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Hi all its a new OS but continued from Transport Love since I fell in love with the characters lol. I've found my happy corner with Into the Dark, but Forced Love is quite hard. A timid, scared Geet is hard for me. So decided to drop in a crazy Geet, helps my immune system lol. I asked a couple months back if anyone was interested, and some were. So here it is 'Ex-love' which is a continuation from 'Transport Love'. Those who haven't read it yet, please do or you can simply start with this.
Ex'Love





The wife
She's coming, my husband's bloody ex is visiting our family home. Chi, men I tell you are disgusting, filthy creatures. I'm still here and he wants to bring the other women. Over my dead body, either I'm going to kill him or her but come what may they are going to regret messing with Geet Handa, I mean Khurrana. Would he like it if I invited Dev, that lousy ex of mine, not that I would but still? Argh, I don't know what to do. My life was perfect, just 3 months ago we celebrated out 1st wedding anniversary with a celebrity-like party. Life was simply a joy that until last night, everything's changed. How can he lie to me?
'My friend is coming to meet you' that cheat. Could he not tell me that his ex is back to continue where they left off? Daddy, I want my daddy I cried silently. Will he leave me, his present love for his past love? My Maan is not my man no more.
'Baby open the door please' he shouted over the door
'No first tell HER not to come' I retorted
I have to think of ways to persuade my-good-for-nothing-stupid husband. I don't want her to come and trap Maan with her long swooshy jet-black hair, long spider-like legs or with that super model face. I know you must be wondering how do I know, we as in me and Anni, she's such a sweet exposing that betraying brother of her's. So yes we stayed up all night googling Pari Kapoor. She's a model, that too a top model, the America's Next Top Model kind. How am I meant to compete with that, I know I'm his wife granted but she's a model, A MODEL. I'll look like banana compared to her, I thought with tears tickling down my wife-looking face.
I can't sit still while his having a full blown affair. Geet take it like man, your not going to be desperate and plead, I tell myself. No ways, never. If he wants to leave me then I'll, yes I'll tell him that I'm moving in with an ace football player and that I never loved him. If he can have an affair then I can have two. Shahid Kapoor is a fit dude that Anni crushes over, so he'll be my second boyfriend. Oh boy his face will explode, I laugh feeling the jitters. Wait a minute Shahid kapoor, Pari kapoor. Shit their siblings, brothers an actor and the sister is a model, perfect family. Maan would know I'm lying, what to do? Someone help, daddy. I want to cry, actually I am crying. Why me? Why do I get all the rotten eggs first Dev and now Maan? I have to think of another man. Better, cuter and smarter, Sean Faris my love ever since Sleep Over. Ok my second love, since Maan's my first. Why did that rag queen Pari need to come back? Wasn't my Maan happy with me? Kota I swear remembering dadi's favourite word. OK back to Sean, if Maan asks then me and him are the best of friends and we've been dating for the last 30 years. Ha ha ha Maan Singh Khurrana beat that, I smile finally break into a smile.

'Baby please open the door, darling please' I heard Maan shout again. Oh gosh can he not leave me to think. Yes so me and Sean have dated for 30 years, wait is he even 30? He doesn't look it, what the hell your not even 30. Flop, my plan is a flop and that ugly banana toppling would steal my one and only husband. I feel terrified thinking about the outcome. Geet why do you gotta be so dumb? Don't you know I'm human too? My Maan I cried

'baby you listening, open the door honey' He said diverting my attention again.
'Get lost you two timing cow' I shout over breaking into tears again, my life is over officially.

Maan shot a glare towards Dadi and Anni who sniggered hearing Geet. He came home as soon as he was told that his wife wasn't coming out of their room. So now the three were trying their best to get Geet out. Not that they thought she would comment suicide or something but were scared because Geet's really clumsy always harming herself and others around her.

The husband

'Baby please can we talk' I try again. My poor baby's locked herself for three hours now. I wonder if she's even eaten anything, iss Anni ki toh main.
'I didn't do anything' Anni whispers before running to her room taking dadi along.
'Yes she's not to blame' I repeat sarcastically. What was the need to tell Geet? Pari is a friend first, ok maybe we did date for a month or two but that was way back, in college. Past life, forgotten life was the simple motto. But now that Geet knows I wonder what's she'll do. My wife is really sensitive and really really imaginative. By now she's probably pictured me fathering a love child somewhere.
'Where are you hiding the baby?' she shouted. See I told you, kiss ka baby kaha ki baby. Uff these these women in my life are turning me mental with Geet leading the way. Crazy as she is but I still love my wife, my life. I, the great Maan Singh Khurrana have been trying for the last half an hour to get my wife, Geet to listen but she's one stubborn women.

