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hi... this is my new OS which is a challenge from CookieMonster😊
Click here to see the challenge. hope you loved it CookieMonster😉

LOVE @ 1st SIGHT

"Dadi" was the last word he heard from Annie. the next moment the call got cut. he called
many times in both Annie and KM numbers but no answer at last a message to
reach KM as soon as possible. he was so worried for Dadi.
Already he lost his parents at the age of 10. Only dadi and annie was his world. he cant think
some think bad happening to them. he reached Delhi from Shimla in next flight. for security reasons Maan had arranged mini hospital in KM itself. Doctors have to report to KM in emergency. Now that was power of MSK. Khuranas go to hospital only for major problems.

he ran to Daadi's room only to find Annie making an angry face and Daadi looking not at all
interested. It was clear its not so serious. he was relieved. he left a sigh and asked them.
shall i know whats the matter?
bhai Annie ran to Maan. Bhai Daadi's sugar got low.
so suddenly. why? Maan sat near dadi holding her hand. you didnt take your medicine. right?
Maan looked at daadi in anger. Maan you know I hate medicine.
Annie and Maan glared and daadi dipped her head.

I want to talk to doctor uncle. Maan went to the door when he hit someone. Maan was going to
blast but looking at the person in front of him he couldnt say a word. A girl clad in a simple
green salwar with minimal make up. if angles are true then she would be the princess of all.
Angle Maan whispered which was heard only by him. he was in a trance. his trance broke
when he felt a sudden pull from back.

bhai!! doctor ko andar to aanedo... Maan looked at her hand it had a coat and stethoscope.
the girl forwarded her hand for a handshake hi i am Dr geet handa. As Dr Armaan was in OT i had come to attend Mrs Khurana. Maan touched her hand
only to feel a sudden current. your hands are very soft. what!! both Annie and geet said together.
I mean ... woh...nice to meet you.. is dadi fine.?
though geet heard what Maan said first, she ignored and said about dadi's health.
all dos and donts. Maan was just drooling over geet while Annie was carefully listening.

_________

Mr Khurana you are absolutely fine! geet almost blasted over Maan. It has been
a month from Maaneet's first meeting. Maan would make geet to come in KM everyday.
sometimes for dadi who had by till now did 3 annual checkups in last 1 month.
Even if Annie will have a small cut geet have to rush to KM. Most of the time its Maan who would call geet even for some small scratch.
Other than geet it was Annie and daadi who were amused by Maan. it was same Maan who would not even treat severe wounds who now starts getting concerned for even a small sprain. But this time it was the limit. he has been admited in this hospital
in the name of an accident when geet refused to attend khuranas. there was just a small wound in his hand and some scratches here and there but with the help of Dr Armaan Maan's best friend and senior Doctor of geet, Dr Armaan had made geet to take case of Maan. geet who had
just joined as a doctor could not decline Dr Armaan's order.
I would let you go but i have a small wound here too. saying this Maan
showed her a small scratch near his neck. geet smirked. she took an ointment and
put on the scratch. Maan hissed feeling pain in the scratch. the ointment really
burned. geet giggled and left the room leaving behind a fuming Maan.

_______

I hate him geet yelled. really? asked Ridhima. she was her best friend and colleague.
then?...i am tolerating because i cant deny my senior doctor. geet you could have if
you wanted. you know Maan likes you and treatment is just an excuse to meet you. but you accepted Dr Armaan's decision knowingly. geet kept mum.
Do you like him? riddima's sudden question made geet uncomfortable.
So you dont like him...then i will ask sam to proceed...
kya proceed?
woh sam Maan ko propose karnewali hai na...
what? geet yelled. noways...
kyun..he is the MSK - hot and handsome, rich and a gentleman. mein sam ko
phone karti hoon. saying this Ridz took her phone.
No! geet screamed. he likes me..woh sam ko reject karega.
geet woh like karta hai..but not love. waise bhi you dont like him so..
kisne kaha...I love him and i know he too loves me. kisi aur ke bare sochne bhi nahi doongi us dusht danav ko. geet snapped back.
ridz smirked. to kahdo na use.
he is the boy. he should tell first.
If he doesnt say then? ridz asked
Pata nahi. geet said while leaving for KM to attend Maan.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome here dear
going to read ...

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Originally posted by: priya_21

welcome here dear

going to read ...

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nice os
Loved it
Do this have another part?
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Originally posted by: Angeline124

nice os

Loved it
Do this have another part?


yes😊 i more...
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So sweet part ..
Maan likes Geet and look for chances to call Geet at home ..
Wow !! Geet loves him ..
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Wonderful part... Maan rush home thinking something Wrong with dadu but got a sweet shock in the name of Dr. Geet.. He is fida over her n troubling her evrrday.. When ridhima proposed sam fr maan.. Geet accept her love fr maan n expect him to propose her... Can't wait for next part..
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wow sooo lovly starting
maan is sooo cute..he's calling geet for little little things lovd it alo..liked geet n ritzi convo...😃😃 cant wait 4 nexttt...
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Originally posted by: CookieMonster.

wow sooo lovly starting
maan is sooo cute..he's calling geet for little little things lovd it alo..liked geet n ritzi convo...😃😃 cant wait 4 nexttt...


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superb os.
geet is doctor and maan calling her to km for small small reasons. lol
they both like eachother.
continue soon

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