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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: doll.12
Ek epilogue?? 4 5 epilogue bante hai for this beautiful piece ..

banta toh hai ..

plz tum bhi ek aacha sa comment karro ..ab sobia ne itni acchi story likhi hai ..she deserve it na ..

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: aparna3011
loved it
superb

aparna ..two three lines ka comment toh kar hi sakte hai na ..

she wrote such big for us ..

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful emotional OS! Wonderfully written! Maan was undercover! he fell 4 Geet! she has so innocent n beautiful! Her dad was arrested! Maan worried abt Geet! At last they r together! Geet proposed! pls post epilogue! terrific banner!

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

cute bubbly geet living like a fairyrale princess.

and then all the suddenly her all dreams broken shattered..

poor geet how she used to see her father as hero.

a good man with lots of enemies that's what she wasn't allowed to step outside without security.

maan all fida on geet.

her cute anger and her lovely smile

she truely is princess away from all evilness.

and maan wanted to protect her, didn't wanted to know her father truth.

geet was all shattered with maan truth.

and him killing her father still geet begged him to leave him.

least not to kill him. her daughter love still loved her father.

who left her to die when danger was near.

loved the first part of os..

very nice it was.

going to read the second half.

loved it

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Beautiful and Vibrant Story

The fact that Geet was sp protected in her fathers house was not because he was a big business man but instead he was a big criminal
destroying the lives of many with the drugs .
Geet lived a lonely life yet she had a friend that she could share everything with but was limited to the outside life and one new years
eve she decides that she too wants to see the celebration from up close and there one of the head guards Maan catches her but at the same time he allows her to see the final celebration as he too knows
that she is innocent in these matters however she calls him but she too realizes that its only him that can help her .

One day she overhears Maan talking about her father and he has no choice but has to reveal himself and tell her his true identity and
Geet is scared for her fathers life while Maan promises her that he will not kill her father but have him arrested and that is exactly what he does .
taking Geet to live with him over time they became good friends
until eventually both fell in love but Maan did not want to bound her
but Geet knew that she could never live without him
they finally got married

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

awesome os...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Fabulous story..
Maan worked in her father's gang for a year and Geet has always disliked him.Finally the evil ends and Maan gains conscious. His first thoughts are about Geet and he is distressed to see her condition at the orphanage. He rescues her and brings a smile on her face. plz ek epilogue please ..showing maneet's happy married life .

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maaneetkimeet

@maaneetkimeet

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Awww so cute n lovely

Amazing

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

next half..

loved it..

geet was totally broken by her father truth.

her house and everything was taken by govn..

and poor geet was sent to orphanage, she being nave didn't understood the behaviour of poeple there.

and maan took her to his home.

gave her his family and love.and fulfilled all her dreams.

nevrler let geet feel left alone.

and geet was in love with her mentor.and proposed him.

maan in reply want geet to never lose her nave and innocent heart.

which she never did.

awesomee is..

completely loved it

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Amazing story geet is so innocent that maan couldnt stop himself falling for her poor girl never knew that her father is a criminal after she lost her father took care of her both fall in love really liked the way geet proposed him loved it thnx 4 this beautiful story

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