Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33) - Page 13

Originally posted by: Commelina

Yes we are all flawed imperfect human beings. But in case of geet, her shortcoming is out there visible to the world and this gives the people an opportunity to offer advice, sympathy , fuss over her etc etc. While the rest of us have the advantage to hide our imperfections behind some veil. It makes her more vulnerable.

By undercurrents I meant the little distraction that his breath at her nape was.

Or his becoming more responsive when she tells that she's broken her phone and thus she does not have his number. It's like a mist has cleared off and he offers his jacket.😆

Originally posted by: Cartoon.Buff

I really cannot stop gushing over Param. He is one of my most favorite characters.

Geet lost her parents? It did not occur to me before, but after I read this update where she muses about how she does not have anyone to shelter her anymore, I realized, her parents would have been with her now when she got herself into an accident but they are nowhere in the picture.

A chance meeting!

Finally Geet set her reservations aside and spoke to Maan, not that she had a choice in the given circumstances.

According to Geet, Maan looked different. Little does she know it is all her doing.

However, I felt Maan was a bit laconic and tepid in his behavior towards Geet. He also offered her his jacket only after she cleared the air as to why did she not respond to his texts earlier. He seems pretty jilted. 😆

Good that Maan at least came to know about her accident and that she lost her phone, although he still knows nothing about Geet and Param.

Now that they are pretty much back to texting, I wonder if Geet is going to mention about his visit.

Can we have the next update sooner? Please? 😳

Originally posted by: Commelina

Beautiful comment once again.

I look forward to reading your comments. And also that dp of yours does brightens a thread.😊

Part 6 - Param was not allowing her to go alone as she was not yer recovered. But she finally made him bow down to her wish.

Nice to know that tara & param taking full care of her when she has no one to turn over.

Maan-geet meeting would have been diff if he doesn't have any misunderstanding.

I thought he will not take her lift. He too was worried for her broken leg. He insisted her to call him back after safe reaching.