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Posted: 9 years ago

hello everyone,😃

got 4 days eid holidays n was stuck with this story ..😳

For those new readers ...i m Sobia ..one mad n now-a-days inactive 🤢 writer of geet forum n

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MG OS Made In Heaven

New year night ...the whole dehli city was celebrating n was glowing with lights n happiness while thr was one girl sitting in a dark room with a forlorn look looking outside seeing the beach swarming with the people having n some preparing for the fireworks at mid night ...but will it be any fun watching it from this far n more specifically alone in a room ...she also wants to be out among those youngsters of her age enjoy like them ...party like them n not sit here n sulk in boredom just coz her father is a big shot businessman with connections to the wrong people n she is the only child ...the only remembrance of his dear wife who left them after giving birth to her daughter ..

She was sitting on her pink Barbie bed looking outside her window when the door cracked open illuminating her room n thr she was her only friend n companion as long as she can remember ..Simran ..

Kya geet aaj tu uncle bhi ghar par nahi hain aur neeche sab party kar rahe hain n tu yahan bethi hai ..

Tu kya karoon neeche aaon aur snacks khaon ..songs suno ..boring jokes par hasoon n then ..then what wapis iss hi room mien aakar so jaon ..aisa huta hai kya new years celebration ..

Hmm ..tu janti hai na ...humara new year celebration aise hi huta hai ...

Yeah right ..guards ke beech hum sab ghar mien kaid (captive) ...

Tujhe shukar karna chahiye tere papa ne tujhe college jaane diya warna unka bas chalta tu tujhe college bhi ghar mien parhwaate ..

Whats the difference swati ..college mien bhi kuansa koi hum se baat karta hai ...even teachers get scared of dad before even scolding me ..

Acha abb yeh sab chor ...aaj ki raat mann mat kharaab kar chal neeche chalet hain ...raamu kaka ne tere fav dishes banayi hain n anita kaki ne tere itna acha sab decorate kiya hai ...chal na ...pradeep bhaiya bhi aaj tu humare saath party kar rahe hain ..

Gun haath mien lekar right ..!!

Geet ...chal na yaar

Mujhe nahi jaana simran ...please yr tu jaa

Uff phir kya karna hai tujhe ..new years night par yahan room mien akele bethna hai ..

Nahi bahar jaana hai ...wahan iss beach ko last 18 years se iss window se dekha hai but aaj wahan un sab logoon ke beech mien jaa kar dekhna hai ...dekhna ke fire crackers ko door se dekhna jitna acha lagta hai kya unka shor bhi utna hi acha hai ...unn lehroon ko mehsoos karna hai ...kya sach mien jitna sakoon inko dekh kar milta hai utna hi unn ko mehsoos kar ke bhi huga ...mujhe jaanna hai unn dunya ko simran jis se papa ne mujhe humesha door rakha hai ...

Geet uncle ne agar aisa kiya hai tu koi waja tu hugi na ...

Han hugi waja ...par abb dum ghota hai mera ghar se college aur college se ghar ki iss life mien ..

Simran sighed in defeat not knowing what to say Rajveer Handa had been so protective about his daughters' safety he never allowed her a social life n what he allowed was affected by his own doing ..after all who will like to be friends with the daughter of a criminal ..

Simran new years gift degi mujhe ..

Simran looked up n saw a new glow in geet's eyes n she knew instantly it wasn't a good sign ..

Geet kya chal rha hai tere dimag mien ..

**^^**

Geet had successfully made it to the back wall of the Handa Mansion n now her heart beat wasn't in her control anymore it was beating along with the rhythm of the music being played on the beach ..geet placed the wooden bench by the wall n stood over it to climb the wall but just as she placed her hands on the edge to jump on the other side the alarm started buzzing in full volume ..panic set in her n she tried to get off the wall however her luck wasn't with her her dupatta got stuck on the metal lamp poll while she was struggling to get it free she heard the arrogant filled voice of the man she currently hates the most ..

Need any help Ms. Disaster Queen ..😉

Geet (st) : Uff ..aagaya Maan dusht danav Khurana ..😆 babaji dad ki fauj mien ulti dimaag ke kam nahi thay jo aapne isko bhi bhej diya ...upar se saare time aisa lagta hai mere upar nazar rakhne ke elawa koi aur kaam nahi hai isske paas ..

Geet glared him with a pouting face n red anger filled eyes ...she looked so cute n a total mess sitting thr on the wall in a baby pink shalwar suit ..her hair scattered out of her pony n dupatta tangled in the poll ..n still she was trying to look angry when actually she looked so damn adorable ...maan had such a hard time controlling his smile at her struggling form ..he finally gave up n stepped onto the bench to help her get her dupatta free but she wacked his hand away ..

Choro choro mera dupatta ...mien karloongi samjhe tum ..

Who tu dekh hi rha hai ..

Listen ziada over smart banne ki zarorat nahi hai ek tu mera poora plan kharaab kar diya upar se ...dhust danav kahen ke ...jao yahan se ..waise bhi pata hai mujhe poori fauj tyaar hugi abb tak tu mujhe rokne ke liye ...hugaya mera new year aaj tu barbaad ..

Maan looked at her she looked so innocent n he knew that it wasn't just in her looks at was her heart ..the pure n most beautiful heart that this girl possess free from any evil unlike her father she is the epitome of innocence n goodness ..n its only coz she is still untouched by the evils of the outer world ..for a person like him who has seen so much brutality n so much of evil in the world it was so difficult to accept that someone like her still exist in this world when he entered this mansion an year back but today he know better than to let her go outside on her own ...today he understands y her father n his boss Rajveer Handa doesn't want his daughter out thr exposed to the world ..but then she is missing out on so many things n nobody can protect her forever ... maan glanced at her n she had her tears sitting on the edge of her eye lids still trying to get her dupatta free with shaking hands ...maan was taller of course he could see the preparations of the final fireworks of tonight just done indicating thr are only few seconds left for the new year ..

Geet who dekho fire works start hone wale hain ..

Geet looked on the beach it was easy for her since she was sitting on the wall ...she saw some people at the very edge of the shore ready with the fire crackers n a huge crowd gathered at a good distance hooting n thr began the count down ...maan smiled seeing the grin plastered on her face n the twinkle in her wet eyes ...but he heard some movement n saw a few of the guard coming thr way ...he turned n signaled them to wait thr ...they were confused seeing geet up on the wall but couldn't argue with their head ..so stood thr ...while geet sat thr lost n laughed seeing the fireworks ...she looked like a young child watching it for the first time ...with the big blast she flinched back in fear hearing the noise but then just as the sky got coloured with different shades her smile was back making maan lost in her beauty n innocence ..the crowd cheered happy new year n so did geet n maan stepped down smiling at her childishness ...geet finally paid attention to her stuck dupatta got it freed n all her enthusiasm vanished in thin air seeing a line of guards standing thr watching her n the head shaitaan standing thr with a smirk ..

Aab aap neeche aane ka kasht karengi geet madam ..

Geet smiled at him sarcastically n jumped on the bench n then on the grass ..brushed her dress n her hand off the dust n started walking away when maan shouted ..

Your Welcome ...😛😆

Geet looked back n showed him her tongue stuck out n ran inside ..to which he only smiled n shook his head ..

Pagal larki ..😳

**^^**

Tu tune dekha fireworks ...sach mien !!

Han dekha wahin wall par beth kar ...(geet giggled in excitement still bubbling in her) pata hai ek blast fire hua n the noise itna scary tha ..mien tu ek min ko darr hi gyi thi ..yahan room se dekhne se tu lagta hai ke bas fire lagayi aur hugaya blast but aaj samajh aaya pehle cracker ke blast hone ki excitement aur phir poora time wohh feeling ...haayee simmo I can't tell you aur phir when u r completely lost in the lights n fire ek dum itni zor ki awaaz aur poora aasmaan Rangoon se bhar jaana ...it was beautiful ..

Chal finally teri khwahish tu poori huyi ..

Hmm ..wohh tu hai ...par pata hai kaise goor raha tha mujhe wohh dusht danav ...stupid idiot ..

Geet ..!! Maan bhaiya itne bhi boore nahi hian ..dekho aaj unhoon ne tumhain fire works bhi dekhne diye ..

Tu meri dost hai ya uski ..

Of course tumhari geetu ..

Tu phir uss sado ki side mat le ...samjhi tu !!

Okie madam ..abb chalien kuch khayegi bhi ya nahi ..

Han chalo chalo mujhe tu itni bhook lagi hai na ...

**^^**

Finally all the servants went to servant's quarter n all guards were on thr place when geet slept while watching her ever favorite dil tu pagal hai ...n here maan made it to his room after another exhausting day but strangely he had a smile on his face still after all the tiredness ...n the reason was non other than the disaster queen ...her antics ..tht cute jhoota ghussa ..uska attitude ..

Walking towards his room lost in geet's memories of the day maan heard some movement inside his room ...alert on his senses he readied his weapon n opened the door only to have his second in command guard of the mansion Pradeep searching his stuff n what he was holding was wrong bit of information ...

Pradeep ...

Maan khurana ...shak tu humesha se tha mujhe tujh par ...aaj sabot bhi mil gaya ..

