~Short story : My Dear Mr.Darcy ~ [Removed]

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Commelina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

If you want to be informed of the update add me to your buddy list and drop in a comment stating so.

With 3 chaps updated dear friends let me know if you want the story to continue.
I am quite nervous about Maan's entry. I hope it has come out well.
Thankyou for reading.

Edited by Commelina - 10 years ago

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Susmitha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

First thanks for PM. Coming to story it's Dev the amount of hike u gave I thought it's maan. But let's see who is Geet best friend n how will our maan introduce.

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Downhill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

simply superb
loved it
amazing entry of maan

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

hi thanks 4 da pm! splendid update! Fab intro of MSK! Poor lady cld nt tempt him! update soon! well written

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

so maan is geets best friend he is quiet intense liked the way he dismissed that girl lovely part thnx 4 pm

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Sudha

@babelicious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Very nice& fresh concept..but I feel u r addressing ur "friends" way too often while narrating ...

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spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Oh so we have our hero in the picture!

Interesting intro...

Hmm u know I'm one of those readers who very conveniently skip the character sketch n jump to the main story!😆

You've got a nice way to make us resd the cs as well👍🏼

So niw can we step into the story plz😳

Waiting for the next!

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

What an entry

thnx for ur reply...m not at all disappointed

I like it very much

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Commelina

@Commelina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ms.nautanki
Very nice& fresh concept..but I feel u r addressing ur "friends" way too often while narrating ...

I went back and read chapter 3 and i realized i had used it too many times so have edited it.

Thankyou so much for your honest feed back it allows me to improve myself.
Hope to see you here more often.

Edited by Commelina - 10 years ago