The Ex
It feels great to be back home, I'm back in Delhi after 5 years. It feels great, being a model takes you to different places but nothing compares to home. However this isn't business, actually the total opposite, quite personal. But don't tell Karan or he'll sulk. Man can he sulk, if I'm late he'll sulk, if I'm early he'll sulk. All he does is sulk but I still love him, well at least I think I do. Thats why I'm here to find out whether my love for Karan is the real stuff and what life would be like if I settled with one my exes? Ok lets be clear, this mission is secret. 'Operation Ex' is a wild goose race and so far its gone horrible. I've met Adi, total wierdo he thinks I'm his soul mate; Yash, a compulsive flirt, the stupid man tried to kiss me, can't he see I'm officaly half married and then there's Romeo, the least I say about him the better. The creep's got a girlfrind, someone by the name of Sasha but still he tried his luck with me. Disgusting, filty, obnioxious creature and then there's Rahul, total pain in the neck. The royal high-head thinks his the only man on this planet, I'd rather die single even if he was the last man on earth. Oh I hope Maan isn't like that, his a gentleman from what I can remember and his married, aww his wife is so cute. I saw them on the magazine cover a month ago, awww they looked happy. So that should guarantee that he would keep his hands off me. He would, wouldn't he? OMG where have I landed, ok I'm the Pari Kapoor, men dream about me but I'm a one man women and right now, Karan is that man. Boy oh boy, Karan would kill me with his sulking if he finds out.
'Pari sorry something's come up so I won't be able to pick you up from the airport' Maan said as soon as I picked up my ring phone sounding apologetic.
'It's ok I understand. You men and your business, Karan's the same but I still love him' there I said it, I hope he gets the hint and stays away. I know I sound stupid but I wanted to close the past chapters of my life before starting another with Karan, you understand me right. 'Please help me in my mission and keep Maan away' I shoot a quick prayer to the almighty before hailing a cab to the Khurana Residence.
The situation
'Geet this is Pari, my college friend and Pari meet my wife Geet, the light of my life' Maan introduced trying to please Geet but that did nothing but infurtiate her further. Maan spent the whole afternoon explaining to Geet that there was no chance on earth or the entire universe that he would leave Geet not even for a hot model. But man was that pricey, he than spend more time cajoling his wife and instilling that fact that she was the only women in his life. He even mentioned that she was hotter than the sun itself. But that did nothing to her mood, since she still glared at Pari. If looks could kill, Pari would have been incinerated. Geet made it a point to keep them away, stuck to Maan like glue, stopping them hugging, sitting next to eath other or even Maan passing dishes over to Pari at the dinner table.
The senior Khurrana's were amused by Geet and her ways. Geet and her Gang never stopped harrasing Maan but today everyone seemed like a ticking bomb, one word and the three women would burst. So they attended to their guest instead with care and hospitality causing Geet to wither away in tension. She could envision Pari taking her place, soon she would be the Ex wife Miss Geet Handa and Pari, the other women would be Mrs Khurrana. With that thought Geet burst into another fit of anger throwing food on Maan's plate, poor Maan had no other option but to eat.
'Geet Bhabhi, Geet' Anni shouted entering her room. After dinner it was decided that Anni would be Geet's spy and Dadi was hired as her detective, they would collect evidence against criminal and show them to the judge, as in her. The dectective was too tired, so went to bed promising to do a double shift the next moring but the spy did her duty with upmost dedication, following the culprits from an arms length.
'I saw them' Anni whispered in a low voice, shock and utter disppointment was evident. Geet collected herself expecting a hard blow, tears alreday collecting in her almond shaped eyes.
'They were making out' Anni stated mechanically. There it was, simple facts to prove that her husband was indeed cheating. The culprit was none other but her husband, the love of her life and the witness was his own sister.
'What?' of the the things Geet thought of in that millisecond, nothing matched up to that. Her husband was with another women, in the same house. There was no stopping Geet now, she wailed, smashed and tore Maan's clothes to shred.
'Baby what happened here' he asked seeing the state of his room but Geet's condition was far worse, he immedicatley jumped to her seeing her like that. It was as if she's been crying for days, although it was only 20 minutes ago that they had their dinner.
'Get lost' Anni shoved Maan back almost tripping him over.
'Get another restort' Anni shouted slamming the door of his face
'and a another women' he heard Geet's cry. What was happening? Why was Geet so hesterical? Ok granted Geet was a bit too dramatic but whats wrong with his idiot sister. He stood there lightly tapping the door, the last thing he needed was his parents questioning when he, himself wasn't sure what was happening his house or life for that matter. After a couple minutes, he decided enough was enough. He too had self pride, so he took off to the only place he knew that would welcome him with open arm at this time of the night.
With no other options available, Maan closed the door of the study to recieve a rude shock
'What are you doing here?' both the the father and son duo questioned.
