara but she cheated on him and hook up wiyh his friend dev maan step back

after some time maan met geet and liking hr company but she reserve type tara was surprised wrn maan came to see geet and webt after seeing param pram and tara take gud care of geet wen she get fracture hr leg

she met maan after month and he get to know about hr accident and lost hr mobile so she not have his number

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Lovvvly one. Wonder how i misssed so many uodates of ur story. Awesome choice for param.

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Kidhar ho ji???

Still waiting here

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Veil

@Veil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Loved all the comments, and discussion. You guys are the best. Keep them coming :)

Edited by Veil - 8 years ago

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Omg omg... Think I am first... Yuppieee

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Your writing style is so unique! Love how Geet found a way to Maan and now there is sort of a slight comfort. She can probably say something of comfort to Maan with also a loss that she has faced. wonder how the evening will turn out!

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Haha... I can't form any words now

It feels like the story is unfolding layer by layer,

Building each character, n how they became so due to their past,

Humans are too presumptous, so are u, me and I love that so are geet, maan, Tara, param n everyone over here in their own way.

Their chats are always unexpected for me...

N everytime I am left thing what will they talk in next meeting...

And humans are way too jugmental too, it's hard to come across such exceptions when u don't want to judge a person, just accpt them as they are,

Though I am having 2nd thoughts about geet's judgment here that he was hinting at Tara too, i think she was way too presumptous at that point, or it can be the after effects of how she saw their togetherness.

Aur kya bolu, I am not speculating anymore on them because of obvious reasons

1. I am too bad at it

2. I see u are enjoying too much 🤣

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 8 years ago

#140

Part 7 - both sharing their old memories with each other. That was very expected. Both hardly new each other but got very comfortable when started talking. Maan lost each & every relation when he was chasing to save his grant parents house. Now he was alone. Geet too shared how she was alone in her childhood and b'coss her stammering she became good listener. She accepted to stay for a while there on his insistence. No body will miss hr at party..? She was param's responsibility, hopefully he will find her.