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some of these online qoutes are so cruel



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and on that note i think I'll upload part 1


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Im sorry for the long wait but it took me some time to get into it again. Here it goes the 2nd part of Ex-love for Drashtilove, and the rest of you who have been waiting. Hope you all like it. Please don't expect logic, if you've read the first one than you'd know that there's nothing called reality lol. Please do excuse my language, this is quite normal for me but not for most of you's so SORRY. As usual this OS is inspired by my fav author SK - Shopaholic and Baby.

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Ex VS Love = but with a twist

The Situation

Geet and Maan slowly walked into the cabin, feeling nervous; scared and excited at the same time. Why wouldn't they be? Geet was expecting and was 6 months in. Maan and Geet were stronger than ever, the last 3 years of marriage was a joy for both. Obviously full of drama too with Geet around.

'Geet don't worry everything would be fine' Maan tried to relieve her stress, unfortunately their doctor retired and today they were to officially meet the new physician taking over. SWOOSH and walked in a 6.2 hot female who could easily be the mother of all models, no not as hot as Tyra Banks but could be her sister from another mother.

'Hi I'm Dr Sameera and I'll be taking over from your previous doctor' she introduced herself while looking through the records on the table, Geet couldn't help but notice the women dressed top to bottom in branded clothes looking like she's just stepped out of GLAMOUR Magazine.

'So Mrs Kh..' she started but stopped the next second staring at Maan killing Geet with tension

'Maan Singh Khuranna' she smiled looking at Maan like he was some kind of old love making Geet annoyed beyond limits

'Sam' he pulled a face like remembering her

'Hi, its been a long time' he laughed completely ignoring his exploding wife beside him

'Sameera Gupta and an Obstetrician, I thought you hated babies' he laughed seeing the recoiling look on Sam's face

'I deal with pregnant women and not babies, so please' she continued with a smirk making Geet wonder how these two knew each other

'Maan you look so hot' Sam playfully fanned herself while Maan laughed hard. Both completely overlooking the fact that this was Geet's appointment, she was 6 months pregnant for heaven's sake. Already suffering from the hormonal imbalance, this did little good. Seeing HER husband flirt around with HER doctor. Ok maybe he wasn't flirting but are we forgetting this is Mrs Geet Khuranna (nee Handa) we are talking about, the crazy; cuckoo; wacko Geet ex-Handa.

'Baby are you OK' Maan immediately turned over handing Geet water when she started FAKE coughing, of course she couldn't let their clinic romance run for long. She needed attention, of course she did. Geet being pregnant was the next best thing to sliced bread in their world, Maan and the family treated her like the queen.

'O I'm sorry Mrs Khurrana, can you just get over there so we can measure your height and weight' Dr Sameera informed walking over to the balance while Geet smiled victoriously, hahaha beat that stupid doctor.

'Gosh Maan it was good to see you, I don't think we've come across each other ever since we broke up' all hell broke loose with that one statement.

The wife

'URGH how bloody dare she call me fat' I almost screamed looking at the mirror, who the hell does she think she is? I still look the same, Ok maybe I'm a little chubby but that's because Dadi and mum can't stop feeding me. O what the hell? I'm fat like a dinosaur sized egg, but who the hell is she to say that? I hate that doctor, Yes you've got it right I'm crying right now, you won't believe that witch associated all the ugly diseases with me, she's ugly herself. Sameera, eww what kind of name is that. Ok maybe it's o right, but Geet's better, a thousand time better. I smiled feeling happy again but the next minute remembered how she asked me whether I'm suffering from cellulite, pimples, varicose veins and indigestion. Yes my heart burning you stupid fag but because of you, I so hate that creep. Which doctor on earth wears Chanel? She's meant to look all meek and smart but in plain clothes. ARGH I HATE HER. She's officially a cow, a mooing churning cow. Make that a fat ugly cow!