'I asked first' Maan shot seeing his father stealing his bed for the night. Maan was in a foul mood, first his precious wife hasn't stopped crying all day, his sister's got something stuck up her backside and now his father's taken his only comfort.
'I'm your father' senior Khurrana argued.
'woh I've been kicked out for ... for snoring' he lied not wanting his father to get a wiff of whats happening.
'These women are such menace' his father remarked before pointing to the adjacent sofa for his son. Senior Khurrana had tough nights, since every other night was spent in the study which was more than his second bedroom now, the father-son duo layed there uncomfortably, trying to get some shut eye.
The next morning wasn't any better for Maan, Geet ignored him like he was some kind of disease, Anni was vile and Dadi, well she was plain rude often tuanting Pari. Poor girl being a model, she didn't know what hit her? Maan sat there watching his wife who looked really frail. The senior Khurrana's sat at the breakfast table and witnessed a withdrawn Geet who looked like she'd been crying all night, a annoyed Anni and a foul-mouthed dadi. Something was diffiniety wrong, and both again decided to keep out. Not wanting to get their heads ripped off, so they tended to Pari unknown to the fact that their actions was rubbing salt to the three wounded hearts. Geet she stood up to get away before she lost her patience, Anni and Dadi also decided to join her.
'Karan' Pari ran to the entrance and hugged her beloved fiancee. Maan was kind enough to explain to Pari a simple fact that when true love comes knocking then one should grap it with both hands like he did. This forced Pari to hug Maan, since she finally found the answer to her search but unfortutely Anni saw them like that.
'Meet Karan my finacee' Pari gushed introducing Karan to the family. 3 things happened: dadi had a mini heart attack, Anni dropped her spoon after the shocking and Geet lost her balance, had it not been for Maan then we would have witnessed a square faced Geet.
'So she's not here for you?' Geet questioned for the hundredth time, Maan explained to Geet about Pari's mission and how he invited Karan to help them unite and to clear his wifes anger once they were in the confines of their bedroom.
'So your not having an affair?' Geet asked like a baby
'baby no, your my world' he said plastering Geet into a bear hug
'So you weren't kissing last night' she said tearing up
'Who said that?' Maan was at his tethers end, someone was going to die today. Anni who plonked herself to their bedroom door ran for her life, she wasn't the smartest so when she saw them standing so close she thought they were kissing. So much for helping, now she's dead.
'Anni' Maan roared shaking the foundation of their house. Anni ran faster, now only running was writen in her fortune. Poor Arjun will be a widow soon, and she would be Late Anwesha Khurrana, why was life so unfair? Maybe they can run away and get married, with no other option Anni immediately called Arjun. She could persuade her family later, that is if she was still alive tomorrow, but now she needed to save herself.
Life at the Khurana's was everything but normal. Unfortunatley for Geet and fortunatly for Maan, Geet came acrose only one Ex. What would happen if she met a dozen? Not exactly the secret of the century but Maan had a colourful past. Rose, Daisy, Daphodil, even the flowers witnessed his numerous flings. The saying 'You reap what you sow?' is apt for Maan, life as Mr Maan Singh Khurana would never be the same. If Pari was lightening and Sameera would be the tsunami. Destiny has its own way, life is a circle so Maan and Sameera would most likely face each other. How and when, I leave you to decide. But Geet and her gang of girls would make it a living hell for sure.
I hope you liked ride. This OS was influenced by one of my novels, and I thought to share it with you. It's just a chapter from Maan-Geet's life which I personally enjoyed writting. Hopefully you enjoyed reading it too and didn't find it boring. Please feel free to like and your leave your comments.
Until next time, BYE

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I written this OS quite some time back but never posted it, since I was in two minds but finally decided to. So hope you like it.Transport love - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4307066/transport-love-0s-completed
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this is hilarious... i enjoed reading it...


do write more...



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Very sweet n lovely os. Tk you.
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An entertaining os. Had me chuckling all the way through 😆
Poor Maan if Geet ever finds out about the other girlfriends then God save him😃
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Enjoyed thoroughly nd is awesome piece of work .poor maan 😆
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🤣
HILARIOUS
Have been always a fan of Drama queen Geet :P
poor Pari 😆

any chance we will get more .. sequels ?
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hi thanks 4 da marvellous hilarious OS! Poor Maan! Possessive angry Geet! Annie just adds fuel 2 the fire! Pari thoughts amusing! So Pari engaged! Geet shocked n happy! well written!
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awesome update
poor maan hv to bear so much bcz of his over dramatic wife geet n her imaginary world
annie giving wrong info made maan kicked out of his bedroom
poor geet ... cried so much
thnk god karan was there on time n pari introduced him as her fiance ...clearing d mu 😆
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wow lovely and hillarious update..
loved it to bits
geet is so melodramatic and her gang too
poor maan..lol
waiting for sameera's entry..

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