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~Short story : My Dear Mr.Darcy ~ [Removed]- Page 7

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Lovely story. A new version of P&P. Very well twisted. Dev is Mr. D and Geet is Miss L who was in love with him for 8 years. Maan is bad boy loves geet.

Dev is in geet's heart but she feels something something when maan touches her.

Dev too loves some curly-long-hair-girl. So much wishing that gril should not be out geet.

Maan is opposite of 'mr perfect dev' but nobody tempts or seduce him easily. But he easily get seduced by geet's simple casual night dress.

Loved the writing style or story telling way for this story.

Update soon.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Thnx for the note

Come soon

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Beautiful story

Awesome updates. Didn't like Geet falling for Dev.

Waiting for next part

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

JUST READ THE STORY

LOVED THE NAME

SO MAAN AND GEET ARE BEST FRIENDS

BUT MAAN LOVES GEET, WHILE SHE LOVES DEV - HIS ELDER BROTHER

AND WHO DOES DEV LOVE - HOPE NOT GEET

MAAN IS GEET'S DARCY THOUGH SHE DOESNT KNOW IT YET

BUT ISNT 25 TOO OLD TO BE STILL STUDYING IN COLLEGE

SHOULDNT THEY HAVE FINISHED COLLEGE BY NOW

LOVED MAAN'S ENTRY

HE COMPARES ALL GIRLS WITH GEET AND FINDS THEM WANTING

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

I forgot about this one, but y did u stop this ff actually? It's also equally good as HKA .. Try n update this also na

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Wonderful tale!! Mr. Darcy has my heart.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Wow. It feels like I found a treasure girl. If you publish anytime I'm telling you I would be the happiest person alive. After all your stories are those which I would enjoy any day. The elements you include are my favorite and the way you're taking the story with it's simplicity makes me grin stupidly. Harley Davidson and Darcy! Oh my I am swooning