MG OS#29: Mere Liye Ho Tum

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wonderful story with strong messages

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

It was a beautiful read and very well written. The bond between Maan and Geet is divine. The way he took care of her and supported her awesome and she in turn trusted him completely.

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piyasa

@asmani

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

this one is awesome write up

i read it twice and want to read more about this story

u r great writer and you explained it in so detail👏👏

i can't wait for the get preet convo part

hope u will post it soon.

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

such a beautiful n heart touching os...

love the way maan care for his geet managing home office n taking care of her...

he sensed preet's increasing infatuation n send her away before its become a big problem...he dosen't like anyone's presence betwwen them...

he didn't hide the fact from geet about preet,...

loved it...

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Very sensitive and delicate issue.

Very well written.

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Very well written. Deals with problems which happen in life. Love the love and trust between Maan and Geet.

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Amazing story. Very well described emotions.

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Rucha

@frnd.of.frndz

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hey Ana..

Everytime you pen down a OS it is so different and so unthinkable..

This OS is really beautiful yaar.. by the looks of it, it is such a simple concept of a younger sibling getting infatuated to ur spouse or ur love supporting you in tough times.. it is so normal.. we all make our draft of an ideal partner somewhere from our lives only.. some of us look at our parents as an ideal couple or someone else who we admire so much to think of them to be so perfect that come what may we'll do anything to get somebody like them.. but just as you have specified here, there is a line that needs to be drawn to differenciate between reality and our imaginations..

you have written it so nicely.. not a single word is vulgar yet love is felt even in the tiniest moments of their togetherness..

I am seriously in Love with ur writing and no matter how many times I say that, it seems less to me.. 😳 Just Perfectly Written.. waiting to read the other installment of it..

Luv Rucha

Edited by frnd.of.frndz - 9 years ago

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Inertia14

@Inertia14

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Beautiful story it was unique, I loved the feel of love and care you embedded in each of your words..Maan's concern and geet's pain he was truly a companion and the way he dealt with preet was commendable he was straight and strict

His words were apt and I liked the way he prioritised it Geet was his concern and he didn't want preet's behaviour to effect her or his concentration...despite that he also tried to maintain the dignity of there (geet & preet's) relationship by not telling things to geet ot was only wen geet forced him then he revealed the reason

I am glad how even geet handled the revelation there are things for her to do now and i know she will do it well. Her faith in maan is unshakable even one the other one on end was her own sister.

Hope she makes preet understand things and open her eyes to see how her infatuation was wrong and painful.

Waiting for next part

Love

Ayu