But it's not her, it's me, isn't it? I'm fat and that's a fact, I can't bend or sit without help, so officially I'm the fat cow I cry louder seeing my bloated stomach. Why does pregnancy need to be so darn hard? Why can't I and Maan wake up one day to a cute baby delivered by an Emu, Ostrich or even a Falcon? These Disney movies are all fake, they sell a load of rubbish. I'm telling you, you can't trust anyone these days! Not even Grinch and especially lousy husbands, its almost like Maan's got a girlfriend hiding in each corner of the world; each with a different occupation crawling around like unwanted creatures. Mind you ex since I'm his wife, one and only wife. Sorry where was I? Yes even the papers for that matter, I bet Angelina Jolie; Jessica Alba and Keira Knightley wore silicon baby bumps, no wonder they were in shape within a month after delivery. OMG does that mean Kate Middleton wasn't pregnant? OH this is no less than a eureka moment! Finally I grasped the reality of life, well celebrity life. Owww why can't we do the same thing, fake it till we break it. We could collect the perfect looking baby from the baby ward, one that has Maan's hair and my face. Perfect isn't it but no we're too common for such splendid treatment. I'm telling you it's all a big conspiracy? Make the pretty, happy wives fat and ugly while the celebrities steal their way into the limelight. The doctors especially fake doctors like Sam are in it, I'm sure she gets paid to do this. Is she even a real doctor? ARGH why does life need to be so complicated for poor little me? Not that I'm poor nor am I little no more with that fat tears flooded down my face. Why is life so unfair?

The husband

'Geet do we have to watch him?' I cribbed for the 20th time that night. Normally when pregnant women demand their cravings, usually its food related. I don't know chocolate, burger or maybe even something bizarre like ketchup on ice cream but no not my wife, Geet has cravings for movies, namely Sean Faris and his mouse looking face. So here we are at 3am watching Never Back Down for the 10th time this week, and next Yours, Mine and Ours would follow. Can you imagine it Maan Singh Khuranna watching chick flicks at 3 in the morning? Life is officially over.

'Awww Maan do something his hurt' Geet cried hysterically throwing my hands towards the screen. When will she get it that A. it's just a film and B. we've watched it like a gazillion time yet she cried every time. ARGH I seriously hate this dude. I feel like pulling out my hair, better yet his. If I see him smile one more time, I swear I'll break his teeth through the screen. That would give him something to smile about.

'That doctor was a cow' Geet muttered in bed while I kept quiet. I'm sure she's still reeling over the fact that I dated Sam. But it was eons ago and I barely remember, ok ok fine I do man. I remember her a little, fine I remember it all. Happy now? Yeah so she was my first major crush and the first real relationship unlike Pari but I'm not telling that to my wife. She'll kill me and then freeze my heart to feed the ducks. Oh boy! Please let this be a secret, I pray suddenly feeling the chills.

'I don't need a parachute, baby if I've got you. Your gonna catch me, your gonna catch me if I fall' Maan sang while combing his hair but unknown to him, Anni was secretly monitoring all his moves and the next second she ran towards Dadi's room getting her news for the day.

'Geet change your Gynae beta, I can't have you stressing at this point' Dadi was highly irritated why Maan even acknowledged his EX especially in front of Geet, mind you a pregnant Geet.

'No dadi I told him the same, I'm more mature now. Don't worry Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurrana can handle some silly old fling of his' Geet joked hugging Dadi to hide her real emotion. Who was she kidding she was totally scared and hasn't changed a bit.

'Geet Bhabhi, Geet I heard him' Anni puffed barging in and then bent over to regain her breath before dropping the BIG BAD news

'What are you doing here?' Dadi questioned seeing her granddaughter early in the morning. Anni was been happily married to Arjun for 2 years now, but still a crazy nut, a thick skulled nut. Geet quickly intercepted, informing dadi that she called Anni over yesterday after the clinic appointment where she met the super EX in her husband's life.

'Who else knows this?' Dadi questioned seeing a flustered Geet and an ignoring Anni, Dadi knew this was PARI all over again but far worse since hormones were also in play this time round.

'Erm Anni my sister' Geet side hugged Anni while Anni nodded as if to say this was the most obvious thing to do

'Pinky but she's my best friend' Geet continued seeing Dadi narrow her eyes

'Pari, Dadi I like her now' Geet justified seeing the exasperated look Dadi threw her way

'Yes and she can help, after all she was an ex too' Anni tried to help unknown to the fact that she was ruining more than helping

'And Deepika' Geet counted on her finger. Well who could blame her? After she met that fashionable--queen-of-all-things-black Sam, Anni called, so she explained the situation to her then Pinky, so Geet just had to reiterate it to her best friend. COME ON SHE'S HER BESTEST FRIEND, and best friends never hide anything. Then Geet pondered over Pari, she also had a right to know what's happening in Geet's life after all Geet and Pari were good friends now. Geet was even Pari's maid of honour, so Geet owned it to Pari and then Deepika, remember the first friend she made on the train journey (Transport Love), well she's Geet's clinic buddy. Both fell pregnant somewhat similar timing and were reintroduced in the clinic. So who better than Deepika to understand Geet's situation. I mean from one pregnant women to another. Similar to a heart to heart talk but in their case it was a belly to belly talk.