Maan sighed n closed the door with his leg n advanced very calmly towards him ..

Tumhain iss tarha mere room mien nahi aana chahiye tha ..

Last 1 year se humien jitna nuksaan hua sab teri waja se ..tu hi police ka informer hai humare beech ..pradhan ...ashotush ..neil sab ki maut teri waja se huyi ..

Abb itna jaan gaye hu tu chalo mien hi tumhain bata deta hoon apna poora sach ..

Mien yahan police informer nahi hoon ..

Bulke Indian Secret Service Agent hoon jo tumhare gang ko poori tarha se khatam karne ka mission lekar yahan aaya hai ...aur pechle ek saal se apna plan execute kar rha hoon ...

Aur abb itna bata diya hai tu yeh bhi bata deta hoon ke agle 10 din baad Rajveer Handa naam ka insaan iss dunya mien nahi huga ..

Teri tu ...

But with a smooth high kick maan knocked him on the ground n a kick on his stomach was all it took to make him loose his sense of balance n for maan to grab a pillow n shoot him on the spot ..nothing heard ..no mess ...n problem solved ...since last one year maan has been doing this living here ...damaging Rajveer Handa's gang internally informing policed about thr deals ...n eventually setting the plan to finish them ..it took him an year to be able to reach this point n now he couldn't let this nuisance ruin his hard work of an year ..clearing his room setting everything right ..he dialed the number to his most trusted officer ..Gautam Kumar ..

N thr he was with his truck just down the window of maan's room from where he threw the body of pradeep n gautam immediately left from thr dialing back to maan ..

Sir ji yeh kya ..

He saw my id gautam I had to kill him ...

Tu abb ...

Nothing ..build some story ...he was a wanted criminal after all ...itna mushkil nahi huga tumhare liye ..

Sure sir don't worry kaam hujayega ..

Good ..all the best ..

**^^**

How the hell this can happen ...Pradeep unke haath laga kaise ..

Rajveer sahab ...new years night par pradeep bhai bahar nikal gaye tha ..ghar par party chal rhi thi aur phir achanak unhoon ne kaha unko kuch kaam hai uske baad kisi ne unko ghar mien nahi dekha ...aur phir subha yeh news aayi ...kisi local dhabe par unko pakar kar encounter kar diya police ne ..

Mujhe samajh nahi aaraha hai key eh sab hu kaise raha hai ...maan kahan hai ..??

Wohh wohh geet madam ko college se lene gaye hain ..

Jaise hi wohh ghar aayega usko bolo mujhe call kare ..

Gi ..gi sir ji ..

**^^**

Hi maan ..kaise hu ??

Geet tabiyat theek hai na ..

Han meri tabiyat ko kya hona hai ..

Tu aaj mien dusht danav se maan kaise hugaya ..

Wohh ..woh tu mien aise hi bol deti hoon ...I ..i don't mean that actually mien ..

Hmm ...ghar chalen ..

Nahi who actually mujhe ...mujhe ek kaam tha ..

Now u r talking ...

Bolo ..

Wohh mujhe simran ke liye gift lena hai ..

Fine mujhe bata dena I ll get it for you ..

Nahi mujhe khud jaa kar lena hai ..

Geet tum janti ho yeh nahi hu sakta ..

Please ..please dekho college mien prom night hai aur simran ke paas ek bhi dress nahi hai ..kuansa tum uska dress select kar sakte hu ..please maan mujhe le chalo ..

Yeh aaj mujh se kyun keh rahi ho ..humesha tou rajveer sir se request huti hai ..

Coz papa nahi manege aur ..aur tumhare ilawa koi aur yeh nahi kar sakta ...

Geet online shopping hu sakti hai ..online order kardo simple ..

Han but phir uska fabric n color sab buhat important huta hai na ...aur waise bhi I want ke simran prom night par sab se sundar lage ..fir uss stupid Natasha mou na humesha ke liye band hujayega humesha simran ko chirhati hai ..witch kahin ki ..

Geet par ...

Geet held his hand n pleaded like a child ..

Please maan ...please ...dekho I promise aaj ke baad mien tumhain bilkul pareshaan nahi karungi aur ..aur tumhari coffee bhi kharaab nahi karungi ...please ek baar mujhe mall le chalo ..

Maan thought for a moment she looked so troubled n was requesting so much for the first time in an year he was addressed by his name ..this must mean very much to her ..n then he was looking for an excuse to get away from the mansion to meet his chief to discuss the plan for arresting rajveer handa ..

Okie but sirf ek baar ..

Done ...aaj ke baad kabhi nahi ..

N hum sirf ek shop par jakar ghar wapis jayenge ..

Okie ...(geet jumped in excitement n kissed man on his cheeks) ..thank u ..thank u so much maan ..

Geet ran to sit in the car while he stood thr rooted by the sensation she just awaken in him ..his whole body shuddered with a mere touch of her still wanting to feel more ..maan touched his cheeks n felt them warm ..his heart beats higher than normal still reliving the moment when geet shouted from inside the car ..

Chalo abhi warna hum late hujayenge ..

Maan drove them to the nearest mall leaving a message for his chief to meet him thr ..

**^^**

Geet was gone in the changing room to try the dress she had finally selected after good 20 minutes n maan took the opportunity to talk with his chief standing on the aisle of goods like 2 stranger ..

Sir kal iss saal ki sab se baari drug deal sign hone waali hai

Maan I ve arrested more than 100 men of Rajveer Handa n non of them would witness against him n thr is absolutely no clue against his drug activities ..

I know sir n tht y I m going to make sure this time Rajveer Handa himself goes to make this deal ..

N we will be arresting him red handed ..

Bingo ..tomorrow Rajveer Handa will be finished ..

Alright then let me of the meeting venue time n other details ..

I will for sure ..

Good luck officer ..

Maan went towards the ladies changing room n stood stunned seeing geet crying bucket thr ..maan hurried over to her ..n held her arms ..

Geet kya hua hai ...tum ro kyun rahi hu ..

Choro mujhe ...tum ...tum ..papa ko ...papa ko marne aaye hu ..

Geet still couldn't believe this man in front of her was going to harm her dad he trust him so much ..n he ..how could he ..

Geet yeh tum kya keh rahi hu ...

Mene sab sun liya tum unn uncle se jo baat kar rahe thay ...tum ...tum papa ko arrest karoge ...kyun unhoon ne kiya kara hai ..

Geet tum kuch nahi jaanti apne dad ke bare mien ...

Mujhe sab pata hai ...dad buhat successful hain iss hi liye sab unko harm karna chahte hain ..unn logoon ki waja se wohh ghar bhi nahi aate aur wohh log mere bhi peeche pare hain iss hi liye dad mujhe kahin jaane nahi dete aur ...aur tum bhi unn bad logoon ke saath hu right ...mien ...mien abhi ghar jaakar sab bata dungi papa ko phir dekhna he ..he will give u to police ...

Geet couldn't hold her tears while maan closed his eyes not wanting to break the trust of this innocent angel on her dad ...for her Rajveer Handa is a successful business man ...if only he knew what business he runs ..but now he has to break the glass mansion she has been living in ..

Kuch nahi jaanti tum apne dad ke bare mien geet ..kuch nahi

Chalo mere saath ..

Choro ..choro mujhe ..

But he dragged her into a changing room n locked it ..

Yeh kya kar rahe hut um ...jane do mujhe ...

Chup bilkul chup ..

Geet looked at him with tears filled eyes but his one look stopped her from saying anything ..n he opened some file on his mobile n showed it to geet ..

Yeh tu ...

Han tumhare dad hain ...aur jaanti hu unke haath mien yeh white powder kya hai ..

Geet nodded negatively

Drugs kehte hain isko ..cocaine ..jisko kha kar har rooz najane kitne logoon ki maut hujaati hai ..

Humari country mien yeh drug supply karne ka sab se bara dealer kuan hai jaanti hu ..??

Geet stood thr speechless still processing all what maan was saying yet her tears didn't stop falling from her eyes ...

Tumhare dad ..

Par maan ...

Geet I am a police officer ...aur Indian citizen ki tumhare aur mere jaise buhat se logoon ki jaan bachane ke liye mujhe tumhare dad ko arrest karna huga ..

Mien ..mien unko boloongi who wohh yeh sab nahi karenge maan ..please unko chordu ..

Geet tum ..tum buhat innocent hu but yeh sab aise nahi hu sakta ..aur tumhain kya lagta hai tum kahogi aur wohh maan jayenge ..

Geet cried n clutched his arms ..

Please don't kill him maan ..

Maan held her weak form from falling down while she cried in his embrace ...

Please maan ..please wohh dad hain mere ..please unko chordo ...

Geet continued crying in his embrace while maan morned on his helplessness n the naivety of this innocent girl worried for the safety of her dad ...a person who is ruining thousands of lives every second .. but he was an officer on mission n he had no space for emotions at this point of time ..

Very calmly and in a low voice maan asked her ..

Geet tim chahti hu na ke mien tumhare dad ko harm na karoon ..

Geet parted n looked at him with her eyes filled with tears n nodded ..

Tu phir tum ...tum ne yahan jo kuch suna ghar pr kisi ko nahi btaogi ..

