MG OS : Made in Heaven - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
such a cute lovely OS finally maan the acp and geet the chulbuli is happy 😊 and are meant to be together are finally together 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. so sweet story of love MAneet... they are so sweet n understanding.. though geet is sweet angel of Maan's life.. but Maan is too angel of Geet's life.. Finally it was Geet who fought to save their relation must say in her cute ways..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing n beautiful story dear...its mixture of all essences of the life...from happiness to sadness, love to heartbreak... freindship to marriage

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful story. Inspite of father being bad kid is good. The only thing hands did good was keeping geet innocent so that maan could get her out safely and maje her his life partner
Or rather geet proposing him
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Wow.. so sweet story of love MAneet... they are so sweet n understanding.. though geet is sweet angel of Maan's life.. but Maan is too angel of Geet's life.. Finally it was Geet who fought to save their relation must say in her cute ways..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Their emotions are beautifully penned.
His waiting and her innocence made their story more beautiful.

His restlessness and her anger made them a lovely couple.

Awesome one-shot.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Lovly os
indeed dis jodi is made in heaven...loved it alot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW!! excellent os dear...loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: pearl.white

Fabulous story!!
Maan was an absolute gem of a person!!
The story had so many ups and downs but the culmination or rather the new beginning of their life was beautiful.

Geet was restricted to her college and home due to her dad being a criminal. She wished to experience the world. Kuch choti choti khwahishei thi uski.

Maan worked in her father's gang for a year and Geet has always disliked him.

Geet tries to sneak out of the house to see the fire crackers but at the end moment, Maan catches her but he is captivated by the innocent angel and allows her to watch. The happiness on Geet's face soothed his sou.

Maan was actually an undercover agent on a mission to catch her father for his illegal activities. Geet comes to know of his mission and breaks down. He promises her that he would not kill her father.

On the crucial day, Geet follows Maan to the drug deal meet and he reassures her and leaves her in the protection of his subordinate Gautam. Maan's patience and care for her is really palpable here.

Later Geet gets caught in crossfire and her own father refuses to protect her. Such a heartbreaking moment for the innocent girl who considered her father a hero. But fate had bestowed upon her a personal hero who stepped in to save her . He even gets fatally injured in order to keep his promise to the angel. Geet is frantically worried for him as he gets shot.

Finally the evil ends and Maan gains conscious. His first thoughts are about Geet and he is distressed to see her condition at the orphanage. He rescues her and brings a smile on her face. He fights his senior officer who turns out to be his mamu to take her with him. And he then provides her a 'home'

He makes her comfortable. He is her pillar. He takes all her sadness upon himself, and showers happiness upon her. He makes her strong enough to fight the world and gets her to be independent. Hd he wanted , he could have kept her with him for his sake but his love was selfless . He wanted her to be a free bird.

Meanwhile these 6 months made Geet fall in love with him. She lightened up his dull life with her presence and childish innocence. She is elated when he gifts her her dream of dance.

She works hard during the intervening years. She grows and her feelings bloom for him . She is now his deewani, his jogan. She has now acheived her dreams and now her desire is to reunite with this man who always stood for her.

He comes to meet her at her graduation and his soul glows with happiness to see her acheive success. But he does not want to tie her up with him. He wants her take her own decisions. He is happily ready to be her friend forever and her happiness matters the most and thus he gives her a choice .

She is happy to go back to her 'home' which is Maan himself. As rightfully said "home is where heart is" .
And her heart has always been his. She is weaving a dream of happy life with her soulmate ahead but receives a speadbreaker when Maan offers her father's house back. She is rightfully miffed at him for being unable to understand her love when she has always known his. She gives him a good silent trameatment and threatens him.

He is scared off her anger and is sad that he hurt her. Later on at the birtday party, Geet proposes him in the most beautiful way. I liked tmhat Geet understood her selfless jerk and proposed him. Yay, I admire a girl who is fearless in cobmnfessing her heart to the man she loves publicly. They have their happily ever after.

It was an enthralling tale of two hearts that beat for one another. Your penmanship skills are amazing and the events kept on flowing smoothly. Wonderful work.


waoo ..this is in the last 3 years i.e; since i registered here is the longest comment ever ..
n i am totally overwhelmed ..really
thanks for this appreciation n ur lovely reviews
truly means alot hard work paid off ..!!

luv ya
sobia

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi sobia

yeh dil maange more ..
plz ek epilogue ..please ..showing maneet's happy married life ..and little bit trouble as maan is acp so less time for geet .,.
plz ek epilogue to banta hai itni wonderful story ke liye ..
i am missing maneet moments here ..their togetherness ...
a little showcase of past ..when geet in hostel missing maan ...
maan missing geet at his house ..
plz ..



hayee tabby meri jaan ...How r you
thanks for ur lovely review
n about ur request ...i can try definitely ..but it would take time
u know i haven't typed BreakFree's epilogue yet ..

but i will ..pakka

luv ya
sobia

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