'He was what?' Geet shouted, once Dadi was out the room Anni described Maan's weird behaviour

'Yes Geet, look you're the parachute at the minute since your' Anni was about to say fat but seeing Geet's murderous glare she thought otherwise

'and and she's the baby' Anni stammered to flabbergasted Geet pushing her into another world

'Are you sure he wasn't just singing it, you know I love Cheryl Versini-Fernandez (ex Cole) right and we were listening to it last night' Geet questioned still not wanting to believe Anni's theory

'No Geet I'm sure his cheating, see his falling in our eyes and Sam is a baby doctor. Duh Geet its quite simple' Anni forced, poor girl would be screwed if her brother found out about the idea's she was implanting into Geet, who broke into a tirade the next minute cursing Maan, her life but mostly Sam and don't forget the water works which exploded along with her mouth.

The Ex

Gosh Maan's married that to an idiot, if you ask me. Geet, yes she may be rich and cute but I'm Sameera and I get what I want. I need him back and fast, Maan's too hot for girls like Geet. She's perfect for the Vijay guy I'm dating who's quite cool but too boring and isn't half as rich or good-looking as Maan. Sam and Maan were meant to be, and now that I've finally found him again, I won't let some bimbo steal him away.

'It was so nice to meet you honey' I deliberately texted late in the night. The most unexpected thing happened today, I was out with Vijay and there was Maan, who apparently had a business meeting or so he says. So yeah he then came over and we had a ball of a time, Vijay was there too but being the boring old him. Gosh I miss Maan. It's been almost a month and I've scheduled Geet into the clinic three times already. I know I'm taking advantage of the situation but who wouldn't? I want him and fast.

'Same here' he replied back, oh this was going to be fun. My plan is right on track, University lovers will unite and there's nothing Geet or anyone can do about it. I laughed feeling anxious and excited at the same time. Geet was having his baby, at least she got something of him while I get him whole, HAHAHAHA.

Note: There would be more times since things got out of hand, very long part which I'm trying to shorten.

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Mission Twist the Ex (2b)


'Maan's cheating on Geet' Deepika noted on the chart in bold. If anything Geet knew Maan was up to no good after last night's text. The gall of that man, chi. He was cheating while she's sustaining his baby. Some people are so inconsiderate, well make that some husbands!

'Are you sure it's not Pari?' Pinky stated still hating the fact that Pari dated Adi once upon a time in college. Unlike Maan who dated many females afterwards, Adi had only the one, hence Pinky hated Pari's guts. Not that she wanted Adi to date the world but Pari was her only competitor. So in the end Geet gave up and offered the hand of friendship while Pinky cursed her husband Adi for lying to her and trying to get rid of his Ex by making up a story about soul mates.

'Please like is if I would, Karan would sulk to death. Plus I'm loyal unlike Pinky here' Pari would have continued with the ITS YOU game but seeing Geet wail she stopped. Geet looked like an avalanche just hit her. Make that a double-decker-topped-with-fire avalanche, which would realistically melt much like Geet's meltdown.

'I just can't believe his doing this to me when I'm carrying our baby' she cried louder, thankfully it was only the girls at home. Dadi was at a friends while the Senior Mr and Mrs Khurrana were out somewhere, god knows and frankly speaking Geet didn't care at this moment in time when her world is being consumed by darkness, by Sameera, her doctor. Who does that? Isn't Samwitch, that's what they called her for creating friction between a man and his wife. More importantly between Geet and Maan. Isn't it so cool, SAM-WITCH? Yeah so isn't she breaking the laws of life, Doctors are not meant to get married. Isn't there rules about patient-doctor confidentiality? Doctors are always supposed to wear white and live in the hospital like they have no life, exactly like nuns. Didn't they swear to secrecy or take an oath never to have an affair with the patient's husband. DOCTORS are... Oh what the hell Geet's life is completely and utterly messed up, like officially.