Geet looked at him confused ..n gulped her saliva ...everything was so beyond her understanding ..first she found her father to be a criminal then this man who has been safe guarding her since an year turns out to be a police officer here to harm him ...n now this man asking her to keep quite when she knows her father's life is in danger ..what is she suppose to do ..

Dekho I ...I had plans to kill him in an encounter ..(geet gasped n more tears made thr way out of her eyes n she sobbed in agony).. geet listen agar tum mujh se promise karti hu ke tum yeh sab kisi ko nahi btaogi tu I promise you tumhare dad ko kuch nahi huga ..

Tum ..tum unko chordoge ..

Nahi ..wohh mien nahi kar sakta par han ...unhe arrest kar ke unki jaan zaror bacha sakta hoon ..

Abb tumhain faisla karna hai what do u want ..

Geet cried at her helplessness n this complex situation but agreed to his term while maan sighed in relief if geet hadn't agreed to his demands he doesn't even want to think with what tactics he would have had to stop her ...but he knew manipulating geet is not at all difficult at all ..her mind is a blank slate where you can picture what ever you want ..

**^^**

Maan kisi ko iss bare mien pata nahi chalna chahiye ..

Don't worry sir iss deal ko final karne aap jaa rahe hain yeh baat hum dono ke ilawa koi nahi jaanta baqi sab ke liye tu yeh deal postponed hugayi hai ..aap fiqar mat kijeye iss baar koi garbar nahi hugi ..

Hmm ...(rajveer turned to sit in his car but stopped n turned towards maan again).. maan jab tak ..jab tak mien wapis nahi aata geet ka khayaal rakhna ...

For a second maan was speechless seeing the love of a father reflecting in his eyes for his daughter ..but then like a composed man he answered ..

Don't worry sir geet ...geet meri responsibility hai ...uss se kuch nahi huga ..

Thank u ...abb mien chalta hoon ..

Good bye sir ..

**^^**

What !! maan ne kaha aur tune maan liya ..?? tera dimag kharaab hai kya ..?

Geet cried sitting in her room ...telling simmi all that happened yesterday ..she couldn't keep all this confined in her heart n the only person she could share it with was simmi ...to whom she narrated everything crying ...

But simmi he said he is a police officer aur .. agar mene kisi ko kuch nahi kaha usske plan ke bare mien tu wohh dad ko kill nahi karega ..

Aur tum ne maan liya ..??

Han ..tu aur kya karti mein simmi ...agar uski baat nahi maanti tu wohh dad ko encounter mien maar deta ...jaise wohh films mien dekhate hain waise ..

Geet ..tu pagal hai yeh police waale ...inka koi bharoosa nahi huta ..

Kabhi apni baat poori nahi karte ..

Baba kehte hain yeh sab ek number ke dhokebaaz hute hain ...

Tu ..tu abb mien kya karoon ..mujhe dad ko bachana hai ..plzz simi kuch kar na ..

Geet tu ..tu yahin reh mien ..mien baba ko dhundhti hoon ..unko hi boloongi yeh sab ..wohh kuch karenge I m sure ..

Tu ..tu jaldi jaa na ..kaka ko dhundh unko bol papa ko bacha len ..

**^^**

Meanwhile at the back yard maan was waiting for gautam to reach the venue n arrest Rajveer Handa red-handed ..when he got the call from his officer ...

Maan yeh mien kya sun rha hoon ..?? u r going to the meeting venue ..Y ?? yeh plan ka part nahi tha

Sir humara mission iss desh se drugs ko clean karana hai aur usske liye sirf Rajveer Handa ko maar dena kaafi nahi huga .. foreign traders kal kisi aur ko dhundenge aur kal koi aur Rajveer Handa ban kar humare saamne huga ..iss liye humien uss dealer ko bhi pakarna huga ..tab hi humara mission successful huga ..

Fine maan ..but u r taking aa huge risk my boy ...

Sir ...yeh mission successful huga aur yeh mera commitment tha aapse ...apne desh se apni force but ek commitment khud se bhi tha k yeh sab karte waqt kisi nirdosh ko saza nahi milegi ..koi masoom hurt nahi huga ...aur mujhe apna commitment poora karne wahan jaana hai ..

Geet was standing behind the pillar listening to his words with tears in her eyes ..

Geet (st) : matlab maan dad ke paas jar ha hai ..

Mujh jana chahiye wahan ...dad ko bachane ..aur ..aur mujhe pata huga ke wohh log kahan tu mien yahan simmi ko bhi inform kardungi ..

Getting into gautam's cars' trunk wasn't difficult as boh men were talking self conscious of getting caught themselves ..but it took all the strength geet got to step out of her house in such a way ..

**^^**

Maan n gautam stepped out of thr car in front of tht old factory where Rajveer Handa was unaware of thr open trunk n the scared girl who was following them ..

Thr he is maan sir ..Rajveer Handa himself giving away the drugs ..

Click the pictures Gautam ...

Geet was standing at the entrance of the factory she could see maan n another man hiding behind the wooden barrels peeking inside ..she was sure it was her dad in thr they were looking at ..she couldn't understand what was going on ..if really her dad was a criminal like there are in movies ..but right now she wanted to save her father n for that she will have to make a call to her home .. geet glanced at the mobile which belongs to simmi n dialed her father's number ..

He ..hello ...hello Manoj Uncle ...//

N she gave them the whole story n the address ..

Plss aap jaldi aajaye ..plzz uncle ..

GEET ...

Geet was left frozen on her place hearing his deadly voice ..she didn't had the courage to turn but maan marched towards her n turned her in a jerk ...

What the hell are u doing here ..aur yeh ...yeh mobile kahan se aaya tumhare paas ..

Kya kiya tum ne geet tell me ..!! (he jerked her furiously dreading what she might have done).. damit tell me kya kara hai tum ne ..

Geet got scared seeing him so angry n started crying ..really frightened if he will kill her father ..

Geet plzz ...dekho batao mujhe tum yahan kaise aur kyun aayi ..?? kis ko call kiya tum ne ...whom u were talking to geet plss bolo ..

Kaka ...manoj kaka ko bata diya ..

Maan stepped back in horror n ran a hand through his hair in frustration ..

Y ..y do you always have to oppose me geet ..kaha than a mene ..promise kiya that um se tumhare dad ko kuch nahi karunga then y did you ..

Geet cried n stood thr shaking ..innocently confessing it all ..

Simi ne kaha tum jhoot bol rhe hu ..dad ne kuch kiya n tht u will kiss him promise or no promise ..

Maan shot her a dead cold look n geet stepped back in fear seeing his red bloodied eyes glaring her ..while he grasped her arms hard n dragged her upstairs behind the wooden barrels ..

Maan choro mujhe ..dard hurha hai ..

Chup bilkul chup ...abb kuch nhi kahogi tum samjhi ..i didn't wanted u to see this but jab ke tumne mujhe jhoota bana hi diya hai have a look at ur saint father geet ...dekho apni aankhoon se tumhare dad kis tarha iss desh ke logoon ke liye mout khareedte hain ..

Geet looked inside the factory from the tainted window n saw her father waiting with a suitcase but she didn't missed maan n gautam having a heated conversation n then gautam calling someone to send the backup force ..

N then was the moment of truth when she saw her own father exchanging a bag of money with a whole lot of drugs cocaine n weapons ...tears flowed on thr own from her eyes ..she couldn't really believe ..her heart was beating furiously when maan placed a hand on her shoulder n she looked up at him with her innocent confused eyes full of tears n questions ...maan sighed n knelt down in front of her n ever so softly wiped off her tears only to be replaced by other ..

I m sorry geet ..i ..i didn't wanted you to see this but ...but this is what the truth is ..n I ..i have to ..//

Please maan ...

geet cried n pleaded wordlessly for the safety of her dear father but maan was called by gautam n he left leaving a scared broken girl sitting thr looking at her father raising the toast to have had successfully bought death for millions of people ..

gautam : sir this is getting out of hands ..ek bhi garbar huyi tu we'll be finished ...v have to act fast now ..

maan : gautam I m going in ..

but sir ..//

listen ..let me see what strength they have before our men arrives n yes ask them to wait for my signal ...n to not kill Rajveer Handa at any cost ...I want him alive ..got that

yes sir ..!!

good I m going in ..u have ur ear piece with u ..??

yes sir ..ill be in contact with u ...but sir wohh ...(gautam hesitated n eyed geet sitting thr still watching her father whom she thought to be the best oerson in the world talking ill about the country n generation) ..

maan sighed n walked towards geet ..

geet ..

hmm ..(still lost watching her father unbelievably) ..

geet suno meri baat ...u can't leave this place no matter what ..u understand me .??

geet looked at him confused n maan explained ..

I m going in ...gautam yahin hai he is a good man ...aur tum usski baat manogi jab tk mien nahi aata ...okie

Geet looked at him scared n just as he was about to under up she held his hand with her cold ones ..

They ...they have guns ..

Maan smiled n showed the inner flap of his leather jacket ..

So do I ..

Aapko yeh sab chalani aati hai ...??

Maan heard gautam chukled n he glared at him n he got the signal SHUT UP ..while maan held her hand tightly for a second n assured her ..

Mujhe yeh sab chalani aati hain geet ..

Wohh wahan neeche 2 log khare hain ...

