CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Great update was very nice and good to see Geet realizing her love for Maan. Finally she knows that it was her that Masn loved since childhood . Aid and Daadima to great helpers in making her understand her feelings for him. Have always loved the Dargah scene and the dupatta scene, was perfect in that setting. Thank you for giving us a couple more parts , will wait for the next update.
Thnx

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singh24

@singh24

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#442

hello Avi .. jhappiieess dear 🤗

how r u ..?

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#443

So finally love has knocked on Geet's heart's door. She found herself thinking about Maan and only him wherever she went. Office, Darji, Rajji and Adi all were hell bent on making her see what she was totally unaware of.

I liked how she was so trapped in this. Analized her feelings, gave thought to it, accepted her own jhalli-ness.

Best was Adi talking about Maan giving her hints. He even talked about him leaving cricket. It's like she finally saw the real Maan through Adi.

I just felt for Maan. The guy maybe egoist, proud, arrogant but he did loved Geet beyond anything. If this small separation gave Geet some space to think. Then it also helped Maan see where he went wrong. Time and again he kept assuming being in his self centered mode. But good thing is he has finally realized love can't be forced. One should give time. He is more strong than what I thought him to be. It was like both Maan n Geet's characters grew in this update. They were both immature but now they have grown up suddenly. One moment is enough to change everything and that is what happened with MG.

I loved seeing Geet miss Maan so much that she couldn't concentrate.

Loved the dargah scene so much. Dadima is best, her plans always work. Geet was so eager to meet Maan that she didn't have the patience to wait.

This time Maan didn't rush and I liked that. He waited for her to say and didn't assume anything in spite when he had read her eyes perfectly. Like a gentleman he decided to drop her. So sweet. He is selfish and selfless too.

The end was just awesome. Geet's indirect confession was innocent just like her.

So finally MG are together all thanks to dadima's plans.

Also thank you for considering our request and not ending CL so early. Loved the update so much.

-Sanjana!

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl
So finally love has knocked on Geet's heart's door. She found herself thinking about Maan and only him wherever she went. Office, Darji, Rajji and Adi all were hell bent on making her see what she was totally unaware of.

I liked how she was so trapped in this. Analized her feelings, gave thought to it, accepted her own jhalli-ness.

Best was Adi talking about Maan giving her hints. He even talked about him leaving cricket. It's like she finally saw the real Maan through Adi.

I just felt for Maan. The guy maybe egoist, proud, arrogant but he did loved Geet beyond anything. If this small separation gave Geet some space to think. Then it also helped Maan see where he went wrong. Time and again he kept assuming being in his self centered mode. But good thing is he has finally realized love can't be forced. One should give time. He is more strong than what I thought him to be. It was like both Maan n Geet's characters grew in this update. They were both immature but now they have grown up suddenly. One moment is enough to change everything and that is what happened with MG.

I loved seeing Geet miss Maan so much that she couldn't concentrate.

Loved the dargah scene so much. Dadima is best, her plans always work. Geet was so eager to meet Maan that she didn't have the patience to wait.

This time Maan didn't rush and I liked that. He waited for her to say and didn't assume anything in spite when he had read her eyes perfectly. Like a gentleman he decided to drop her. So sweet. He is selfish and selfless too.

The end was just awesome. Geet's indirect confession was innocent just like her.

So finally MG are together all thanks to dadima's plans.

Also thank you for considering our request and not ending CL so early. Loved the update so much.

-Sanjana!

Phew!😆

I can breathe again..

Thanks Sanjana😃

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC
What a banner 👏

Haina 😃

Lakshmi outdid herself...

I love the light pink tinge of first love.❤️

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Susmitha

@susm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Avi I commented on part 20 password please

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#447

Beautiful update. Finally all wait over for Maan as Geet realized her love for him and how he has been loving her from so many years. Loved their talk where Geet is complaining and he us enjoying her possessiveness.

Thanks for pm

Edited by fict - 10 years ago