FF: KAUN HO TUM? 26th Mar: Chap 22 on Pg 99! - Page 25

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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful Update

Geet is mischievous and Maan enjoys her bubbly personality
she making Maan sing for her was just awesome beautiful song indeed
the wedding was beautiful at the time for Bidaai Geet did not cry but once she sat in the
car tears started rolling but having Maan with her probably made it easy

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Posted: 9 years ago
part 6
lovely update...
starting is too cute the way geet is whining about ek din aur usme kitne ghante hai 😆 and iss bas maza utha raha hai 😆
aeee its too cute the way maan pacified geet ...oh shadi ka time aagaya...next day shadi hai 😃and both are missing eachother very much..
uff geet and her teasing bechare maan ko kya shock diya 😆 poor maan yaha he is imagining geet will with him in his room and he will remove her ghunghat but geet geet hai sare sapne me nou baje ka pani pher dia 😆
aaye haye maan to geet ki raat ko lekar bhi possessive hai 😆
wah maan babu to bade jaldi geet k rang me dhal gaye he is flirting back to wah jee😳
uff maaneet ka romance aur ye nou baje ka kanta 😆 wah geet kya sart rakhi hai sing a song maan ...awww geet ki baat manni hi padi MSK tevar kaam nahi aaya 😉
wow what a beautiful song from maan for his geet...
ae le jiske liye gana gaya use hi kuch samajh me nahi aaya!!geet k dimag me koi switch hai shyad jo 9 baje off ho jata hai 😕
shadi ka din aagaya 🥳 aww love maan's thought about time...
barat aagyai 🥳 oye hoye maan aur geet to kho gaye ek dusre me ek ghar k bahar aur ek upar khidki pe😆
maan aur geet to romance ka koi bhi mouka nahi chodte varmala k tile bhi kho gaye ek dusre ki ankho me
the marriage rituals are so beautifully written...
ye geet ho apne vidai me bhi excited hai 🤣 aur uski maa ro rahi hai 😆 perfect for our jhalli geet😛she is too happy for her and maan's new life usko rone ka mode hi nahi hai 😆
loved brij's words before leaving he loves geet so much...
wow now maaneet are going to start their new life Mr and Mrs MSK 😉😃😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Donnaa

part 6

lovely update...
starting is too cute the way geet is whining about ek din aur usme kitne ghante hai 😆 and iss bas maza utha raha hai 😆
aeee its too cute the way maan pacified geet ...oh shadi ka time aagaya...next day shadi hai 😃and both are missing eachother very much..
uff geet and her teasing bechare maan ko kya shock diya 😆 poor maan yaha he is imagining geet will with him in his room and he will remove her ghunghat but geet geet hai sare sapne me nou baje ka pani pher dia 😆
aaye haye maan to geet ki raat ko lekar bhi possessive hai 😆
wah maan babu to bade jaldi geet k rang me dhal gaye he is flirting back to wah jee😳
uff maaneet ka romance aur ye nou baje ka kanta 😆 wah geet kya sart rakhi hai sing a song maan ...awww geet ki baat manni hi padi MSK tevar kaam nahi aaya 😉
wow what a beautiful song from maan for his geet...
ae le jiske liye gana gaya use hi kuch samajh me nahi aaya!!geet k dimag me koi switch hai shyad jo 9 baje off ho jata hai 😕
shadi ka din aagaya 🥳 aww love maan's thought about time...
barat aagyai 🥳 oye hoye maan aur geet to kho gaye ek dusre me ek ghar k bahar aur ek upar khidki pe😆
maan aur geet to romance ka koi bhi mouka nahi chodte varmala k tile bhi kho gaye ek dusre ki ankho me
the marriage rituals are so beautifully written...
ye geet ho apne vidai me bhi excited hai 🤣 aur uski maa ro rahi hai 😆 perfect for our jhalli geet😛she is too happy for her and maan's new life usko rone ka mode hi nahi hai 😆
loved brij's words before leaving he loves geet so much...
wow now maaneet are going to start their new life Mr and Mrs MSK 😉😃😆

OMG! Di! Kya mast review diya! I enjoyed reading it! And I am really glad you liked the update too! I wrote it in a hurry so was scared of reactions! Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
geet missed maan so much b4 marriage
she made maan sing for her
they got married
n geet is too bold without much innocence
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kalapna,
Lovely update! Maan and Geet are married. I loved the song. I agree it goes with Maan's image of singing !

