CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#431

Nice update dear Mann is thinking that he really rush to take decisions that geet asked for some space and send that she won't love him
Geet is thinks how to know about Mann and adi appeared
Adi is very upset to see both of them like that so he came to geet and her to have coffee with him and told how Mann upbringing the KC
Finally Mann and geet are together and accept the love

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: spvd
Pm me the link for part 20... And the future ones too...

sent 😃

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GIRIJA M.KRISHNA

@girijamkrishna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#433

Thanks for Pm and UD , I read whole UD in one breadth as dargah seen with

confession is my favourite part, superb , and thanks for giving more UDs dear.

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#434

Superb part
geet missing maan badly.
finally geet realize her love 4 maan...dargah scene was so beautiful..lovd d last scene..geet confessing & d hug was so beautiful..cant wait 4 nxt

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Wonderful update..Dadi's plan to send Maan away was a hit as Geet started missing him and finally realised that she's in love with him.. Dargah scene was super with Geet's confession as its highlight.. Beautifully written Loved it. Thanks for the PM.

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yashvi

@--Yashvi--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#436

U know wen i started reading d part dere is a single thought in my mind dat dis will b d last chap n i was sad...man hi ni kr ra tha k chap finish hoe pr after reading d last line of urs adding d chap brought a full smile on my face..;) muahh to u yr...thnks for adding d chapters yr..

now coming to part it was so beautifully written yr..grt job..I am just speechless...
whloe part reminds d golden days of ghsp scene..:) luved d whole part...superb..schi btau to dont have a heart to say gud bye to dis story..:(

p.s. can u pls gimme d link of ur other stories..i wanna read dem..plss

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#437

What a banner 👏

Edited by _SharmeenLuvsGC - 10 years ago

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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Oh good! Now things r resolved between our bulldog majnu n jhalli laila ..ha ha

Reminded me of teri deewani episode of ghsp

Ek taraf devdas maan

Dusri taraf confused laila

N then our cupid aadi comes...ha ha

Powered by dadimaas plan n experience

Avi, So beautifully u hv described the reunion ! Ek hug to banta hai bf gf ke naam per...ha ha

I m dieing to read...continue soon avi...luv u

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#439

Awesome, Mind Blowing, Superb, Januable Update Avi Janemann 😳😃

Finally dadimaa the great ka plan successful hogya 😎

Maan in mumbai n reminding old times and Geet in office missing Maanu 😃

Adi kamina bhi kaam agaya 😆

He's missing Maan's bulldogness, actually we all were 😆

Chalo shukar hai Geet asked abt love triangle of Maan,Pinky n Adi 😆

Maan Singh Khurana ko mera Salaam 😆

He had done what she asked 😎

Maan left cricket bcs he blames himself for his parents death 😲

I just hope Geet dobara match start karwa de 😉😃

Haaye Teri Dewani

These pics literally took my jaan 😃😳

He took her home and gave dadimaa her halwa 😃

Loved the way Geet showed her authorities on Maan.. haq jama ke sawal kiye 😃

Fianlly Maan ka thoda sa sabar rung laaya 😆

Bulldog is in full form again 😆

"Boyfriend girlfriend ki khushi mein ek hug toh honi chahiye, right?"

willingly Geet hugged him

I just LOVE this chapter 😃

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#440

hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful amazing update! lovely banner! superbly written! Is this defn the last part?? Geet misses Maan! Poor soul is confused! Maan thinks abt! he realizes wt he did wrong bt will wait 4 his love! Adi cannot see them like this! Adi talaks 2 Geet n reveals abt Maan n his life! he stopped playing cricket after his parents died! Geet realizes she loves Maan! Love the pride n prejudice analysis! Love dadi - her planned worked! Adi is a wonderful friend! Maan is coming back! Geet happy! she goes 2 meet him at the dargah! fab pics! Geet questions him y he went so long no calls etc! Maan wants 2 kwn wt is in her mind! Boyfriend n girlfriend! Maan ecstatic! she reveals her feelings! update soon👏😊