MG FF - Hum Apke Hain Kaun? Updt pt 43 on pg 39 May 31

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Story line...

A hatke story on our Maneet, not the typical love story between Maan and Geet... Can't reveal much for it will spoil the joy of reading... Something different from usual Maneet romance...



Starting this FF on Tamil New year...


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Hum Apke Hain Kaun?


Prologue…

The grand entry of our hero, Maan Singh Khurana as the Royal Prince of his family…

The Khuranas….

Amarnath(late) and Devika Devi Khurana(late) – MSK’s Grandparents

Jagdish Khurana – Their elder son ; Naina Khurana – his wife

Madan Khurana – Their younger son ; Sheetal Khurana – his wife

Maan Singh Khurana – The one and only scion of the Khurana Khandan

Maan is not just another child in his family, he is God’s gift after years of prayers by his family…

The Khurana family tree is a lean one, with dwindling lineage in every other generation…

Amarnath Khurana was also a single child, he had no cousins, all his uncles had no children…

Luckily he had two sons, Jagdish and Madan……

Jagdish still has no heir….

But Madan had Maan after a few years of his marriage…

They say that it’s some kind of a curse on the Khurana family that they always have problems with having their off-springs…

Maan’s birth….

It’s celebration time after a long wait for the Khurana pariwar…

Their little prince is here and the wait for the heir has ended after nearly a decade..

Jagdish doesn’t have a child yet and even Madan had to wait for 6 six years to welcome the prince…

Naina is happy to welcome the baby more than anyone else…

Why shouldn’t she be?

After all the shaming by the relatives and the humiliation suffered by the Khurana family, especially the ladies, it’s time to shut everyone’s mouth with Maan Singh Khurana’s arrival…

Maan has a royal welcome, why not?, his entry into the Khurana Pariwar has restored their family pride, as far as the outsiders are concerned, and more importantly restored the smile on everyone’s face in the family itself…

Sheetal is still tired after the delivery….

Naina holds the baby….

Naina: babaji ki lakh lakh sukar hai, aakhir unhonne meri dua qubool kardhi, aaj mein bhi maa bangayi

Sheetal is only happy to hear that….

Sheetal: kaise dikh raha hai didi?

Naina: bilkul Rajkumar dikhtha hai hummara beta, ab iss Khurana Khandan ko yahi Raj karega

Naina has already started dreaming about their bright future…

Naina was praying to every God she knew, while she kept Sheetal’s belief alive that they could become mothers soon with the almighty’s blessings, She didn’t complain when her co-sister conceived before her, she was actually happy that babaji has answered her prayers somehow, she took utmost care of Sheetal during her pregnancy…

Sheetal loved Naina like her elder sister, Naina protected her like a mother from the evil talks and abuses of the society for not being able to bear a child….

Whenever Sheetal lost hope and felt like someone with a huge flaw in herself, Naina scolded her for thinking negative and very low about herself….

Naina: aaise koi sochtha hai kya? Kammi sirf hummari hi kaise hogi? Tum hi bathao, hum do alag pariwar ke betiyan hai, kami toh iss pariwar mein hi hai, najaane inn logon ne pichle janam mein kisski ghar bigada hai, ab hum saza parahe hai inki wajhe se

Sheetal: toh hummari shadhi issi pariwar mein kyun hui? Humne bhi zaroor koi paap kiya hoga didi

Naina: hare pagli, tum bahut nadaan ho, aur tumhara dil saaf hai, babaji tumme kabhi nirash nahi karenge, tum umeed rakho apne aap pe, tum bahut jaldh hi maa banogi

Sheetal: aap bahut achche ho didi, aaisa hi hai toh mujhse pehle aap maa banoge

Naina had all the bad experiences in the years before Sheetal came to the khandan and when people started pointing fingers on Sheetal too, after her marriage to Madan, then itself Naina decided that she would shield Sheetal from all the negativity which she thought affected her own chances of becoming a mother more than anything else…

Madan is a proud father now….

