Maaneet SS:Inseparable hearts:Last Part Pg 139 - Page 21

Originally posted by: akkub.92

nice part but sad to see them sad and separate will wait to read there past and pari is so cute

great work👏

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: Snow_Angel

Roch so awesome yr...
I love love love the interaction between pari and geet very much...I m now desperately waiting to know about maaneet past... I think some big misunderstanding spoil a beautiful relationship... waiting to know more update soon

Thanks a lot Sanjh 😳 Their past will be revealed soon 😉

Originally posted by: mishtypie

Res

Please unres soon 😆

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

That was a wonderful update! I'm really looking forward to knowing the past behind Maan and Geet. I actually already have a few scenarios in my head 😆
I'm not sure if this counts as constructive criticism especially because you apologized for it already but I would just say if anything needs to fixed it's just fixing the wrong names. I was confused at first as to why Pari kept referring to Geet as Madhu but when I read your note I understood.
I was an avid GF user but I've went MIA for a while now. So I'm back for now and I just wanted to say I totally enjoyed reading your update 😊
I'm extremely sorry if I sounded rude or mean about the constructive criticism. I know writing takes a lot of time and I may have sounded unappreciative but honestly there's no constructive criticism to say especially when you write flawlessly! Again I apologize please do not take it negatively

Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts on my story 😳 & I truly apologize for the mistakes with the names I know it affects the readers. I'm trying my best to avoid such errors! 😊

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

Amazing update ...loved the pari antics the way she close eyes n hope for best

pari-geet moments wow

ooops is their MU b/w maaneet ...waiting for next update

Thanks a lot for commenting 😊

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Geet feels some connection 2 Pari! Geet is Pari's teacher! Pari is happy! Geet made things easier! Geet thinks her duagher is dead and that maan moved on! Poor Geet! update soon, well written

Thank you so much 😳

Originally posted by: asmani

Hey i read all thr parts at a go

Really liked it

Will wait for the next part

Thanks a lot 😊 glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: love2_soma

is dere some misunderstanding b/w maan n geet...

awesome n cute update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Thanks a lot for commenting 😳

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Beautiful and emotional update

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: shah10

Super update
Love it

Thanks 😊