'Babes don't worry we'll crack him one' Pari jumped and for the first time Pinky agreed while Anni looked worried, she didn't want her brother dead. Now did she?

'I know my uncle is a detective, why don't we hire him? If Maan is playing dirty which I doubt he is, we can nab him with proof' Deepika the only one with a brain suggested as the girls cheered finally finding a plan to catch the criminal along with the evidence.

After a week Geet found herself in front of a three storey building located in the dark alleyways of an uncovered area. It looked like the hangout for detectives, dark and unsuspicious. Honestly it seemed more like the hideout for druggies and criminals but Geet was never good at Geography nor History. Deepika being the wise one, knocked CODE RED, 3 knocks followed by 2 claps then 2 knocks, which apparently is the sign of a cheating husband investigation.

'Deepika is so smart, isn't she' Geet questioned aloud to Anni who stood at the side panicking.

'She's pregnant like me but her husband doesn't go looking for new fishes' Geet broke down the next second

'Wait his not searching for new fishes, his after an old one' Geet cried louder wanting to collapse into a pool of emotion. Geet's been crying for the last few days ever since Maan's took off on a last minute business trip. Trip to hell that is, of course his off cruising with Sam. Geet was certain of that and that's why she was here, finally finding the courage to spy on her one but unfaithful husband.

'Why can't I ask daddy to do this?' Geet asked entering a shabby office. It was the crime of the century, her being the great Geet Handa erm Khuranna, a fashion phenomenal was sitting on a worn out old chair. All this for a deceitful husband! Why was life so unfair?

'Hello how can we help you?' the receptionist greeted, smiling at the trio of women

'Can you inform Jugnu Mama that we have a Code Red here' Deepika spoke with power, again exemplifying her intelligent which both Geet and Anni were proud of.


'Ok love we'll get started right away, Lucky' the chubby old man shouted and in entered a lanky pimpled faced boy, no older than 17.

'Here is the target, follow him and catch him doing his business' he instructed the young lad making Geet queasy. This was wrong, shouldn't she just question Maan about it rather than planting spies behind him.

'You're doing the right thing love, he'll just weasel out like they all do. Believe me it's at this time that most men play around' he advised looking at her fat stomach while Geet wept silently. Why why o why did Maan need to do this? Weren't they happy?

'Don't worry we'll nab him'

'Are you sure his wrong?' Geet questioned a final time, somewhere still having faith in her husband but more so on the wedding vows.

'I experience in this type of stuff, it's clear his having an affair my love. I wouldn't be surprised if his courting others too' Jugnu Mama boasted of his expertise

'Deepika while you're here do want to do a background check on your husband, we have an offer this week buy one investigation and get another half price' Jugnu mama tried to convince seeing the best opportunity to cash in but unfortunately Deepika refused

'What about you young lady, do you have someone in mind. You know it's only half price but it'll save you a lifetime of worry' he tried to sell but Geet pushed Anni out the door, Arjun was a good man not a lying cheating scum like her Maan. Oh crying seemed like the only option, but if he is cheating then so help him? She would make sure his penniless and on the street begging for mercy. If she found him doing the rats then she'd make sure he lived a hell of a life like she is now.

1 week later

'Baby seems quiet' Maan voiced seeing his wife awfully silent, he had seen her cry herself to sleep getting all the more confused

'Because baby's dad is a mingling wh**e' Geet wanted to say out loud instead she turned her shoulder and walked out with Maan following

'I said I'm sorry nah, things just got out of hand' he tried to explain for the 50th time, Maan poor fellow was out of touch for 4 days giving access to his imaginative wife to envision all sorts of things. Her being almost 8 months pregnant with a missing husband and an ex-rival didn't help his stance.

'Geet sorry' he pulled while she refused to look his way, the want to punch his face was running high in her veins

'I'm sorry' he repeated falling on his knees, this was Maan who knew how best to please his Geet

'Baby missed you' she cried silencing her suspicion and giving into her heart. Last week was like hell and back for her, images of Maan and Samwitch left her withering in both physical and mental pain.

'Promise me you'd never leave again' Geet cried into his chest forcing Maan to tighten his hug feeling miserable for making her cry. His wife was crazy but his only and real love.


