Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33)

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

beautiful update! superbly written! Maan remodelling the house! Geet thinks of her bro! Maan n Geet get closer! update soon

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Madhuri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Part 8 - glad to see diff side of maan. He missed his family. I liked the idea of keeping one wall for photographs. Taking photos of family members while they were working, that must be fun, created a unforgettable memory forever.

She too missing her brother.

Oh...he is going to show her his best collection.

Waiting for next.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

very interesting good story...

waiting for next part...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Maan so different with Geet no wonder she is falling lovely update

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Cartoon.Buff

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Beautiful!

Got to see Maan in a totally new light. Under the hard exterior of arrogance, hides a man who cares and loves, who craves for love. It was heartening to see him open up to Geet like that. No discomfort, no hesitation. It came so naturally to him.

Geet, well I feel bad for her. I personally feel committing suicide is the worst form of punishment you can give to your loved ones. They are left to live in helplessness and guilt of not being there. People who love you should never be left to suffer like that.

I really want to know what drove her brother to take such a severe step and end his life.

For Geet and Maan, maybe this is what connects them - the loneliness and longing for bygones.

The night has changed the dynamics of their relationship. Waiting to see how it goes from here.

Please continue soon.

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Veil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Dear Readers,

With regret I have to inform you that this story or any of my other stories won't be available to read and will be moved to my blog.

The reason being, I have always been the writer who never cared about the number of likes or comments and just took them as it had come. However I have always been very fierce about having the same freedom I have given my readers. This is my story, my sweat and blood, my intellectual property, and those who do not appreciate enough also has no right to tell me to "Just finish off with this damn story" and stuff.

Now I know some of you think that writers in IF are pretty drama queens and selfish who promote their own blogs, so I choose not to put my blog link here for the same reason.

Those readers that I have known and trusted will get a PM, and the silent ones neither known me or cared enough ever, so, I am sorry no new requests will be entertained.

Have a good life you all!

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

hi thanks 4 da note! respect ur decision! congrats on ur blog! all the best. will wait!

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Commelina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Heyya!

I am proud that you decided to stand for yourself. You know that you'll always find me by your side.

You are one gem of a writer and you deserve all the appreciation. You don't write, you weave magic.

There have been times when things were not going too well, you could have easily abandoned your stories and yet you returned always surprising us with beautiful updates.

There were times when you weren't well, you've updated then also.

You are one such writer from whom beginners like myself, could learn a lot.

Sadly our forum has reached a stage where we have become less appreciative and less responsive. If a story is behind the locked doors, you have all the time to comment for it while the other writers and stories are taken for granted.( But I realise that isn't the issue here. If a writer isn't updating, one should realise there must be some reason behind it)

Anyways, meet you at our new home. Aapka ghar yani hamara ghar😆

Congratulations for the blog lady!!!!

Party sharty kab de rahi hai madam

Edited by Commelina - 8 years ago