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CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93- Page 71

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#701

Ch 19

He is a bull dog alright, a bulldog in heat with a one track mind😆

But sadly enough they are on two completely different tracks

I don't know about conventional but it these two will surely lead a very interesting life together😉

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Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#702

Ch 20

Beautifully done Avi.👏

This story has always been a bit out of the norm and Geet's reaction fitted in perfectly with the rest of the story. I loved the fact that she did not automatically consider herself in love as soon as he confessed. Her mind is in chaos with all the things happening around her and once the confusion dissipates she will find the answer that she is unconsciously seeking within herself.

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#703

Ch 21

The arrogance is humbled down, the pride set away, the blindfolds of prejudice have been stripped away from the eyes and all we are are left with is one purer emotion...Love so much pure unadulterated love

Dargah felt like the most appropriate place for a new blessed beginning.

😳😳

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#704

Comedy is absolutely your forte babe. My tears of hilarity bear witness to that undeniable fact.

What a crazy this was Avi.

I enjoyed it all the more as I read the whole thing together. 😃

Ok coming to the final chapter

The award for the best couple in this story goes to the pillow and the pillow😆

The award for the best dialogue in this story goes to the pillow.

All was quiet except a few sounds which he could not hear because of the cotton in his ears.🤣

The most wonderful phase of a relationship the newly discovering stage. You have brought it to light beautifully in this final chapter😳

Aai shappat maza aa gaya Avi.

So glad you tried this flavor of comedy on for size Avi. It suited you perfectly.🤗

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dqno1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: Susegad
Ch 21
The arrogance is humbled down, the pride set away, the blindfolds of prejudice have been stripped away from the eyes and all we are are left with is one purer emotion...Love so much pure unadulterated love

Dargah felt like the most appropriate place for a new blessed beginning.

😳😳

the incomparable Mr. Darcy 😳 a love forever ❤️

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#706

Originally posted by: Susegad
Comedy is absolutely your forte babe. My tears of hilarity bear witness to that undeniable fact.
What a crazy this was Avi.
I enjoyed it all the more as I read the whole thing together.😃

Ok coming to the final chapter

The award for the best couple in this story goes to the pillow and the pillow😆

The award for the best dialogue in this story goes to the pillow.

All was quiet except a few sounds which he could not hear because of the cotton in his ears.🤣

The most wonderful phase of a relationship the newly discovering stage. You have brought it to light beautifully in this final chapter😳

Aai shappat maza aa gaya Avi.

So glad you tried this flavor of comedy on for size Avi. It suited you perfectly.🤗

Shukriya meherbani 😃

Your praise has gone straight to my head 😆

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Krupa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#707

I was reading this story but couldnt complain due to personal problems but still busy behind health problem so i need to read again i kept on hold because dont want to read again.