Maan peeped in n saw she was right it wasn't gonna be easy entering in ..but he smiled not wanting geet to get any more worse ..

Thanks batane ke liye ..now ill leave n u be a good girl n listen to this guy okie ..

Maan stood up n looked at gautam meaningfully to which he replied ..

Ill take care of her sir ...

Thanks ..

N just as he took a step forwards she called him ..

Suno ..(maan didn't turned fearing she might ask for something he wouldn't be able to give her).. apna khyaal rakhna ...(maan turned n saw geet still in tears watching him helplessly ...she so much wanted to ask him to leave her father but she knew he won't do that ...maan could see the plea in her eyes n knew she changed her statement from what she wanted to say ...he was bound by his duty ..he just nodded n left)..

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It was good 10 minutes since maan was inside the factory n suddenly gautam was talking on a walkie-talkie ..geet was so confused he was saying everything in such a speed she couldn't get anything except that maan's backup force was here n they wanted to kill her father but they were waiting for maan's order ...n then suddenly thr were fires n bullets everywhere ..geet was shaking with fear sitting behind that wooden barrel ...as the noises grew louder ...she covered her ears with her both hands n closed her eyes in fear her tears didn't ever stopped n then she heard few similar voices ..

Wohh rahi ...wohh rahi geet betiya ..

Geet opened her eyes n saw manoj kaka climbing the stairs to get her ..n just then gautam came from behind her n stood in front of her ..ready to fire at him ...geet was so scared seeing all this ...gautam was about to pull the trigger when she pulled his hands down ...

What the hell are you doing ...

Wohh kaka hain mere ...

He is a bloody criminal u fool ...get down NOW ..

Oyee saale chor meri beti ko ..

With a tight punch gautam was on the ground n manoj pointed his gun at him ..

Nahi kaka plss ..iss ne jaan bachai hai meri plss mat maro inko ..

Geet tu kuch nahi jaanti ..

Aaj hi sab jaana hai mene kaka ...mat maro issko ..plzz mere liye ..

Mnoj looked at gautam who at fainted getting collided with the metal rod ..n dragged geet inside ..

Chal sahab ji ke paas tu ...

Amid lots of fires n bullets geet was made to enter the factory n thr he was her father standing with all those criminals like one of them ..maan was shell shocked seeing her in thr ..his first thought was whr is gautam n then geet amid all this was so dangerous you won't know when n from where the bullet hit you ..but he couldn't do anything ..n just then his walkie-talkie beeped ..

Sir have managed to get most of them down ...backup force coming in ..

Good but remember this officer I want Rajveer Handa n tht foreign dealer both arrested alive ..

Sir we will try our best but we have higher orders not to let them get away ..dead or alive

The only option I have given u as ur in charge is to arrest him alive officer ..

Understood sir ..over

Over n out !!

Rajveer Handa stood thr not lookin gat his daughter while geet kept looking at him trying to search in this man her father who use to come home with chocolates n use to have meals with her once in a month ..she use to ask him y he doesn't come home y he doesn't live with her but he always had some or the other excuse ..today the bag of drugs placed beside him she knew was always the reason he couldn't live at his own home with his own daughter ..

Sir ji wohh log andar puhanch gaye hain ..kabhi bhi yahan aajayenge

Manoj geet ko lekar niklo yahan se ..mien baad mien tum se baat karta hoon ..

Itni bhi kya jaldi hai Rajveer Handa ..

MAAN ...

Nah ...Special Security Officer Maan Singh Khurana ..

Tu tum hi wohh gaddar ...

Bilkul ...now ask ur men to drop thr weapon n U ..kneel down ..

Bewakoof hu tum ...tumhain lagta hai tum kahoge aur mien manoga ..

Hmm ..shayad nahi but tumhare admiyoon ko shayad 1 second lage mujhe shoot karne mien ...but mujhe 10 second lagenge trigger daba kar tumhain marne mien ...drop it ...

Maan was lookin at hhis watch ..he just needs to buy some time for his force to barge in ...n that he is

While Rajveer accessed his position he wwas standing at point blank from maan ...he could literally kill him in 10 sec

While George the foreign drug dealer looked at the back gate which was open had thr cars ready thr to flee ...n then looked at geet standing b/e him n Rajveer all confused scared ..

He grabbed geet's hand n put the gun on her ..

Drop ur weapon officer or ill kill her ..the innocent girl will get killed officer ..or u have another option let me Mr. Handa move out of here safely ..

Maan looked at George's grip at his weapon he knew he will kill geet if he retaliated ..geet was shivering with fear her tears flowing while she looked at her father ...Rajveer was tensed but he knew this was the only way to get out of this place n he looked away ..

Geet was shocked seeing this ...her own father putting her life in danger to safe himself ...this was something she never thought ..n then thr was maan who dropped his weapon still looking at her ..

Sab expect kiya tha Rajveer Handa ..yeh nahi ..

Let the girl go ...

Very good ...now u good c'mon lets move with us ..

Uhh ...maan

Listen I ve dropped my weapon I have nothing on me now ...let the girl go n so can u ..leave her

They continued to mave back towards the back door n just then the backup force barged in ..n the shootout session started ...maan hurried grabbed his weapon off the ground n put a bullet straight though george's head ...while geet fell down like a rag doll n maan held her in his embrace ..shooting at the goons he moved back n made her stand against a pillar ..

Don't move till I come back ..

Maan moved out while her hand slid on top of his n finally she left his hand to let him go perform his duty ...tear slid from her eyes as did she against the pillar realizing how selfish her father is ...now even the roaring bullets seemed nothing as compared to her roaring heart ..

Rajveer Handa was hiding behind a machine firing ...looking for some chance to escape when maan spotted him ...so as few of his officers ..maan was about to instruct them to trap him ..but before that one of them fired at him straight ...maan didn't had anytime n so he stepped in between n took the bullet on his right arm ...n yelped in pain ..

Sir yeh aap ..

I had told u not to fire him ..i want him alive ..u get this

Sorry sir ...

Now go capture him from all sides n arrest him ..rest will automatically drop thr weapons ..

Maan was about to go ahead when geet came from back running ..

Yeh ..khoon ...(maan wiped her tears n made her sit behind a machine as thr cover)..

Shuu ...kuch nahi hua ...rona band karo ..

Aapko ..aapko goli ...goli

Nahi lagi ...sirf chu kar gyi hai ..

Yeh ..par ..

Mene wada kiya tha na ..wohh dekho ur dad is safe ...encounter nahi kiya unka ...

Geet looked at him n cried hugging him ..

Maan ...he ...he is a criminal ...mene kabhi nahi socha tha ...

Maan placed his hand over her head consoling her ...

Dunya mien sab jaisa dekhta hai waisa huta nahi hai geet ..

Geet continued crying in his embrace until she felt his hand was no longer on her head n he was no longer holding her ...she looked up n saw his unconscious ...her heart almost stopped for a second ..scared she slapped his face couple of time ..

Maan ...maan utho ...please ..please utho na maan ...

Koi hai ...dekho na inko kya hua hai ..

Geet stepped out n saw most of the men going out handcuffed ...she ran to some uniformed person n told them cryingly ..

Wohh ..wohh maan ...maan kuch bol nahi rahe ..plss aap dekho na unko kya hua hai ..

**^^**

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tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

hi sobia

kaisi rahi tumhari eid ..mast hogi sure ..

part one ...mast zabardast

i love every part of this story ..

start geet is so innocent credit to her father who saved her from all bad people of the world ..bas aapne se baccha ke rakhna tha ..

geet didn't step outside her house coz of her father's instruction ..

maan there ..first i thought maan as goon ..wonder how come ..

but soon dhamkha ho gay ..

maan turned out to be police officer who is there to arrest rajvir handa ..

geet listened all his talks and decided to reveal maan's identity ..

maan stopped her there ...geet obeyed what maan told her to do ..

she didn't want to harm her father ,.,.she didn't believe that her father is underworld don ..

later she found out the truth ..maan shocked to see geet at the site ..too dangerous for her life ..

all leaves turned when geet saw her father behaving so selfish ..

she was a daughter to him ..she want no harm for him but that man left her to just save his life ..

on other hand maan didn't let any harm touch her ..he saved geet ..

finally arrested rajvir as per his promise to geet ..he himself badly hut but then also geet safety was his top most priority ..

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Posted: 9 years ago

part 2

geet heartbroken after knowing her father truth ..her father is punished but geet's life in mess ..she has no place to go ..after two days maan got his conciousness .he want to see geet and when he went to see he was broken seeing what geet was facing ..

he brought geet to his home ..na their home ..that moment was so nice when geet repeat hamara ghar..

maan loves her ..he knew it but didn't confess coz he want to make geet dtrong ..the girl who can survive in this world ..he send geet away ..this separation miserable for both but finally geet emerge out to winner ..

maan let get free..he took her to her old house ..geet hell angry on her dusht danav maan ..

she confess her lovefor him on his birthday ..in front of so many people ..its never easy for a girl to say such thing but geet so bravely proposes her buddhu maan ...they r married ..having a happy life ..

its awesoem story ..love it ..

the entire fw of story is superb ..love it ,,,

but what i missed ..i have written below ..so plz do the honour and give epilogue ..

thanks

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sobia4maaneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

**^^**

After 4 Year ..

