~Short story : My Dear Mr.Darcy ~ [Removed]

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Susmitha

@susm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

lovely update. maan loves geet. maaneet moments for stars n thinking as diamonds so cute.geet thinks she loves dev but lets think geet has crush on dev but think its love n geet effect by maan touch she has feeling for maan but think maan is her best friend n its wrong hope so. so dev love some one waiting for next.

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ReelyROSExx

@ReelyROSExx

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Great Update !!

so the story unfolds more ... Maan s in love with Geet

n has been living in the pain of knowing tht she loves his big brother for the past 8 years

loved Maan s n Geet s childhood scene ... the childhood innocence ... where we think everything possible

Haiyee... Maan s attitude 😳

is Geet the girl whom dev loves 😕

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! well written! Feeling 4 Maan! he loves Geet! bt she sees him as her bets friend! Geet loves Dev! Maan knows she loves Dev! n this hurts! n seems like Dev loves Geet?? update soon

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

I was so confused till now...but now things are clearer and m loving it...

Feeling maan's ache...geets nervousness and love...

Dev's anxiety

But m so sad for maan...thnx for the pm dear...

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Hey.. Beautiful update.. Also I read the other parts again and loved it after u edited... thank you so much for taking my suggestion coz ur a brilliant writer and I m loving this new style in ur writing evn more ... I wud love to catch up with this ff n am gonna be commenting regularly here😳

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

its heartbreaking to see that geet doesnt reciprocate maan's feelings and is in love with dev...but i feel still maan has chances to win her over, she gets affected by him.. and dev seems to be in love with curly haired mystery woman...hopefully its not geet...

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Nice update dear
maan is in love wit geet nd rembd their promise bt is also aware dat she is in love wit his bro dev nd nt him 😭
geets is affectd by maan bt best frnd thing is cmbg in btw
nd dev is in love wit sm curly hair gal nd plz its nt geet aare der r so many curly hair gals let dev fall 4 smone else geet is always 4 maan 😊
waitng 4 d nxt part dear update soon 😃

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

lovely update congo on new story its based on pride and prejeduice geet loves someone wonder who will it be

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

lovely update so geets bf elder bro is dev yaar to maan kahan hai and geet like dev what abt ur maanu yaar yre kaisa twist hai

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

lovely update so maan is geets bf and the most desirible man than dev he is diff a rebel by nature he attarcted a lot of female towards him but no one is good enough for him