Maaneet SS:Inseparable hearts:Last Part Pg 139 - Page 36

Originally posted by: dreamy

awesome part

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: idunno

first of all i will like to draw your attention towards use of name Madhu,Rishabh and Malik, it sound like reading 2 story together with different names.it distracts concentration when used repeatedly may be because u are writing 2 story together, it is not complain , suggestion.

about updates geet's father being don type person and Khorana were friend , similar type of plot i am writing in ghsp family ff fiction, but due to many writers story has rotated round and round and turn out very different story, but yours is great going keep it up.

Thanks for pointing out the errors on the names. I know it affects the reader 🤔 I apologize you for that & I'll make sure I will minimize such errors in the further updates 😳 Thanks for sharing your thoughts on my story. I haven't read GHSP FF but willing to read 😊 Since there are so many FFs on Maaneet some stories may be similar co-incidently 😆

Originally posted by: taanee

OMG Sucide😭

Have faith 😉

Originally posted by: susm

Awesome update. Maan send gift to Geet. Geet liked the dress n very happy. Rasmi jealous of Geet having gift from maan. She asked to try once n Geet refused got angry n rude with get. Next day Rashmi came n said sorry. Geet send message to maan but can't reply due to dead battery. When he replied every thing changed in Geet home her dad saw Geet n maan pic in newspaper n blasted Geet but Rashmi supported Geet. Geet is house arrested. Maan came to know about newspaper but his dad support him n said how Geet dad is not good person. Maan came to know Geet suffering from Rahul n came to see her escaping security with fake identity. Geet is on floor with blood waiting for next. N thanks for long update.

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Originally posted by: love2_soma

oh no yeh kya kar di geet ne...feeling bad fr her...abb geet k papa kya karega...hate him...kash abb akkal ajaye...

awesome but scary update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Glad you loved it. Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: nanor

simply brilliant
loved it

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: mishtypie

Amazng update Roch

Maan sent dress 2 geet as he was feelng bad 4 spoilng her dress nd geet lovd d dress😃

Bt rashmi's reaction was weird she was J nd raj came back nd askd geet abt her past weeks nd all hid maan's part👍🏼

Rashmi tried take d dress gvn by maan 2 geet bt geet didnt let her nd she thankd maan by sendng msg👏

Raj got 2 knw abt maaneet as their pic was on d front page of papaer nd geet was house arrestd😡

Otherside maan got geet's msg nd was feelng happy bt later geet tld nt 2 talk 2 her nd maan finally got d reason 4 geet's behaviour😭

Maan managd 2 go handa house bt he got shock when he saw geet who tried 2 commit sucide😲

Waitng 4 d nxt part Roch update soon

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Originally posted by: shah10

Febulous update
Poor geet
Who took geet n maans pic
Hate geet s dad
Hope geet is ok

The culprit is yet to be revealed 😉 Thanks a lot for commenting.

Originally posted by: annirogc

superb update dear.. maan gifted geet a dress for apology.. so sweet of him.. geet was feeling possesive for the dress.. she dont want to give it to anyone .. why rashmi behaved like that..geet sent message to maan.. but next day new paper headline shocked all.. is it done by geet sister.. geet attempted suicide.. waiting for next

Keep reading 😉 Thanks a lot! 😃

Originally posted by: mitali10

Superb update dear...I think the main culprit is rashmi...she is just acting...let's see...thanks for pm...

Thanks a lot 😳