MG-SS~The Myth~UPDATED Pt 13/Pg 136/ 7 July .....new TRD added........ - Page 89

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesom update

i hate maan

geet ki shaadi kissi aur se krwa do

aur maan ko ehsaas dilayo usne kya khoya

idiot maan 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
geet nt feeling well in flight 😔
happy to see dat kabir will be there fr their help in new country
might be ...kabir had crush on daimaa 😉
i hate dis maan 😡
n hate maan n sam 😡
they both r enjoying their life happily ..n nt bothering about others
hope yash planning goes well
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful part
Loved it
Kabir and daima shared about their lifes and daima came to know about he is being single till now he told her they dont have to worry in canada as he can look after them but daima politely denied saying they can manage...
Othet side maan and sam enjoying their life as free birds...soon their wings gonn cut and they will fall on the ground with a jerk as yash stopped the source of money
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update looks like kabir and daimaa knew eachother well geet ws feeling sick so kabir gave her his saet which close to wr he could talk to daimaa abt their life geet accepted and left them to talk of thei old days they talked daimaa told him abt geet looks like kabir had feelings for farida but she isnt aware thats why he is still single here maan is felling guilty for crossing his limits with geet he is keeping his distance with sam which is making her mad he finally told her and apologised but she went mad with rage kissing him everywhere removing geets touch from his body when finally they crossed their limits and were lost in their world not knowing a storm was approachimg their way yash had freezed maans ac he wanted to trap him so that maan will contact him
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Posted: 10 years ago


😆😆

friends ... next update new trd per milega..
soch lo..😆
😃 finish it fast sweeties ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry to say you Babbie but I don't like Maan he has s## with her and then in the end with Geet...which I really hate

Maybe I'm not one for that story

Hate that kind of guy and. And can't accept as hero

Let see
Edited by sidlik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. Geet gave her sit to Kabir for freely talking with Farida and she shift to Kabir's place . Kabir has a soft corner for Farida I think he love her. Here Maan disclose to sam about his first night with Geet . Sam got angry and asked hw can he do that bcz he is only her. I don't like Sam and Maan's live in relation .
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update. Geet and Daima on their way to Canada and what a pleasant surprise that Daimaa and kabir met after a long time. maan is feelilng guilty but then again hes with Sam only.
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The Myth


The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 12



Part - 13

It is said that excess of everything is bad ... nd when anything crossed it's limit, it started hurting ,, excess faith or blind faith on their priest put Handas in a big pit of guilt ,, all wr sad nd ashamed ,,after reaching HP Mahi called d priest in Haweli he nd Rano wr burning in anger for making a wrong kundli , though they too wr equally wrong .. Why didn't they check their child's kundli ?

At 1st d pandit was shocked but then seeing d damage he played smart to save his skin nd put all blame on Pummy that it was she who gave him all info regarding baby's birth ,, Pummy became furious nd said that she gave him right info it was only his mistakes ,, all wr blaming each other nd Pandit said that why he cd do this wrong when he was saying right for other ,, there was no use of beating d line ,, d damage had done for ever nd they had to live with this guilt ,, d place where Geet nd Daimaa lived in HH was closed now nd only increasing their guilt when Mahi nd Rano looked at that side ,, Daimaa came for few min to take their remaining stuff but not Geet ,, after that there was no news from her side ,, they knew that she was living in OH with Daimaa like she was living here in HH alone ,, they didn't even have courage to talk Khuranas ,, talking to Geet was next to impossible,, now Geet went away very far from them .

After a long tiring journey d plane landed , but Geet's condition was bad ,, she didn't eat properly in plane nd bcoz of sickness nd tiredness she was down ,, their room was booked in hotel but Kabir was adamant to take them with him ,, Geet nd Daima refused but he didn't listen ,, Geet agreed on condition that they lived in his home only for 2-3 days nd then wd shift to their home when they'll get ,, Kabir agreed nd took them in his home which was quiet big nd beautiful ,, he was a dentist in a big hsptl nd earning well ,, after reaching home all slept to take proper rest ,, Daima nd Kabir was taking good care of Geet nd let her take full rest .

Next day was holiday nd Kabir planned to show d college nd d city to Daima nd Geet,, that was a good move ,, whole day they roam nd saw all d main things near her college , rly stn , bus stops ,banks , shops , he told them d working system nd d many more info ,, d day went well for next day Geet had to go by herself ,, she wanted to visit admine office of college ,, she had few phone numbers of Sr students which college provided her to take help ,, she called a student who was living in hostel nd cd help her to take out d info which she wanted .

Geet reached in college campus nd met with d guy ... Aditya Shergil ,, Adi(Aditya) was Canadian (mona)sikh boy ,, geet gave him her formal intro she was also from PB so mixed with him at once ,, she met with HOD nd completed few formalities ,,Adi was with her ,, she asked many things regarding college nd classes , study system ,, from where she cd get d study material ,, d guy showed her d college nd mainly their building where they had their classes nd other dept ,, then they went to canteen ,, had soft drinks nd started casual talks ,, now Geet asked what she want to know .. how many students from india joined in this yr ,, how cd she check that who came from where ? ,, Adi informed her nd told that there wr teams of Sr students who had to help d Jrs when they joined d college ,, it was streams wise like he was from finance nd she too so she got his No nd some others too of same stream ,, Geet knew that Maan was in mrktng so try to get info about mrktng students who join this yr,, Adi said that he cd ask about it from his friends ,, geet insisted nd he called one of his friend ,, there wr only 5 Ind students in mrktng stream this yr nd he told d name ,, nd there was Maan's name in that ...Bingo . she asked about Maan nd one more student that wr they living in hostel ? she got d shocking reply that one didn't come yet nd Maanveer Singh Khurana opt to live outside ,, playing with words nd showing to get d more info she asked that where she cn get a good place to live bcoz she was also living outside with her Daimaa nd preferred to live in that place where max of d students wr living ,, she was not alone here ,, Adi gave her d most possible areas name near d college where most of d students prefer to live nd how cd she get a place for her ,, that was enough info for her rest she wd planned to get his track .