'Hello... hello Mrs Khuranna are you there' came the whisper, it was 1am and a sleeping Geet was greeted by silent hushes

'Yes ... ahaa... ok... tomorrow at 11am is fine...hmmm' this wasn't her normal self, but what else would you expect at this hour when the spy that was hired confirms her suspicion. She returned to bed silently with the urge to kill Maan who slept peacefully while she raved with annoyance. Maan was cheating on her, and there was proof this time. Geet spent the whole night in the study wanting to ignore Maan or else the chances of prison life was high and Geet did not wear stripy clothing, which was a fashion disaster Geet was not willing to make. There should be laws on these kind of stuff, a cheating man should be sentenced to death. However a man cheating on his pregnant wife should be thrown in a pit of snake and she should know after all she is a law abiding citizen.

How dare he? How bloody dare he? Minutes were spent in pity but hours on rage. Maan was totally a dead man and Samwitch is as good as buried. With the morning sun came a strong crave to suck on Maan's blood, in true vampire style.



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A lovers show-down (2c)


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'Geet we can go back, if you like' Pinky encouraged seeing the red bulging eyes, the worn face and the sad excuse of a woman who stood up looking nothing like their Geet. Pari, Anni and Deepika had also accompanied wanting to aid their dear friend and already making plans to kill Maan and crucify Samwitch.

'There you go love, my best man's work' Jugnu mama passed over a big A4 envelope to Geet

'Take your time love' he encouraged to a shaking Geet, everything she worked for lay in her hands now. Either she'll die out of happiness or out of pain

'I'm afraid my allies prove that his been cheating for a while, he even has a two year old' Jugnu mama gloated like a true detective

'That's not him' Pari shrieked looking over Geet's shoulder the second she pulled out the pictures

'I see this all the time love, people get a bit delirious but I can assure you that's him' Jugnu mama kept going while the girls looked at one another

'Mama it's not him' Deepika urged seeing Geet's raging eyes

'Of course it's him, I can spot a cheat when I see one young woman' he raved not paying much attention to his angry audience

'HIS MY HUSBAND AND THAT'S MY SON WITH ME' Pinky screamed having heard enough
'What his not your husband' Jugnu mama pulled the photographs to have look
'Lucky' he screamed and in walked the same 17 year old, the so-called-best-man-in-the-field
'That's your professional spy' Anni uttered shocked to the core
'Let's go Geet, this man is a phoney' Pari added uncaring of the fact that Jugnu mama had now started slapping the boy who cried out daddy

The wife

'Geet his not having an affair, it's all in the head' Deepika tried to persuade while driving back to the Khuranna household, next moment the girls all agreed that Maan cheating of Geet was impossible next to human's living in the jungle, which frankly speaking not going happen. Wait didn't 'I'm a Celebrity get me outta here' happen like every year! So realistically Maan can cheat!

'Geet don't stress it's not good for the baby honey' Pinky rubbed my back trying to sooth the pain but what about the heart burn I felt, my exploding heart


'Hahaha Maan you're too funny' the words hit me like an ice brick, what was that witch doing in our house. All the more, why was that bloody cow with my Maan? Running in I saw her hug Maan, she hugged Maan, SHE HUGGED MY MAAN.

'MAAN' I shouted, blood reaching the surface on her skin. To say I was angry would be an understatement. Men are not meant to hug women, isn't there laws on this kind of stuff. Men are not to speak to the opposite gender, period!

The husband

'Darling I was looking for you' oh boy I'm a dead man

'Were you now' I can just see her eyes rolling when she said that

'Woh Sam, I mean Sameera was in the area that's why she popped in to see how you're doing' I stammered seeing her heightening anger, what the hell did I do now? 'Think Maan think' I urged myself before running to our bedroom with an excuse of fetching a file, no I'm not a sissy but Geet was volcanic and her friends were hot lava, I was bound to get burnt.

The Ex

'Sorry honey I really didn't want you to see us like that' I faked sympathy trying to get the most of this situation. Gosh this is too much fun, the way Geet and her gangs head picked up was hilariously in sync.