He gifts his wife all the jewels of her choice….

Madan: mein papa ban gaya hoon Sheetal, tumhare bina mein ye kar nahi sakta

Sheetal: aap ke pyaar ke bina bhi ye hotha nahi hai ji

Sheetal is all blushing…

Madan: tumne hummari kadan ki bawishya ko bachaliya hai

Sheetal: ye toh bagwan ki kripa hai, humme unko shukriyada karna chahiye

Madan: mujhe toh pehle tumme shukriya kehna hai

Sheetal: aaise bade bade batein kyun kar rahe ho? Mein iss duniya ki pehli maa toh nahi

Madan: tumme patha nahi ki aaj mein kitna kush hoon, tumne hum sab ke mann ki bahut badi bhoj ko aaj halka kardhi

Sheetal: mein bhi aaj bahut kush hoon ji, mujhe bhi “maa” kehke bhulane wala koi aagaya hai

Though Jagdish always wanted to have his own child, he is happy that it’s a boy and not a girl…. He has to be content that there is someone to take the family forward…

Jagdish is an ardent follower of astrology and he strongly believes that he would become a father only after his brother as the stars predicted….

He is happy in that case, now that his brother has a child his chances of having a child seems brighter than ever….

Sheetal duty is only to feed Maan, everything else is taken care of by Naina…

Naina takes good care of Sheetal too….

Maan has the privilege of having the love and care of two mothers, he is pampered a lot by the men too….

One evening…

Sheetal and Naina are watching Maan walk on his own for the first time….

Sheetal held his hands initially and then let him try on his own…

Maan takes his baby steps wobbling as he is trying to balance… his cute act delights the two ladies…

Naina: aaj hummara Maan kitna bada ho gaya?

Sheetal: haan didi, ab chalna bhi seekh gaya, patha nahi kab nana munna Maan itna bada hua?

Naina: hare Sheetal, tum bhi na? Maan ke paithe hue ek saal hone wala hai

Sheetal: waqt kitne jaldhi guzar gaya ?

Naina: kushiyon ka waqt bahut jaldhi guzar jaatha, kyunki hum kushi mein waqt ko bhool hi jaathe

Sheetal: aap bahut sahi kehte hai didi

Naina: tumne kab meri baat ko galat kaha?

Sheetal: aap kabhi galat baat karte hi nahi

Naina: phir kya tum galat batein karthi rehthi ho?

Sheetal: aaisa nahi didi, aap bade ho, bade bade batein karte ho

Naina: tum itne achchi kaise ho sakti? Bagwan tumare har khwaish puri karein aur tum dono ko aaise hi kush rakhe

Naina takes the kajal from her eyes and keeps a teeka on Sheetal’s face…

Naina: bagwan tumme sare bhure nazar se bachayein

Naina is very protective of the mother and the son since Sheetal got pregnant…

Naina has this fear that, since everyone is only talking about Maan’s birth and how it has brought back the happiness of the family it will bring bad luck to them….

Sheetal: humme Maan ke janam din ko bahut dhoom dham se manana hai

Naina: haan, bahut din badh hummare ghar mein dwahar ka mohaal aaya hai

They have a huge celebration for Maan’s first birthday…

Sheetal is so happy that her son received all the love from everyone, it’s always a joy to have a child at home, and there is nothing more precious than the happiness the child brings to the family….

Maan starts speaking a few words…

Both the mothers enjoy his childish blabbers together…

Maan calls both of them “maa” only…

That was the first word he correctly pronounced…

He used to call everyone the same way…

Sheetal corrected him and taught him to call them with their respective relationship but let him call Naina “maa” only…

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congrats for new story

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Maan is totally the prince of his house. He made his entry on his own time.

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With two mothers to fuss over him, he will not lack love.

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Interesting concept. 🤩

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Congrats on the new FF!

Awesome character sketch

but nothing about Geet???

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Congratulations on your new story


Prologue is Intriguing


waiting for this story to unfold

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