Geet ...geet

O Re Piya

Piyaaa...

Yehhh Piya

Nange Pairo Pe Angaro

Chalti Rahi Haaye Chalti Rahi

Lagta Hai Ke Gairo Mein

Palti Rahi Haaye

Le Chal Wahan Jo

Mulk Tera Hai

Jahil Zamana

Dushman Mera Hai

Haaye

O Re Piya Haye...

Uffoo ..yeh larki ...abhi band karti hoon yeh ipod iska ..

Kya ruche ...kyun band kiya song ..

Kitna dance karegi ..kab se poore campus mien dhundh rahi hoon tujhe ..

Dance academy dance nahi tu kya karate karoongi mien ..waise bhi sham ko performance hai ..

Bye the way tu kyun dhundh rhi thi mujhe ..itni subha who bhi ..

Tha kuch kaam ..

(geet took her towel n wiped the sweat off her face) .. Itna casually bol rhi hai aura ayi thi tu lag rha tha kahin aag lag gyi ..

Han bas wohh tujhe batana tha ke ..Maan aagaye hain ..

Acha ...WHAT !!

Maan agaaye ...ghaddi ...ullo ..paaji ..itni deir se bakwaas kar rhi hai kaam ki baat tu bata nahi rhi ...stupid ..

N thr she was running towards the visitor's lounge ..

Deewani hai poori ...

**^^**

What happened 4 years back changed thr lives forever ...

maan had lost conscious in that factory only to be back after good 48 hours ..the bullet he thought had just went past him giving him a scare in that mayhem was very much in his hand ..the pain he overlooked in tht moment of pain ..chaos n most importantly seeing a crying geet infront of him caused a great damage poisoning his blood ...when he gained his conscious in the hospital he was informed about Rajveer Handa to be given a life sentence while on inquiring his senior officer ..he had told him tht geet was for now in a government orphanage till the courts doesn't give any verdict about Rajveers' property n house ...maan didn't knew how he was going to face her but when he got thr ..the condition of tht place n to think geet was here since last 2 days was agonizing ...she was treated like a princess in her house what she faced in those 2 days was enough of a trauma for her n she didn't needed to be here in such a mess ..maan went in to look for her n thr she was sitting in a corner of the garden hiding from all ...in tears

Geet ...

She looked up n saw him ..her tears never stopped n she ran upto him while he held her close in his protective embrace ..n she cried ..cried her heart out ..

Mujhe yahan nahi rehna ...plsss maan mujhe ...mujhe yahan se le chalo ...mujhe nahi rehna yahan ..yahan ..yahan kuch acha nahi hai ...sab ..sab buhat bure hain ..plss ...

Shhh ...shhh geet mien aagaya hoon na ..kuch nahi huga ...plss shant hujao ..

Nahi mujhe jaana hai ..plss mujhe le chalo yahan se ..

Han ..han hum jayenge yahan se geet but tum pehle chup hu ...chup hujao ..

Geet calmed herself n maan parted her ...wiped off her tears n noticed the pale white face of hers with prominent dark circles around her eyes ..maan took a deep breath n asked her ..

Kuch nahi khaya do din se ..

Geet nodded negatively ..

Pehle mann nahi tha phir bhook lagi tu wohh uncle ne bola abhi dinner time finish aur fir subha mien Wohh ...wohh larka tha na uss ne meri plate cheen li ..mujhe samajh hi nahi aaya kuch ...mujhe plss yahan se le chalo ..

Maan was angry would be an understatement ..when he arrested her father he thought he would be doing good for the country he never thought in what situation this would place geet into ..she doesn't have any family ..relative all the property money owned by Rajveer in under courts custody n here she is the innocent getting punished for the sins of her father ...he won't let tht happen ..

Maan talked with the orphanage incharge ..showed her his id n just TOLD her tht he is taking geet with him ...the old government officer was a bit hesitant but maan's arrogance n geet being so comfortable with him didn't gave her any option but to oblige ..however she did called the IG to inform ...

N here he was infront of the restaurant maan just walked out from having his lunch with geet ..seeing him he stopped in his track but what surprised him was geet hiding behind him scared from his officer ..

Maan chalo na yahan se ..jaldi ..

Geet thts my senior officer ...I have to meet him ..

But ..//

Its okie he is a good man ..don't worry

No he is not ...he asked those lady police to send to tht dirty house ...

Maan coughed trying to contain his smile at her innocence ..it took him good 2 hours to get her mood this good n he really didn't wanted it spoiled ..

Okie fine ...humari car wohh saamne parked hai ..here are they keys tum jaakar betho n ill come in a minute ...

But yeh ..//

Geet ...jao ..

N tht was the end of discussion she knew ...how typical him ..

Sado khurana ..😛

Geet walked away n he couldn't hold his laughter any more ..meanwhile IG Patel walked towards him ..

Care to explain officer yeh kya hu raha hai ..

Maan took a deep breath n composed his posture ..

Sir I ..i went to meet aur ...mien geet ko wahan nahi chor sakta tha ...tht place is a mess ...2 din se kuch khaya nahi uss ne ..i ..i couldn't have ..

U Love her ..??😲

I m sorry what ..

C'mon maan ...2 din unconscious thay tum aur sirf geet ka naam le rahe thay ...I know u n ur working style agar geet ki jaga kisi aur ko tumhare id aur mission ka pata chala huta tout ht person would have been dead thr ...u wouldn't have explained anything .. that tells me enough to make the statement doesn't it ..

Maan looked down ..he knew the answer but he wasn't ready to confess it ..deep down he always knew thr was attraction in his heart for tht girl but he never let tht emotion over power him .. but the fear he experienced watching George holding his gun on geet made it all so clear for him ...yet this was not the time for it ...geet wasn't in a state to understand any of it ..neither will he burden her with his feelings ...

Uncle mien ...I want to take her with me ..

She doesn't have anybody in this world to take care of her ..

Hmm ...okie u have my permission mien orphanage mien call kardunga ..

Thank u ..tell me if thr is any paper work needed or something ...

Maan case is closed ...geet ka waise bhi iss sab se koi relation nahi hai n besides she is 18 so as long as you have her consent ..nothing is needed ...

Great ..thank u ..thank mamo ..

Arre nahi sahabzaade ..thank u tou humien aapka karna chahiye ...jo aapne finally kisi ko tu pasand kiya warna aapki maami aur mujhe tu laga aap humare marne se pehle shaddi tu karenge nahi aur pata nahi upar jaakar apni behen aur jija ji ko kiya jawaab dena parega ..

Mamo aap bhi na kuch bhi choro hujaate hu ..

Chalo abhi blush karna band karo aur lekar jao ussko ghar ..good luck

Maan sat in the car n saw geet still lost thinking something n he thought to have some fun after all she has troubled him so much in last whole year ...very carefully he went near her ears n screamed ..GEET ..!!!!!!!!! 😆 she was shocked would be an understatement ..her heart was in her mouth in sudden panic ..then she wacked him hard on his arm 3-4 times ..

Yeh kya tha ...koi karta hai kiya aise ..

Maan laughed at her sweating face ..

Kya karoon tum itni gehri soch mien thi raha hi nahi gaya

Tum na ..ek number ke dusht danav hu ...

Abb geet jaisa bhi hoon ..aise hi jhelna parega tumhain ...u have no choice ..

Maan started the car n realized she had again gone quite ..this time he asked her seriously ..

Kya soch rhi hu geet ..??

Maan mene tv pr dekha ..court ne dad ka ghar seal kar diya ..

Hmm ..mujhe pata chala ..

Tu abb mien kahan jaongi ...

Maan looked at her ...n saw the worried confused eyes ..n didn't answered her but speed up his car while geet thought she made him worried as well n quitened for the rest of the journey ..she had just closed her eyes when maan stopped the car n she stepped out seeing him getting out ..

Yeh kahan aaye hum maan ...

She looked around it looked like a residential area ..

Ghar ..

Geet looked so confused n glanced at him while questioning ..

GHAR ...??

Maan smiled n extended a key towards her ...

Han who dekho (he pointed out at the third house from where they were standing).. who raha tumhara ghar ..😳

Geet was stunned hearing him ..n asked in shock ..

Mera ghar ..??

Maan smiled n held her hand n walked towards the main door n eyed her to open the lock ..geet looked so taken aback n glanced at the set of keys in her hand then at the door n saw the name plate ..Parvati n Kunal Khurana ..

mere parents ka naam hai ..

geet looked at maan smiling with wet eyes ..to which maan only smiled n nodded negatively ..

Chalien madam andar chalien ..

