Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33) - Page 12

That is one beautiful update veil

Great update and thanks. Please move their story some more faster. Do u have a creative page with your works. Can u give me the link

Hoo loved parameters caring for geet..
Maaneet meeting was awesome...
Maan has changed...
Geet got maan number

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

That is one beautiful update veil

the geet-param chemistry is so cute.

but my most fav part was when she thinks of doing things alone. Yes, people who love us try to protect us, help us but how liberating it is to do things on your own? That satisfaction is indescribable because some way or the other i relate to this theory.

what about the bouquet now? She didn't ask? Lol

okay but she is speaking him n he is to her after all that. Its adorable to see them like this.

continue soon :D

Did I tell you I love the pace of the story?

I forgot how to paste pictures

Originally posted by: Commelina

Aish I so agree with you. There is something so liberating about doing things in your own. That feeling when people trust your skills,it is unmatchable.

I appreciate Maan for that small but deep gesture.

She needs to be assured that people trust her. Just one shortcoming doesn't make her less of a human being. She is strong independent and does not need being fussed over.

And Maan is treating her as an equal. And we also cannot forget the undercurrents.

you know, in all honesty, i have lost this track😆 (sorry veil)
i mean i was so into this story but then there was a long break so i just lost connection
right now, am taking everything at face value
if this speed of update continues, I might...I know I will get back.
it makes me sad that i am not able to comment as how i usually do.
and talk about undercurrents... they excite me more than anything else. 😳
and that is exactly what has kept me glued to this story.

We all are flawed Commelina..no one is perfect but even in that imperfection when you do things right, it is more of an encouragement to our morale😃

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

you know, in all honesty, i have lost this track😆 (sorry veil)
i mean i was so into this story but then there was a long break so i just lost connection
right now, am taking everything at face value
if this speed of update continues, I might...I know I will get back.
it makes me sad that i am not able to comment as how i usually do.
and talk about undercurrents... they excite me more than anything else. 😳
and that is exactly what has kept me glued to this story.

We all are flawed Commelina..no one is perfect but even in that imperfection when you do things right, it is more of an encouragement to our morale😃

Wow what a beautiful concept I just read all the parts in one go.
😉 😃 👏 eagerly waiting for the next part.
What you wrote is so awesome and wonderful
I really like it.
Please continue soon
And give update as soon as possible.