Mini OS: Kaun Ho Tum(Reader Vs Writer Challenge)

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Beautiful os yaar.. From arrange marriage to falling in love... In their past there were best fren... They have lovely cutie pie... Tk you.

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Nice one...

I like it.. it is sweet n simple

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Beuatiful os. loved it👏

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Any work from u ana is always special nd beautiful . Ur stories always reflect loads of love and affection .u create a world where we connect to the characters nd feel all those emotions what they go through .this os has simplicity yet touchy . Love to read ur works ,keep,writing

Edited by hermoso - 10 years ago

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: hermoso
Any work from u ana is always special nd beautiful . Ur stories always reflect loads of love and affection .u create a world where we connect to the characters nd feel,all those emotion what they go through .thid os has simplicity yet touchy . Love to read ur works ,keep,writing

thank u soo much yaar...

readers like u and comment like these are what nake me work and write to the best of my capability...

so glad that u feel connected to my stories and like reading it...

thank u so much yaar...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

hi congrats on another OS! Always a pleasure reading ur stories! magnificent OS! beautifully written! Maaneet married n have a lovely daughter! Maan admires his wife n daughter! he recalls hw they met! His mama saw Geet! lovely moments! Geet teases Maan! its Maanpreet's bday n Maan forgot! Geet upset! terrific party! Loved the gift frm Geet! she is angry abt the puppy! Maan sees the gift n asks Geet! so he gave it 2 her! awesome end! 👏⭐️

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

lovely concept dear ...very beautifully written !! ..

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Beautiful hun.. Maaneet knew eachother since school.. Cute..

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

OS Was Superb

I Liked It ...Maan and Geet were friends in childhood for at least a year

and when Geet gifts her daughter the gift that Maan gave her when she was 10 years old

he tells Geet the story and she tells him that it was indeed she the friend

Maan goes to Geet house as its a arrange marriage and he is happy with Geet so agrees

to the marriage and from that time he has lived in happiness with his wife both in love with each other and have a beautiful daughter

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi congrats on another OS! Always a pleasure reading ur stories! magnificent OS! beautifully written! Maaneet married n have a lovely daughter! Maan admires his wife n daughter! he recalls hw they met! His mama saw Geet! lovely moments! Geet teases Maan! its Maanpreet's bday n Maan forgot! Geet upset! terrific party! Loved the gift frm Geet! she is angry abt the puppy! Maan sees the gift n asks Geet! so he gave it 2 her! awesome end! 👏⭐️

thank you so much dear...
I hope my work will keep on entertaining you forward too...

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