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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Nice concept n different also..

Also Every character is potrayed nicely..

Loved it

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aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Its a beautiful piece of writing as always and you handled a very mature topic wonderfully. Some lines are not to be crossed and that's the basic truth. Guess that's the difference between love and attraction.

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Another Superb OS Ana 👏

Loved the wat u used both the songs just BEAUTIFUL 😃

You showed love n understanding between Maan n Geet was just awww

Attraction n Immature crush of young girl loved the way Maan handled the situation 😊

In short I loved it..

Waiting for second part of this OS 😃

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

hi thanks 4 da pm! read n commented already!

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

ana..

ur all work r superb ..don't under estimate yourself ..

this os is superb

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

awesome OS... the way maaneet's journey, their life n struggles were written its amazing

also preet n the way maan handled her was good...n hope geet could guide her in right way coz all she need is being guided correctly and she is in the very sensitive n dangerous stage of life which can make or break a person...

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

such a beautiful n heart touching os...

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Amazing story...

this is reality of any sisterly bond that most of the times younger sisters get attracted towards their BIL...but Maan's one strict decision stopped Preet's advancements...but this will not end here...Geet has to do something that can erase this infatuation from Preet's mind...

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Wow. Frankly speaking I loved this story. For the topic you chose.

Infatuation, crush and attraction in teenage days are common. But it indeed needs to be handled and guided so that the person don't end up thinking that it's love.

I kind of felt for Preet. I understand and support Maan for how he handled the situation from his pov but somewhere I hoped he shouldn't have been so rude and straightforward. This could embarrass Preet and make her uncomfortable around him forever now. Had he dismissed her politely and gotten Geet to explain things to Preet then maybe Preet wouldn't have been so hurt. The only reason I understood Maan's behavior was cos he was shown as a private person from the start.

MG story was heartwarming. Maan's love, loyalty and dedication towards Geet was really sweet. He was so possessive about his moments and his life that revolved around Geet and his daughter. Usually people are possessive about other people this was different as Maan was shown possessive about his privacy which meant only for Geet. It was a good change.

Enjoyed reading this one. I really loved how you showed Preet's infatuation. From the books to the girl talks and then witnessing with her own eyes the love Maan has for Geet. All this things led for her to think Maan is the ideal partner and husband which further went on to the dream of having him as the one for her. I loved the flow.

Looking forward to the next part. Hoping Preet understands Geet and doesn't get offended.

-Sanjana!

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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

It was so much of a sensitive story.

Generally men tend to jump at a new girl they get bcoz attraction is between strangers n it cant be there with ppl who r known to each other like husband wife

But maan is so different here, a perfect hubby

Continue with the next part soon...luv u