LM
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LM1991

Kalapna,

Lovely update! Maan and Geet are married. I loved the song. I agree it goes with Maan's image of singing !

LM

Glad you agree with me!😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago


CHAPTER 7. THE WEDDING NIGHT!

Maan took in a deep breath and smiled softly. This is it! This was the night he made Geet his in every way. He chuckled as he remembered how exactly 24 hours ago Geet was whining about having one whole day separating them. Dekho Geet! Main aagaya! Khatam hui humaari intezaar! Ab humein koi alag nahi kar sakta!

Maan pushed the door open and entered his room. No! It was not his room anymore. It was their room. Geet and Maan's room! His eyes looked around taking in the room. All around were decorations that made him smile. Strings of flowers, colorful curtains, Maan was sure it was all his Daadima's planning. He shook his head as he remembered his Daadima dancing in front of his ghodi with the baaraat. He had to actually remind her that Doctor had told her to take things easy.

Then Maan's eyes fell on side table and he chuckled. Of course they left glass of milk and fruits. So traditional! There was even knife to cut the fruits. Maan chuckled. As if a husband and wife would want to sit and eat when there were other better things to do!

As Maan looked around, his eyes fell on the bed. Decorated with string of flowers and with petals of rose spread in the shape of heart right in the middle, the bed looked picture perfect. But where was the bride that was supposed to be sitting on the bed? Maan frowned. Geet kahaan hai? He continued to look around only to smile as he noticed her. She was standing by the sliding door that led to the open air terrace. The door was transparent and Maan was sure Geet was entranced by the scene outside. From behind he could only see her red lehenga and the red dupatta on her head. With a smile on his face and heart thudding in his chest, Maan trudged forward towards his wife. His wife?! Geet was his wife! Maan could not believe it. Is it only one week since he met her? He felt as if he knew her for eons.

As Maan came closer to Geet, he could not resist himself. He hugged her from behind tightly as he wanted to do since the moment his eyes fell on her. He hugged her close wanting nothing more than to feel her body against him and to convince himself that their wedding was not a dream and his Geet was really his.

"Chodiye mujhe!", Geet mumbled but Maan shook his head.

With eyes closed, he spoke, "Nahi! Mujhe yahaan achcha lag raha hai!"

"Dekhiye! Chodiye mujhe!", Geet's voice was stern.

Maan frowned, "Nahi!"

"MAIN KEHTI HUN CHODIYE MUJHE!", Geet shouted and pushed his hands away. That is when Maan realised that Geet had been trying to push his hands away since he hugged her.

"Geet?", Maan whispered confused as he looked at his wife.

Geet turned around and glared at him, "Himmat kaise hui aapki mujhe choone ki?"

"Geet!", Maan whispered as he tried to grab Geet's arms.

"Mat chuyiye mujhe! Aapko koi haq nahi mujhe choone ka!", Geet retorted.

Maan took in a sharp breath as he stared at Geet. Her eyes were filled with hatred as she glared at him. What is happening here? Maan could not understand.

"Geet! Yeh tum kya bole jaa rahi ho?", Maan was confused and then he understood. Geet was playing a prank on her! He started laughing loudly making Geet alarmed.

As his laughter calmed down, he smirked at Geet, "Geet! You and your pranks! Paagal ho tum!" He clapped at her, "Seriously Geet! Kya acting karti ho!" Saying this he stepped forward to hug her. She stepped back and slapped him.

Maan stumbled back in shock as he placed his hand on his cheek which was stinging from the slap.