'You mean we're thinking right' Pari confirmed while I nodded my head slyly, being a gynaecologist does come in handy at times making it so easy to read the minds of foolish women, but Geet beats the lot. She's practically read-proof. Boy does she wear her emotion on her sleeve

'How long?' I heard her ask, this is way too easy

'Honey please lovers like us don't have a timeline much like Dev and Paro, his my Paro; the one that was forced to marry but now his Dev is back'

'Dev's not back I dumped him, his a cheating mong like Maan' she cried slumping to the couch. Maybe somewhere deep down I did feel bad to see a pregnant woman breakdown but then again everything is fair in love and war

'She's lying Geet, bhai would never do that for Paro or Dev' Anni hugged Geet giving me the glares, she's such an idiot. How their siblings is beyond me? Maan is so so intelligent and Anni on the other hand is such a nut, make that a thick-skulled nut



'Look honey I'm sorry it has to be this way'

SMACK, before Samwitch could complete her sentence out came a hand and smashed her face in. So solid that she was sure a few bones were broken, Geet stood in front with rage-filled eyes and a scrunched nose.

'Get out before I kill you' Geet breathed fisting her hands seeing Maan walk down very elegantly, lucky him had he been anyway near her circumference a fist would have been plummeted his way too

'Sam where are you going' he casually started before a slap was thrown his way shocking all the other occupants in the hall. By now the senior Mr and Mrs Khuranna and Dadima were also there along with Geet's friend.

'Bhai don't you feel any shame' Anni said feeling disgusted by the man

'What have I done?' he questioned caressing his cheek but he immediately retracted seeing the reaction of the audience who seemed more like hooligans

'What have you done? WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?' Geet screamed at the top of her lungs forcing everyone to look beyond her rage, her hurt was at it's paramount

'Why don't you ask your parrot here, you cheating cow?' she thumped down on the sofa breaking into floods forcing Maan to run to her side

'What haven't I done for you, yet you do this to me' she cried pointing between Maan and Sam, according to Geet she was an ideal model of giving and taking. The perfect blend for a model wife, but Maan just went and ruined everything.

'Geet what are you saying baby' Maan tried only for Dadi to interrupt

'ARE YOU CHEATING ON HER AGAIN' Dadi was furious how could Maan do such a thing, was he not her grandson? She was an epitome of all things good, how could Maan not adopt some of that goodness

'AGAIN' the room erupted, while some where confused like Maan and his parents, the others were ready to attack with all guns blazing

'When and who dadi' Geet questioned no louder than a whisper, her trust; her sacrifice and her life all gone down the drain. Does that not sound like a 1990's heroin well so was Geet, a little too much on the dramatic side of things

'More important question how many dadi' Anni piped in, how could her brother be so low

'Shut up Anni, Geet I think Dadi's gone mad like totally senile' Maan jumped glaring at his dadi for hurting his pristine image, plus an over imaginative wife was much more harmful when pregnanted.

'Don't you dare Maan, take it back before I cut that throat' Dadi out outraged, how dare he call her mad and old

'Then you also take it back' Maan countered, how dare she call him a cheat; he was as loyal as a dove. Maybe even loyaler, wait is that even a word?


'Maan I think it's getting late' Sam quietly said trying to sneak away realising her folly, boy would this turn to an ugly trifle.

'NO TAKE YOUR PARROT WITH YOU' Geet shouted pushing Maan away

'Who the hell is this parrot' an exasperated Mr Khuranna intervened, this was untouched territory since he nor his wife hardly ever intruded but being confused in this situation left him with no other option

'Paro Maan and Dev is Samwitch' Pari and Pinky voiced resulting in a hoo-ha

'Geet it's not like that, Sam is just a friend and nothing more, I promise' he clutched his throat as if to say his truly honest mellowing down Geet's anger

'Sorry Sam I think it's the hormones' the next minute a cushion came flying down, how dare he accuse her hormones when its him to blame

'Now his even doing it before me' Geet wailed clutching her hurt tummy, maybe it's the baby's heart that was hurting along with hers. After all the Research suggest that the baby feels whatever the mother does and right now Geet was hurt beyond words.

'Darling please don't stress, Sam is nothing more than a friend' Maan ran to support his wife while Sam wilted in envy

'How can you say that, we're meant to be' Sameera finally shouted, anger getting the best of her stumping Maan into oblivion. Who had totally not seen this coming but before Geet could act Anni threw a punch. No one, absolutely no one makes Geet cry and gets away with it! At least not on her watch.