N they stepped into a new phase of thr life ...maan tried everything to make geet feel at home ..his maami was a great support in doing tht ...she got geet all her essential necessaries ..n then his butler Nakul ...he was the comedy character in the house every time both he n geet would be sitting in dead silence he would come n say or do something tht would make them all laugh like amaniac ... everything looked normal but maan knew geet isn't ...the pain is still thr in her eyes ...gautam came over n visited him ...was shocked seeing geet thr but she smiled at him thanked him for saving her from those bullet that day ..n then when he was leaving he explained how after maan was taken to the hospital the officer thr arrested geet as well n kept her in the cell ...but just as he gained conscious he explained everything to maan's uncle the IG n he got her free n sent her to the gov orphanage ..n maan realized geet never actually got the time to morn over all that happened ..quite possible she hasn't still believed in it ..n then heplanned his next move ..thr was a news channel which was doing a special episode on this whole operation ..maan made geet saw it ...n what happened was what he wanted geet cried ...n cried her heart out ...it was so difficult to watch her in so much of pain ..the poor girl was still complaining like a child how her father didn't even tried to save her ...how she believed him to be a hero ...tht night wa the most difficult one ever ..but from the next day started with a new zeal n hope ...maan got all her books for her n made her join her college again ...it was going to be difficult they knew ..people were mean ...geet initially didn't knew how to respond to all this but with maan support she learnt to defend herself n stand for what is right ..in those 6 months they both got real close to each other ...shared thr past present n future plans ..maan even though put her out thr in front of the world but was always thr to support her ...she unknowingly became his support ..the reason to come back home early n a person with whom he could share everything ..maan never wanted geet to be dependent on anyone n he made sure she is not however her childish nature was something he never wanted to n never could get away from ..Sundays were mad for them ...they played football ...basketball ..even went out for drives n dinners ..maan helped her study for her final papers n she made sure to make the best of her holidays ..n then it was her b'day when maan gifted her the admission slip of the Dance Academy in Mumbai she always wanted to join ...she had mentioned it once or twice but she never thought he would do something like that ..

Maan yeh mien nahi li sakti ...

Chup bilkul chup ...(maan placed his finger on her lips quietening her in his signature style while she looked at him still not believing the generosity of this man).. I know this is what u want to do ...n u will do this ...no questions no discussions ...next months' 15 ko u have to join ...so madam packing shoro kardiyjeye ...

Geet hugged him tight n cried ...6 months back sitting in that orphanage she never thought life could ever be this beautiful but today ..she won't be surprised if anyone envied her ...coz truly she has a life to envy ...

Shh ...kitna roti hu tum ...rootro ..

Geet smiled at his attempts to cheer her ...n parted

Thank you ..

Maan glared at her hard ..n she realized what she did ..n what tht hard stare would mean ...geet pouted n made a puppy face ..

Sorry who mien ...//opss

GEET ...2 ...2 crimes ...abb tou punishment milegi ..

Arre but mien bhool gyi na ..

What ...tum bhool gyi geet tum humare ghar ka ek loota rule bhool gyi

No thank u n no sorry ...

Abb tu punishment leni paregi ...

But aaj mera b'day hai aaj mujhe sab maaf hai ..

Acha ji yeh kisne kaha ..

Mene kaha ...aur agar meri baat nahi maani na tu ...tu ...

Tu kya han ...bolo ...//

Tu mien apne best friend se keh kar tumhain arrest karwa dungi ..

Oh aur yeh kuansa dost hai aapka jo iss sheher ke ACP ko arrest karega

Geet smirked n replied with all her arrogance..

Hai ek dost ..u know he got the best officer award this year ...aur promotion bhi ..

Really ...!!

Hmm ..really ...(the staring competition was on till they both laghed out loud n went inside thr home holding each others hand) ..

That was the last celebration they had since 3 years ..geet was now living in the hostle of the academy ..maan did visited her often but his stays were never more than 2 days ..however geet would make the best of those 2 days as well ...

Those 6 months were the best days of her life ..when she learned a lot ...when she smiled the most ..when she lived the most ..!!

Maan made her experience the world as it is ...he taught her how to survive in it ...he had been her friend ..her guide ...her savior ..her campanion in all sense !!

They say you don't realize the value of something until it is taken away from you ..

In those 6 months geet never realized how close he has come to her heart ..what place maan has actually made for himself ..but today she can happily die for a single happiness of this person ...only person she can call hers' in this whole universe ... ...the only person she knows for sure will never leave her alone no matter what ...the only person she lives for ...the only person she ever dreamt of living forever with n the only person she loved with all her heart n soul ..

**^^**

Maan was waiting in the visitor's launge seeing n fixing his jacket for the nth time ..this was her fav jacket ..she bought it for him .. its been 3 years he sent her here to fulfill her dream of dancing ..n today is her annual day when she will be getting her degree ...he was excited nervous ...she had told so much about this to him in thr many short meetings over last 3 years but this would be his first time to see her dancing ..but before that he has to meet her ..he is been waiting since last 20 mintues n madam still not here ..

Surely kisi corner mien chup gyi hugi jaakar ...yeh larki bhi na ..(maan again glanced outside the visiting lounge but thr was no sign of hersn he sighed turning his back towards the entrance) kahan hu tum geet ...!!

N just then he heard a bang ..n then everyone murmuring something ...maan shook his head feeling the sudden noises in the silent hall indicates the arrival of his Disaster Queen ..maan turned only to see her in her track suit ..all her hairs scattered n she was wearing those big glasses ..panting looking around searching for him ..the smile never left her n her name escaped ever so softly from his mouth ..

Geet ..

N she turned in his direction ...the sudden glow on her face was worth all the time energy n argument he had to bear to make here before time ..geet's grin tht spark in her eyes as she ran towards him n hugged with with all her might as if life depended on this hug was all he lived for now ..maan took a step back from the impact n stabled them both ...geet hugged him by his neck tip toing while he engulfed her in his warm embrace taking her feets off the ground ...with thr eyes closed they both tightened thr hold on each other feeling the other ones racing heart beats ...making thr ownself believe tht they are together ..relishing the moment of delight ..

Geet opened her eyes n smiled feeling him holding her so protectively ...they met 6 months back n it seems as if it had been a life time ...her eyes were mishty but her tummy was twisted in excitement of having him here for the annual function ..maan loosened his hold on her waist n put her down on her feets ...but held onto him still not ready to get parted from her Home ..

I missed u ..i missed u so much ...

Maan smiled parted her by holding her arms firmly ...n looked t her closely ..she had dark circles under her eyes ...yet she looked beautiful with that huge smile on her face ...everytime he comes here to meet her it seems as if the last visit was ages ago ..words cannot be enough to express the feeling ...n he did what he always does ..cupped her face softly n placed a firm kiss on her forehead ...geet closed her eyes her heart still beating furiously ...feeling his lips on her skin she blushed profusely n looked down ..

Maan saw her cheeks turned red ..n her eyes casted down ...he so much wanted to hear her usual blabber but she had gone quite ..so he asked her ..

Aur kaisi preparation hai aaj sham ki ..

Geet looked into his eyes n answered ..

Ek dum solid ..

Great ..chalo canteen chalet hain kuch khaate hain ..

Ek min ..ek min ...pehle aap jao order karo ...mien 10 min change kar ke aayi ..

Okie but jaldi aana ..

Don't worry aapka order aane se pehle aajaongi ..

N without any warning she ran again to go to her hostel at the back of the academy ..maan saw her running out n made a mental note to give a good lecture about this when she almost lost her balance colliding with someone but thankfully she saved herself ...n looked back at the horror stricken maan ..glaring at her ...n she knew she has good lecture prepared for her ...however she apologized holding her ears making a puppy face but he ignored n she went ahead ..

I can't believe mene yeh khana kha kar bhi 33 saal survive kar liya ..

Maan smiled n took the last bite of his meal ..

Trust me ..officers' mess ka khana is worst than this ..

I know remember last year hum kuch official dinner mien gye thay na ..the food was horrible ..

Aap log kaise khate hu wohh sab training par ..

You don't want to know geet ..lets go I m done ..

Chalo finally I can step out of here ..

Maan smiled n they both went out for thr usual day out ..the beach ...the road side food ..amusement park ..then shopping well mostly for maan's stuff ...lol

However this time he did bought a dress for her to wear tonight secretly..

N finally the ice-cream ..

Yummm ...I just love this chocolate chip ...

Geet was lost enjoying her ice-cream while maan kept looking at her having a heart full of her cute expression her blabbering.. she has the ability to bring him away from his brutal world of greys n make him experience life like never before ...before her it was always his duty tht satisfied him ...he was a content man ..but being with her made him realize he can be happy as well ...having her boss around him telling him what to do ...those cute childish demands of rides ...golas n ice-creams ...n watching the delight in her eyes having it fulfilled is such immense happiness ...but now he knows she has a whole life in front of her n a lot more choices than she had 4 years back while in that orphanage ...she has a degree n a job already offered to her by the top dancing school of dehli ..she can go anywhere she wants ...yet he can't help but to hope that she chooses him ...though he won't ask for that ...he could never bound her in anyway ...if she stays it would be her decision completely ..n if she don't he will be her friend forever thr for her no matter what ...lost in his thoughts he yelped when she suddenly smeared his cone on his face ..

Geet what the hell ...

His expressions were worth watching ..n she couldn't help but to laugh uncontrollably ..

When maan continued glaring her ..she controlled her laugh n said in between ..

Tu mien kab se bole jaarahi hoon aap sunte kyun nahi hu ..

Maan wiped his face with the napkin ..n shook his head

Tumhara bachpana kabhi jaayega nahi na ..

Geet smiled n shook her head looking at him with her eyes full of mischief ..that was the face of a 10 years old after doing something naughty ...her playfulness was thr in her eyes that made her look so adorable n it was so hard not to smile for maan ..n thr geet knew he isn't mad n she held his arms tight with of her hands n dragged him out to go for another stall ..