"Geet!", Maan whispered as he looked at her aghast. Did Geet just slap him?

"Door raho mujhse!", Geet hissed at him as her eyes glared at him, "Aur main Geet nahi hun!"

Maan's mouth fell open. This was not his wife. Then who was she?

"Kaun ho tum?", Maan whispered in shock.

"Main Preet hun! PREET AHLUWALIA!", the girl roared and Maan stumbled back in shock again falling on the bed. He could not believe this! What is happening here? She is Preet! Lekin Preet toh Geet ka prank tha na! She is pranking him! Obviously!

Maan stood up in anger, "Geet! Bas hogaya!", he glared at her, "Mazaak karne ki bhi hadd hoti hai! Band karo yeh mazaak!"

He stepped towards her in anger and her face showed panic for a second. Maan watched with muted horror as the girl suddenly lunged at the side table and grabbed the knife.

"Geet!", Maan could only say her name as he stared at her in horror.

"Door hato!", she waved the knife at him and if he hadn't stepped back she might have sliced his skin.

"Mujhse door raho!", she spat.

"Tennu koi haq nahi mere paas aane ka!", she growled, "Jaao! TUSSI JAAO YAHAAN SE!"

When Maan stared at her in shock, she stepped ahead and slashed the knife at him. Once again Maan had to step back to avoid getting hurt. The girl's eyes were raging with anger and Maan realised that the girl had gone crazy.

"JAAO!", she roared again and headed towards him with the knife still ready to hurt him. Maan started to walk backwards till he reached the door.

"BAAHAR NIKLO!", she ordered with knife in her hand and Maan moved out of the room and the door was slammed shut on his face.

For few minutes, Maan simply stared at the door in shock. If he had not been shocked he would have tried to disarm Geet. After all, he was trained in martial arts. But the shock and suddenness of seeing his beloved Geet in such a way had rendered him speechless.

But as Maan stood outside the door, his shock gave way and in place of it came anger. How dare she! How dare she behave like this! Maan could not make head or tail! He turned around towards the stairs ready to storm down and out of the house to take his Jeep and go on a long drive! But as he stepped on the stairs, he remembered his Daadi. Daadima! Unka kamra toh neeche hai! Unhonein mujhe dekh liya toh? Shaadi ki raat main aise baahar nikla toh Daadima pareshaan ho jaayengi! Nahi! Main baahar nahi jaa sakta! Daadima ne dekha aur unhonein tension li toh unhein phirse dil ka daura padh sakta hai! Doctor ne kahaa tha Daadima ko koi tension nahi hona chaahiye! Unka BP thoda sa bhi unstable nahi hona chaahiye! Maan nodded to himself. He was not going anywhere!

He turned towards the room next to his and entered it. Luckily the relatives and guests had stayed in Hotel so no one saw him coming out of his room and entering the other room. As Maan entered the other room, he looked straight ahead and noticed the sliding glass door leading to the balcony. For a second he was sent few minutes back, when he had entered his room to see Geet standing facing the sliding door. He shook his head and sat on the bed. His eyes continued to draw to the sliding door and the balcony outside. His room and the room he was in currently shared the same open air terrace and each room had glass sliding door leading to it. This meant Maan could get inside the terrace and then look through the sliding door of his room. He could look at his Geet. But Maan shook his head. He was not sure he would look at her right now without getting angry.

Maan lied back on the bed and closed his eyes as the scene between his and Geet replayed in front of his eyes. Feeling nothing but sadness, Maan drifted off to sleep.

Naina Barse Rimjhim Rimjhim

Naina Barse Rimjhim Rimjhim

Piya Tore Aavan Ki Aas

Naina Barse Rimjhim Rimjhim

Naina...

Barse

Barse

Barse

Maan woke up with a jerk, feeling a little disoriented. He did not understand why he woke up so suddenly. He sat up and rubbed his eyes sleepily. And then he heard someone singing.