'Geet she's mad, I swear I only love you and want to be with only you' Maan persuaded cuddling his wife who looked like an avalanche hit her, wait it did by the name of Sam

'Miss Sameera Gupta get out before I call my security' Maan icy voice boomed scaring its occupants but Geet smiled broadly knowing this Ex was only a passing feather and to think her husband cheated. While everyone was getting ready to celebrate, a life-turning scream broke out of Geet

'Geet, Geet baby are you OK' Maan pestered seeing his beloved wife flushing

'I think the water just broke' her laboured breath got them into action

A little harmonious cry could be heard outside the room, it was a painful 5 hours. Maan created havoc outside while Geet hurled a tornado inside, poor staff members bared the brunt. Swiftly walking in Maan and family were welcomed to the sight of a small baby boy nestled to a tired Geet.

'Geet his so cute' both Dadi and Anni gushed while Pari, Pinky and Deepika stood at the threshold waiting to pick the baby forcing Maan to the back of the line

'urgh ladies his my baby and that's my wife, so if you don't mind'

'O how nice Maan, we would love tea' Geet chirpy voice watered down his enthusiasm, gosh she could be so mean at times

'GET OUT' Maan shouted making everyone run out while Geet giggled seeing her flustered husband, boy was this fun after nearly 9 months of pain and not to forget Samwitch, she finally had a chance to annoy her husband

'So you and Samwitch had nothing going on' she teared, 'post-partum depression' groaned Maan, he knew Geet would experience this as the doctors had advised beforehand but on the exact day. Gosh this was too much to handle

'Please baby don't insult my love'

'And promise you will never leave me and our baby'

'Of course darling' he took the oath to love her till the end of time, even if she's crazy but still it's his lovely wife

'and you admit that I'm the best and you're not' she continued making him pull out his hair, the gurgling of his baby boy stopped their interaction and the next minutes were spent in silence. This was their baby, their son. He looked so cute, big fat eyes; chubby cheeks; fairly long hair for a baby and absolutely the smallest thing they had ever seen since he was a few days premature. Soon the nurse came in to take the apple of their eye but both were too engrossed in their child to pay any attention to the third wheeler.

'Maan' came the surprised voice jolting Geet and Maan out of their admiration

'erm erm Neeta' came the perturbed answer and the next minute Maan ran out the room and out followed the objects that were placed nicely on the desk beside the hospital bed. Had Maan known he would be married to an over-imaginative Geet then he would have never bothered dating anyone. Boy o boy life as Maan Singh Khuranna was a pain especially since Geet had only been acquainted with only a tenth of the women involved in his life. Maybe they should shift house, no town, no no no country, maybe even planet. Running as far as possible Maan thought of ways to banish his Exes wanting to build a life free from shock. Was that even possible? Geet, my friends was an over-sensitive and over-imaginative child. Whereas Maan, poor fellow was questioning his entire existence. Right now he was meant to cooing over his baby rather than hiding from his wife. Life as Maan Singh Khuranna was most definitely a gruelling process especially with a jealous wife and a long list of Exes.


Note: I'm sorry I have an over-imaginative brain,this is a lousy creation and thank you for reading this crazy OS which i totally enjoyed writing, now you know where Geet gets herr drama from 😉

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Again sorry for the wait and tahnk you for the comments 😃



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wow another part that too for me im on clould nine :-D thankuuu
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its mindblowing update soph poor maan his ex girlfriends r everywhere even in hospital our sherni wake up seeing his hot ex upar se she is pregnant Geet name is better than sam i total agree with geet oh no really doubt annie is maan's sis always make matter worse hmm sam is very chalu she wants maan now me also want to kill her pari was so cute n sam total opposite cant wait to read next thnx 4 pm
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oh no geet abb kya hoga...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Fantastic Update

Geet and Maan goes to the clinic for Geet's six month appointment
and there the new doctor is Maan's ex wow he truly does have a lot of ex's and Geet has to
deal with it .
Maan and Sameera chatting away while Geet is getting annoyed why didn't she just walk out the
doctors room
now she has decided to hate Sameera good for Geet there will lots of fun involved while
she hates Sameera on the other hand it seems like Sameera has bad intentions and now she wants
Maan back lets see how that will work out
Annie giving Geet all wrong information
Sameera with her current boyfriend Vijay and they meet Maan all have fun at lunch
and this certainly makes Sameera more determined to get Maan

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