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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely part. Dadi is not well and Geet who is a doctor came to attend her. Maan saw her and fida on her. Now it is a routine to call Geet in the name of even a small scratch. Geet irritated.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
its awesome
I like it
gud work 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
awesome os dear loved it waiting for the next part... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Nice os..
Dr. Geet nd Maan likes each other.
Waiting eagerly to for their confession
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Sweet , Lovely and Mischievous OS
Maan from the very first meeting was mesmerized with Geet and now
had on call on the time to attend not only Daadima but himself too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So sweet os...just loved total concept...update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hope you all love this part..especially CookieMonster😊

Last Part


A month passed but still Maan and geet didnt confess.
Maan was ready to confess but Armaan didnt allowed him. Armaan asked him
to make geet confess. Maan accepted it as a challenge on other side geet herself wanted maan to confess. both were now determined to make each other confess but how was the question.

Maan never failed to bring geet to KM. geet too never denied. it was one such day
geet was checking dadi's BP. she made her sleep and came to hall. Maan was pretending
to do some office work from his laptop. he was looking at geet unknown to her. for geet it
was first time Maan didnt notice her. to gain his attention she delibrately dropped her purse.
Maan tried his best to control his laughter. geet fumed. geet was going to say something
but Maan left the place. this was something geet never expected. she pouted and left the place.
Maan knew geet would feel bad but did it deliberately to make her little irritated.

A week passed Maan never called geet to KM shocking dadi and Annie more than geet.
Maan thought geet would confess if he does this way but Maan's plan backfired. geet
was now determined to make him confess first.
_______
geet planned to make Maan J. for that she asked her friend Atul to propose her
in front of Maan and others in the Diwali party thrown by the hospital trustees(including Khuranas). though Atul knew about Maaneet he had to bend before our sherni. Armaan got
to know about the plan and informed Maan. he asked Maan to be mum at that time.
though Maan agreed first but at the party time he became restless. Atul with great steps
was all ready to propose geet in front of Maan. least he wanted to be on MSK's
bad books for this act but he was more scared of geet than Maan. Atul bend down to propose geet. geet to felt the plan backfired as there was No expression in Maan's face. this was not she thought.
Atul was ready to deliver his dialogue which he practiced with geet before atleast 100 times.
Before he could utter the first word his mouth opened wide.

Maan kissed geet in front of all. geet was stunned by the kiss but was unable to
think anything else other than this sweet assault. Maan bit her lower lip as though showing his anger making her gasp. Maan entered insede her mouth tasting her sweet taste. As the
kiss turned passionate she too started responding. when both were out of breath
Maan left her lips. I LOVE YOU both said at same time only audible to each other.
geet's cheek turned red and Maan chuckled. that was it Maan lifted her left the hall
leaving all others to whistle and clap for them. who confessed first was still a
question for all.

_____

After the party both were happy. both had a romantic dinner. Maan
proposed her that night itself. within 2 weeks time both got married.
leaving all shocked with the fast forward progression of their relationship.
Dadi was the happiest soul who got an ideal daughter in law she always thought
of in geet. Annie too was for Maan. Everything was smooth but as always somethings never change. and that was Maaneet nokh-jhok which may start from anything but would end on who
confessed first. As there was no proof it was still a debate for both.

After 5 years...

so this was how prince said I LOVE YOU to princess. And princess won the bet. geet said the last word looking at Maan who was busy in his laptop.Maaneet's 3 year old son Aryan clapped and said Princess won Mama. Maan looked above the laptop. As far as I know it was
princess who said first. So Aryan Prince won .
No ways you said first geet pouted.
No I said after you said. Maan snapped. Acha! I could have told first if you would have left my Li... geet stopped seeing Aryan who was amused to see his Mom- Dad
fight like kids and eagerly waiting for his Mom to complete. Maan smirked and lifted Aryan.
Aryan lets sleep. And prince only won OK Aryan nodded. Both closed their eyes leaving fuming geet.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the PM dear
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Nice part yaar and tq for the pm

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