She purchased a local sim nd a phone for her form d shop which was near college ,, Adi helped her nd told her what documents she needed to get d new sim card ,, all d outsider students purchased so it was not tough to get ,, she came back home nd decided to contact to property brokers to get a house for her , but 1st she had to know about his where about ,, to track him through GPRS she had to wait ,, new sim took few hrs for activation.

At night when she, Daima nd kabir went to sleep in their respective rooms Geet started her new phone nd set that ... dialled d required number nd d ring started going ,, she quickly checked d location ,, note down few things on ppr ,, for her dismay he didn't pick d call ,, she called again but d result was same , but d main thing she got ... location ,, she opened d map on her laptop,, zoomed that nd checked d proper place ,, her next action plan was set to visit that place .

Next day she went to that place nd find out few brokers office in mrkt ,, talk to them for a good flat for rent ,, they showed her few on laptop nd d location ,, Geet didn't know at what place Maan took his home/flat so with twisting d talk she had to ask from brokers too if they rented out flat to any Ind gye studied in management college in last month ,, 2-3 didn't come across any any Ind gye but to her luck next one was that ,, all's procedure was same Geet insisted him to show her d falt in same area bcoz that wd be helpful for her ,, broker showed few near by places but they wr not so close to that home ,, she asked about adjacent or in opposite side ,, they wr two but not exactly opposite ,, there was a 1st floor which was lil costly than others but quiet watchable ,, Geet selected in opposite row nd took time to show those flats next day to her Daimaa nd uncle ,, they agreed nd next day Geet brought Daimaa nd Kabir with her to show d flats ,, Kabir insisted to live in is house but Geet nd Daima politely refused ,, it was not good to burden him ,, he was already taking good care of them in this new place ,, daimaa nd Kabir liked d place ,, it was near to Geet's college ,, Geet choose d one nd locked that ,, she did d ppr formalities on Daimaa's name nd Kabir gave his witness ,, He was d V******** resident nd GC holder so it was easy for her ,, Geet's 2nd step had done ,, now she had to watch that what he was doing here from last month without any work nd study ?

Khuranas never talk to her about him in that one nd half month ,, after coming here they contact her once nd their talk was very formal ,, d week passed in formalities nd then she nd daimaa sifted in this home ,, Kabir was a big help ,, they settled in 2-3 days ,, Kabir was saying again nd again that he was going to miss them a lot bcoz their presence in his home made that alive nd he got a feel of family togetherness .

Geet nd daima stayed in Kabir home for a week ,, he didn't allow them to live in a hotel , he lived alone there ,, did all d work himself ,, only a helper came on Sunday for cleaning nd dusting d whole house ,, rest Kabir did ,, most of d ppl there did their work themselves ,, when Geet nd daimaa came daimaa cooked Ind food for all ,, Kabir insisted to cook Kashmiri dishes ,, Daimaa was a very good cook nd Kabir enjoyed d delicious food ,, if Geet wanted peeza , pasta or burgers Kabir made that for her ,, he was pampering her like his daughter ,, all had d gr8 time nd deffo Kabir was going to miss that ,, Geet too like him very much ,, she sensed that Kabir uncle had a spl feel nd respect for Daimaa bcoz she belonged to his childhood nd neighbor too ,,they talked about many ppls nd shared childhood memories related to their places nd teenage time ,, in an unknown place getting someone close like that gave an immense happiness ,, Geet nd daimaa took promise to Kabir that he wd spent weekend with them if he get time nd Kabir accepted .

D days sterted passing ,, Geet nd Daimaa's life came on track nd after a week Geet classes started ,, she nd daimaa noticed that her taste was changing , she was not digesting d food ,, as a Dr Kabir advised to eat light food bcoz d change of water troubling her stomach ,, Geet took d room of front whose balcony faced Maan's house ,, it was a cover balcony with tinted glass ,, Geet knowing took this room nd gen kept d blinds on ,, daimaa didn't know that Maan's was living in opposite side nd Geet hired this house after a big plan & search .

There Maan nd Sam came back after 3-4 days outing ,, they went to enjoye d free time before opening d college ,, both wr in V******** nearly 2 months nd only enjoying d time ,, explored many beautiful places , shopped , spent time in each other's arms nd living their life fully ,, this was d freedom nd happiness which both want for them ,, Sam sometime talked to her family but Maan only mailed to his to dad about his well being ,, he didn't get courage to talk directly to his family ,, he knew that he had hurt them ,, he was not able to reply their endless Qs , so using only mails to informed them that he was fine here , where as Yash only replied his 1st mail nd told him to talk after that Yash didn't reply his mails ,, not even other family members too .

Yash strictly ordered not to reply his mails ,, after passing more than a month this thing started pinching Maan ,, there was no direct communication between him nd his family .,, he didn't know what damage he had done nd what had happened behind his back ?


Precap ---- a shocked nd angered Geet ...


Part - 14

sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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