Woh Din Meri Nigaahon Mein

Woh Yaadein Meri Aahon Mein

Yeh Dil Ab Tak Bhatakta Hai

Teri Ulfat Ki Raahon Mein

Maan's eyes widened as all his sleep vanished. His first thought was Preet! Because he remembered her singing the same song in the Lodge! Preet yahaan kaise? He wondered groggily.

Sooni Sooni Raahein

Sehmi Sehmi Baahein

Aankhon Mein Hai Barson Ki Pyaas

Naina Barse Rimjhim Rimjhim

Naina...

Barse

Barse

Barse

The memories of last night came to fore and Maan took in sharp breath. Geet! Preet! Chaaku! Hey Babaji! His hand went to his forehead as his eyes went to the clock. It was 2 AM at night. Suddenly a logical thought came to his head. Who was singing at such a time?

Nazar Tujh Bin Machalti Hai

Mohabbat Haath Malti Hai

Chala Aa Mere Parvaane

Wafa Ki Shamma Jalti Hai

From his peripheral vision, someone in red shimmered amongst the glass door. Maan looked at the sliding door and he was shocked to see Geet standing in the balcony. She was facing against him and looking at the sky.

O Mere Humraahi

Phirti Hun Ghabraayi

Jahaan Bhi Hai Aaja Mere Paas

Naina Barse Rimjhim Rimjhim

Naina...

Barse

Barse

Barse

Maan scrambled off his seat and stood by the glass staring at the girl.

Adhoora Hun Main Afsaana

Jo Yaad Aaun Chale Aana

Maan closed his eyes as he remembered his dream of romancing Geet. Geet! Kahaan ho tum? Kyunki yeh tum nahi ho! Aur yeh mujhe pata hai!

Mera Jo Haal Hai Tujh Bin

Woh Aakar Dekhke Jaana

He closed his eyes as he leaned on the glass. He felt the cold glass on his forehead but he did not notice it.

Bheegi Bheegi Palkein

Chham Chham Aansu Chalkein

Khoyi Khoyi Aankhen Hai Udaas

Maan felt his eyes tear up as he remembered Geet hugging him on the terrace and crying.

Naina Barse Rimjhim Rimjhim

Naina...

Barse

Barse

Barse

Maan opened his eyes and noticed Geet, no the girl walking around listlessly. She was not his Geet! She will never be his Geet!

Yeh Laakhon Gham Yeh Tanhaayi

Mohabbat Ki Yeh Rusvaayi

Geet! Where are you? Maan looked at the girl with anger. Someone placed this girl in place of his Geet! What else is the explanation? Someone changed his bride inbetween the games and the wedding night.

Kati Aisi Kayee Raatein

Na Tum Aaye Na Maut Aayi

I hope Geet is alright! Maan closed his eyes and prayed.

Yeh Bindiya Ka Taara

Jaise Ho Angaara

Mehendi Meri Haathon Ki Udaas

Maan moved away from the glass and trudged to his bed. He lied down on it and promised himself. He will find his Geet tomorrow. He will make some excuse to his Daadima so that she did not worry and then he will hunt down his Geet! Because he refused to believe that the girl who waved the knife at him was his Geet!

Naina Barse Rimjhim Rimjhim

Piya Tore Aavan Ki Aas

Naina Barse Rimjhim Rimjhim

Naina...

Barse

Barse

Barse

Hi folks!

Did you like the update?

Looking forward to your reactions!

The song is from Woh Kaun Thi (1964) and is sung by Lata Mangeshkar.

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 9 years ago
Shocking and Surprising Update

Maan all excited to be with his wife but her strange behavior led him to think it cannot be Geet
did Preet take over Geet's body or something

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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my god.. Nooo way.. Ok no wonder ur title is woh kaun thi.. Kahin preet ki rooh toh nahi agayi geet ke andar.. Ya phir preets ghost is there.. Maybe maan should just ask the handas about preet.. Cont aoon hun... Amazingly suprising update

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