Geet was as expected over the mood seeing the beautiful gown maan bought for her ...n our romeo naturally got stuck by her beauty when she walked down wearing it ...she truly looked like a deva performing on the stage every move so beautiful ..Standing thr receiving her trophy she looked so elegant ...she was he perfect combination of elegance ..attitude ..softness n beauty ..they both had thr eyes a bit mishty when geet was asked to say something after receiving the trophy ..she was speechless ..all she remembered was the man sitting infront of her coming to that orphanage taking her with him ...giving her a place to call home ..giving people to call her family ...giving her all the love she ever wanted ..a protective embrace to hid in ..a shoulder to cry on ...looking into his eyes ..she said what she never could ...for hundreds of men sitting thr they 2 words but he knew what emotion is contained ...he knew what was going on in tht mind ..he knew today those tears were of happiness ..n he just smiled at her while she looked straight into his eyes ..

THANK YOU ..

That was all she managed to say without embarrassing herself in front of her whole institute ..n stepped down the stage only to be embraced by maan who allowed her to pour her heart hidden by the world n when she parted she handed over her trophy wo him with a million dollar smile on her face n he took it with all the pride reflecting in his eyes n kissed her forehead ..

Congrats geet ..

N that was the end of another chapter of her life ...next day was the final day at the academy everyone were sad to leave the place but geet was super excited to be back home ...to be back with him 24/7 again ...the happiness of being with him over powered every other emotion ...she did bid adeu to all her friends teachers n everyone wishes each other good luck ..n she stepped out of the academy holding maan's hand just like she entered here ..completely unaware of the restlessness in maan ..thinking about what is next to come ...he knew what he is going to do but he doesn't what her decision would be ...

Sitting in the taxi from dehli airport geet was as usual blabbering about her plans ...the movies she has bagged to watch ...

Haayee finally I m gonna be back home ...pata hai kitna miss kiya mene ghar ko ..(maan looke d at her n saw the excitement in her shinning eyes for a second he regretted what he was about to do while completely lost in her happiness she never stopped talking) suno aaj sham ko na mamo aur maami se milne challenge ...its been 3 years mien mili hi nahi unse ..n han aaj raat apko aapka wohh ghaas phoos khane ko nahi milega ...aaj ka menu mien decide karungi ...total Punjabi food ...haayee rabba parathe khaye huye tu aisa lagta hai sadiyan hugayi ...aap sun rhe hu na ..

Han ...han geet mien ...mien sun rha hoon ..

Tu kuch bolo bhi ...kab se mien hi bole jaa rhi hoon ...aur aap aise budh ki tarha bethe hu ..

Abb tum bolne ka mauqa dugi tb hi tu kuch bolunga na ..

v.funny ...itna bhi nahi bolti mien ..

wohh tu poori dunya witness kar sakti hai geet ..

who kya hai na maan aapki tarha mere bolne par tax nahi lagta ..

geet ..tum kahan se lekar aati hu yeh lines ..

dukaan se ...

n she giggled ..making him smile ..n the talks continued until the driver stopped the car ..n geet glanced around confused as to y they were here n not at thr home ..

chalo geet ..

par yahan kyun maan ??

chalo sab batata hoon ..

geet stepped out n saw the same house she lived 18 years of her life in ...the house built by her father ..the house tht was taken under custody by the court ...the house she doesn't even want to be in ..

kya hua hai plz batao mujhe ...u know what job hi ghar chal kar bata dena ..

geet started to walk away when maan stopped her holding her wrist from back n she stopped at her place ..while maan walked towards her n placed a key in her hand ..geet looked at him confused n then glanced at the key ..nothing was going in her head while with every second her heart beat was increasing with fear ..

ye hiss ghar ki chabbi hai ..court ne isse release kar diya hai now its ur property tum ...tum abb yeh ghar use kar sakti hu ..

geet looked at the key ...the house n then at maan ..everything was confusing her y all of a sudden he had to say all this ..y was she here ...y was he doing this ...n then maan turned his back towards her ..

ek dost ke naate mien jo kuch kar sakta tha tumhare liye mene kiya hai geet ...iss sab ko mera koi favor maat samajhna ... I ..i did it coz I wanted to do this ...par aaj ...today u ...u have a lot of choices n mien tumhain bound nahi karna chahta ..4 saal pehle men eek decision liya tha hum dono ke liye ..

par abb u are mature enough ...u know the world ..u know what u want ...tum jaise chaho apni life lead kar sakti hu n I ..i'll always be thr for u ..geet I ..//

maan mujhe ghar jana hai ...

maan turned to look at her but she never looked back at him instead kept looking down ...maan sighed she stopped him ...coz he really didn't had the courage to say anything more ... now he has given her the way to choose what she wants ...rest would be his luck n her decision ..

**^^**

They reached home 30 minutes later ...geet never said a word throughout n maan kept waiting for her to say something ..anything ...but she never did ..n the moment he opened the main door ..she ran inside her room n locked it ...maan didn't knew what to do now ...she had always been so expressive .. anger ..happiness ..sorrow ...fear ..she shared every emotion with him n now her shutting herself has left him handicapped ..he doesn't know what is going on in her mind n heart ..has he hurt her ...is she thinking of leaving ...what is it ..sitting in the lounge in dead silence even in her precense he was only left with regrets to have spoiled her mood ...he could have waited for her to get home ..or may be some other way to convey his feelings ..now what is he suppose to do ..

He was still contemplating what is he suppose to do when the door bell ringed n just as nakul opened it thr was his maami n mamo entering with lots of chocolates n some other stuff ..maan welcomed them n asked nakul to call geet still not sure if she would come out ..

**^^**

Geet was still sitting by the door with tears in her eyes ..she never thought coming would mean all this hurt ...she always saw the love n affection in his eyes ...every gesture everytime assured her of her believes ..she always knew he loved her ...n thought he knew that about her too ..she thought he knew her that much ...she thought they knew what they wanted in life ...but the way he gave the way out of his hurt her like never before ...was it that easy for him to let her go ...she would die be4 even thinking about living without him n how damn easily he asked her choose ...what did he thought she was doing with him since last 3 years that he gave her this kind of an option ...with every passing second her hurt was turning into anger ...n now all she wanted to do was to hit hm hard non-stop ..when nakul knocked on her door informing her about the mami n mamo sitting downstairs..

Geet went down after washing her face n hugged both of them with all her love n they presented her with thr gifts n mami ji gave her fav aloo ke parathe ...geet served them in a dish along with other refreshments n served both mami n mamo but left maan ..maan was observing her n she was ignoring him royally ..not even sparing a single glance at him ..n that was enough for him to know that she is super angry ..mami n mamo left after an hour however maan was highly intrigued by the private talk geet had with mami be4 she left ...but ofcourse he wouldn't get an answer n just like be4 geet was in her room doing god knows what but he was non-existent for her for the whole day ...maan tried talking to her once at the dinner but she glared him so hard ...he almost thought next second something would be smashed on his face n he shut himself

Geet (st) : bare aaye ACP Maan Singh Khurana ...ek sorry tu bol nahi sakte upar se fazool fazool sawal kar rahe hain ..inko tu kal party mien batati hoon mien ..😆😛

**^^**

Maan didn't knew what was happening geet was gone right after breakfast ..n he got a parcel delivered at his office with a note by geet ..which actually took him by surprise ..

ACP Sahab,

Yeh dress aaj sham ki party ke liye hai ...tu agar theek 7 bje aap ghar nahi puhanche tu aapka court marshal pakka hai aaj

Geet

She was really very angry n he knew that ...but how is he going to undo all he has said ...n what possibly can he say now

Maan sighed as his officer handed him the case file n kept wondering what the party is all about ...given the mood geet is in ...what is she celebrating ...?? But nothing made sense ..may be it's a reunion she has invited everyone over ...she did mentioned about it on thr way back from Mumbai but he couldn't imagine her partying in that sour mood ..he just wished he doesn't get any emergency calls today or he will be surely dead tonight ..

**^^**

Maan rang the bell n prayed to have geet in a better mood ..but saw nakul opening the door before he could ask about anything nakul ran inside making maan confused ...he stepped in n closed the door only to see the whole house pitch black ..

Geet ...Nakul ...yeh kya naya mazaak hai tum dono ka ...

Geet ...

SURPRISE ...

Maan was taken a back when the lights were switched on suudenly seeing all his collegues n friends n relatives in his house which was bye the way decorated beautifully n everyone was clapping cheering ..maan stepped in the hall with a smile searching for geet ...n thn she entered from the kitchen ..n lights dimmed ..dressed in a beautiful saari holding the cake in her hand ...with a smile on her face she winked at him ..n maan smiled shaking his head ..

Everybody started singing the b'day song while maans eyes kept fixated on his angels face glowing in the candle light looking so beautiful with that smile on her face ..Gautam guided maan towards the table n geet came over thr putting the cake down ..she wished him ..

Happy B'day ACP Sahab ...

Maan smiled looking at her ..

Meri b'day mien mujhe hi dhamka kar bolaya gya ..kyun

Abb seedhe se tu aap aate nahi...aisa hi sahi ..

Its beautiful ..th ..//

Abb thanks mat kehna warna ...warna mien yeh cake khane nhi dungi ..

Maan laughed n so as others ..but he was so overwhelmed with the efforts she put in to do all this ..cutting the cake he fed geet ..mamo ..mami gautam n nakul ...n party followed ..everyone was enjoying to thr fullest with the music onn maan was busy meeting with people receiving blessings n gift he never realized when geet went past him until she stood at the staircase with a mike in her hand ...

Hello everybody,

Firstly thank u for coming here at such a short notice n now sorry coz abb mien aap sab thoraa bore karne wali hoon ..kyun mujhe kuch kehna hai ..don't worry buhat lambi speech nahi hai ...ek dost ki kahani hai ..(maan looked at her confused while she kept her eyes fixed on him with a smile n that glint in her eyes which was missing since yesterday)

Wohh dost jo meri zindagi mien mera savior ban kar aaya ..jisne sirf meri jaan bachai nahi bulke mujhe jeena sekhaya ..mujhe iss dunya ko face karna sikhaya ..mujhe himmat di ke mien apne liye khud lar sakoon ..jo meri hasi bhi bana aur jisne galti par mujhe danta bhi ...jisne mujhe ek ghar diya apna kehne ko ..jisne mujhe parivaar diya jo mujh se buhat pyaar karta hai ...ussne mujhe pyaar karna sikhaya ...(till now maan thought this was some of her thank you speech but now his heart started beating faster realizing what she was about to say yet his mind refusing to accept the smile never left his face n his grip on his glass tightened in anticipation)

He is my best friend ...mien usski ankhoon mien dekh kar uske dil ki baat jaan jaati hoon ..mujhe laga tha wohh bhi meri ankhoon mien mere dil ki baat parh sakta hai ...but mien bhool gyi thi hai tou akhir ek larka hi na ..aur larke tu hute hi duffer hain ..(maan chuckled looking down now not able to look at her ...realizing how much his words yesterday might have hurt her yet the happiness was overwhelming him)

Tu aaj aap sab ke saamne mien apne friend ko apne dil ki baat bolna chahti hoon ..

geet stepped down the stair case n walked towards maan giving her mike to nakul on the way n surprising everyone n shocking maan she knelt down on her knees looking up at him with a smile ...she asked ever so sweetly ..

ACP Maan Singh Khurana ...kya aap life time ke liye mera saath accept karenge ..??

Will u marry me ..??

Maan looked down with his eyes wet ..all he wanted in this moment was to engulf this wonderful lady in his embrace n never let go but he had to put up his price ..

Sochna parega ..

Hawww ...

Ek shart hai ..

Kya ..??

Tumhain humesha aisa hi rehna parega ...kabhi badlogi nahi ...

Geet smiled whole heartedly n nodded n maan kept looking at her with all his love ..n she pouted ...

Abb jaldi han bolo ..meri knee mien dard hu rha hai ..

Maan laughed with everyone else in the party at her cuteness ..

Acha hai na 5 saal se mujhe itna tang kiya hai kuch tu payback hona chahiye na ..

Hawww u ...(geet stood up n wacked him hard n continued hitting him) ..mean ..sado ..dhusht ..danav ..mien chorungi nahi ..

Arre ..arre geet roko ..(he tried running away but she ran behind him n hit him 2 or 3 times).. dekho zara shaddi se pehle hi yeh tu mujhe maar rahi hai ..

Han tu ..agar aise hi harkatien rahi na ..tu shaddi baad bhi maar paregi ..(maan stepped behind mamo while geet tried hitting him).. roko abhi batati hoon ..

N mami ji stepped in smiling ..

Arre..arre bas karo abb tum dono larna ..

They both stopped n stood in front of her panting ..while she took a gold bangle out from her purse ..

Yeh lo ..

Yeh kya hai mami gi ..

Maan ki maa ka hai ..aur tumhara shagun bhi ..

Geet smiled slipping it on her hand while maan looked at it with proud n she knelt down to take her blessing ..

Khoob khush raho dono ..

Isska matlab sir abb next party aapki shaddi ki hugi ...

Party nahi gautam jashan huga ...akhir mere bhanje ki shaddi hai ..

**^^**

As said by mamo ..they did had a grand wedding with all thr friends n collogues but maan was assigned an assignment right after a week of his marriage ...geet wasn't really happy but she put up a brave front n bid him bye with a happy face ..maan made sure she has her own car to travel to her job ..

Life did threw hurdles thr way but thr love n togetherness nothing was difficult ...as promised geet never left her childish nature ..that added colors to thr lives nor did maan left any chance to tease her ..

They were perfect for each other covering for the mistakes of other n loving one another with all thr heart ..

However met them fell in love with them for thr bond was

"a model union, and a couple never looked so natural and harmonious, a marriage made in heaven"(taken by google)

**^^**

i hope u all enjoyed it ...do let me know through ur comments n likes

luv ya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999
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haayee tabby meri jaan ..

glad to see u here ..n looking forward to ur reviews ..😳

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tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

hi sobia

yeh dil maange more ..

plz ek epilogue ..please ..showing maneet's happy married life ..and little bit trouble as maan is acp so less time for geet .,.

plz ek epilogue to banta hai itni wonderful story ke liye ..

i am missing maneet moments here ..their togetherness ...

a little showcase of past ..when geet in hostel missing maan ...

maan missing geet at his house ..

plz ..

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

hi sobia

yeh dil maange more ..

plz ek epilogue ..please ..showing maneet's happy married life ..and little bit trouble as maan is acp so less time for geet .,.

plz ek epilogue to banta hai itni wonderful story ke liye ..

i am missing maneet moments here ..there together ...

a little showcase of past ..when geet in hostel missing maan ...

maan missing geet at his house ..

plz ..

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

part two ka review abhi 8 baje ke baad ..

plz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Fabulous story!!
Maan was an absolute gem of a person!!
The story had so many ups and downs but the culmination or rather the new beginning of their life was beautiful.

Geet was restricted to her college and home due to her dad being a criminal. She wished to experience the world. Kuch choti choti khwahishei thi uski.

Maan worked in her father's gang for a year and Geet has always disliked him.

Geet tries to sneak out of the house to see the fire crackers but at the end moment, Maan catches her but he is captivated by the innocent angel and allows her to watch. The happiness on Geet's face soothed his sou.

Maan was actually an undercover agent on a mission to catch her father for his illegal activities. Geet comes to know of his mission and breaks down. He promises her that he would not kill her father.

On the crucial day, Geet follows Maan to the drug deal meet and he reassures her and leaves her in the protection of his subordinate Gautam. Maan's patience and care for her is really palpable here.

Later Geet gets caught in crossfire and her own father refuses to protect her. Such a heartbreaking moment for the innocent girl who considered her father a hero. But fate had bestowed upon her a personal hero who stepped in to save her . He even gets fatally injured in order to keep his promise to the angel. Geet is frantically worried for him as he gets shot.

Finally the evil ends and Maan gains conscious. His first thoughts are about Geet and he is distressed to see her condition at the orphanage. He rescues her and brings a smile on her face. He fights his senior officer who turns out to be his mamu to take her with him. And he then provides her a 'home'

He makes her comfortable. He is her pillar. He takes all her sadness upon himself, and showers happiness upon her. He makes her strong enough to fight the world and gets her to be independent. Hd he wanted , he could have kept her with him for his sake but his love was selfless . He wanted her to be a free bird.

Meanwhile these 6 months made Geet fall in love with him. She lightened up his dull life with her presence and childish innocence. She is elated when he gifts her her dream of dance.

She works hard during the intervening years. She grows and her feelings bloom for him . She is now his deewani, his jogan. She has now acheived her dreams and now her desire is to reunite with this man who always stood for her.

He comes to meet her at her graduation and his soul glows with happiness to see her acheive success. But he does not want to tie her up with him. He wants her take her own decisions. He is happily ready to be her friend forever and her happiness matters the most and thus he gives her a choice .

She is happy to go back to her 'home' which is Maan himself. As rightfully said "home is where heart is" .
And her heart has always been his. She is weaving a dream of happy life with her soulmate ahead but receives a speadbreaker when Maan offers her father's house back. She is rightfully miffed at him for being unable to understand her love when she has always known his. She gives him a good silent trameatment and threatens him.

He is scared off her anger and is sad that he hurt her. Later on at the birtday party, Geet proposes him in the most beautiful way. I liked tmhat Geet understood her selfless jerk and proposed him. Yay, I admire a girl who is fearless in cobmnfessing her heart to the man she loves publicly. They have their happily ever after.

It was an enthralling tale of two hearts that beat for one another. Your penmanship skills are amazing and the events kept on flowing smoothly. Wonderful work.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: tabby999
hi sobia
yeh dil maange more ..
plz ek epilogue ..please ..showing maneet's happy married life ..and little bit trouble as maan is acp so less time for geet .,.
plz ek epilogue to banta hai itni wonderful story ke liye ..
i am missing maneet moments here ..their togetherness ...
a little showcase of past ..when geet in hostel missing maan ...
maan missing geet at his house ..
plz ..

Ek epilogue?? 4 5 epilogue bante hai for this beautiful piece ..

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